I have to be honest, I liked the first part of this story, but the second part is just awful. It makes no sense, is contrived beyond belief, and poorly written, to boot. The bear is just... there, with no real impact on anything. Why is he there, then, if the prince was going to fake his death and sneak in to kill the horse? Why did the horse force the king to impose such draconian (heh) laws, if he was going to go against them? He's in control of the king, he could have done whatever he wanted with the laws. Nothing about this makes sense, honestly, and that's the most frustrating part of this; if it were just porn without plot, that would be one thing, but MisterStallion clearly wants to make a compelling story, here, when it's not possible how he did it. Ugh...
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