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Wooow seriously? ANOTHER week's delay on whatever the hell this sudden unrelated potion sideplot is? What even is the comic at this point, it's taken a literal month to get from "oh look a potion" to "I wonder what the potion does". Is there even a plot anymore or is this being made up as it goes? And if so why the hell is it taking THIS LONG to even come up with an effect? Or is it deliberately being dragged out to pad the story? Page 1 was "I'm in the house where there's a potion.", Page 2 was "Oh look a potion, I'll drink it", page 3 was "Omg you drank the potion, something will happen", and page 4 is just "something will happen" again, but NOTHING IS EVEN HAPPENING?
Like, seriously, You could have done this in 1 page,
Panel 1: Hi Reiko, here's your photos, sure I'll hold your baby.
Panel 2: Man I'm thirsty though, there's a soda here, I'll drink that.
Panel 3: Quick is mid-drink, the girls rush in and go "NOOO DON'T DRINK IT!"
Panel 4: Quick looks worried as hell as the girls check the can and see it's half-full.
Panel 5/6, takes up 2 panel spaces on the bottom of the page: One girl is on call with her boss, who tells her if it's only half the can the effects will wear off in a weak or two, the other is consoling Quick as he looks terrified at what's going to happen to him.
There, done, now page 2 can be the actual effects, and not whatever the hell this Milk-a-dead-cow party is...
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