So many proportions are off by just enough in these first 2 pages to make me wish the author had spent a little more time checking to make sure his/her art was really good. The art is almost there but there are a lot of small things. >nick's huge forehead in first panels >long neck is long >that awkward smirk at the rhino >tiger looks inbred >huge light grey part over judy's eyes
It's much better than anything i can or ever will do, yeah, and i am receiving it for free, but i feel the art could be made lot better than it is without putting in a bunch of extra work. Artist seems like he/she has a lot of potential for making solid looking comics. </autism>
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