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Honestly I like this one better as it doesn't make everyone out to be unlikable pieces of garbage.
I can get making characters that are bad people but making absolutely everyone unlikable is not a good thing as there are then no characters for the reader to attach to due to them all being repulsive.
Even then you can make a bad person likable. You can make a character that does awful, awful things and still make them enjoyable as a character. When you make a character a bad person you can make them fun and interesting still, when you make a character unlikable, people just won't like them.
This is kind of like making a cartoon character an annoying character stereotype. They are supposed to be annoying to the people in the show but if they are annoying the audience as well then you have fucked up.
Honestly past that the comics attempts to paint John, someone who tmk has previously been shown to have his whole family screwed around him right behind his back and even just in his face, in a negative light makes it feel more shitty. Not just because even if he did take the daughter and her cousin to do that and everything making it feel more like the actions of someone desperately trying to claw some good feelings back into his life, but it was done by one of the characters that was screwing with them in the first place and who was a grade A jackhole about it.
The wife at least showing some care here is nice honestly as unless her life is dedicated to screwing her husband over I don't even see why they would be together considering he was trying to do this kind of thing to begin with.
While the story really needed for porn a lot of the framework of what goes on in the comic is based around the story so it's kind of hard to separate.
Love the page with the house blowing up though lol
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