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>Grigori
This guy is capable of good. They've shown it in the past. And as much as I eagerly look forward to some Peg Pete porn, this comic has major flaws:
1. The cover page, full stop. Those proportions are horrendous, BUTTERFACES, and fuzzy details.
2. J. PEG. COMPRESSION. Good lord.
3. Various panels are set up strangely, possibly meant to be lazy as well. First page, third panel has WAY too much open space above every one. And the first half of page 7 is a clusterfuck on panel order.
4. All the women have the EXACT same body type and shape. No variance.
5. I'm almost positive there's tracing involved. That, I don't have a problem with. The issue here is that the artist is including too much detail in the art, likely from the traces. Look at Debbie's body in the lower right panel in page 3. It's basically a cartoon head on a human body.
It's a shame how this turned out, especially since Peg Pete (and Goof Troop) smut is scarce. And this is from a Patreon for fuck's sake.
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