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Normally I am okay with mind break and brain washing comics. However, the story here is a little far fetched. I mean As stated, Peppy is now the general, meaning this is far into the future, if we follow canon story lines, for Krystal to have been on the team long enough to have already been through the drafting process. Secondly, even if she would have to go through drafting, I doubt Fox would have let her go alone and would either fill out and turn in her information himself or ask Peppy to. Next, I doubt Krsytal's mind, being a strong telepath, would be so easily broken from what's been shown. Not only that, but for her to be so clueless is an insult to the character. I'm not discounting the story for what it is. It's alright, but I think more thought should have been put into it.
Edited at 2018/01/22 03:58:40
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