Are we missing a page? I know it goes from 24 to 25, so it doesn't look that way, but it still feels like we're missing something. Like it just jumped forward a little, or it skipped a scene. It goes from them orgasming and her not wearing any glasses, to her sitting there in her glasses holding a clipboard that she magically got from somewhere. There's no feeling of transition, or anything, it's just *there*.
Edited at 2018/01/27 10:47:11
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