Awesome, thanks for this. I went through your latest upload on ex-hentai and found the errors that kind of stick out and came up with (hopefully) appropriate tweaks. Overall, pretty good.
Pg3 of 27 The greatest and sexy demon lord of Valhalla. The great and sexy demon lord of Valhalla, or the great, sexy demon lord of Valhalla.
ââ¬Â¦Then the heroin (drug) Foxy Rena joined forcesââ¬Â¦ Then the ââ¬Ëheroineââ¬â¢ Foxy Rena joined forces
Pg5 Letââ¬â¢s take a time, Freya go rest for a little Letââ¬â¢s take some time off, Freya go rest for a little
Didnââ¬â¢t you decided not to use a strategy, Freya? Didnââ¬â¢t you ââ¬Ëdecideââ¬â¢ not to use a strategy, Freya?
Your girls are not tired after all this last fight? Your girls are not tired after the latest fight?
Pg11 I canââ¬â¢t believe I can get Odin-sama dick so deepââ¬Â¦ I canââ¬â¢t believe I can get Odin-samaââ¬â¢s dick so deepââ¬Â¦
Pg19 And thereââ¬â¢s another important thing we need to talk! And thereââ¬â¢s another important thing we need to talk about!
Pg24 Captainââ¬Â¦ How long does it gonna last? Captainââ¬Â¦ How long is it gonna last? or How long is this gonna last?
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