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Prophecy (Ongoing) Furrynomous 2018/08/02 13:33:20 No.1474788   
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by Viktria/Zummeng
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Prophecy (Ongoing) Furrynomous 2018/08/02 13:33:23 No.1474789
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>>1474788
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Prophecy (Ongoing) Furrynomous 2018/08/02 13:33:26 No.1474790
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>>1474788
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 08:56:32 No.1476431
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new pages are out, anyone willing to post any of them
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 10:01:47 No.1476441
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>>1476431
Why you can't? She posting it openly on FA.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 10:46:36 No.1476452
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 10:59:02 No.1476456
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https://www.furaffinity.net/view/27852429/
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 10:59:57 No.1476460
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 11:19:27 No.1476465
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>>1476456
I love her! She's so colorful and sexy.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 12:13:00 No.1476507
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>>1476452
>>1476456
>>1476460

i'm gonna take a wild guess here... Queen/goddess/oracle has a mark with a prophecy of a man who has the other half of the mark... when the two meet something glorious would happen... AAAnd i think that glorious thing would the birth of a 'saviour' ...
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Furrynomous 2018/08/06 13:00:14 No.1476530
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>>1476507
sounds like tetris sex.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/15 18:13:18 No.1481007
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>>1474790
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Furrynomous 2018/08/15 18:13:20 No.1481008
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>>1481007
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the tauren 2018/08/17 18:01:01 No.1481767
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the penis symbol tatoo is a key!!

and people cry of joy :o

wow unexpected scenario i like it!!!
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Furrynomous 2018/08/17 21:31:38 No.1481824
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Furrynomous 2018/08/17 22:43:31 No.1481845
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The key is pubes?
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 01:08:33 No.1481888
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More please, this is getting funny good - love the expressions.

THE KEY. <8'D
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 03:55:52 No.1481980
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>>1481845
Would you like to buy some?
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 04:49:18 No.1481996
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he's the keymaster. will you help him find the gatekeeper?
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 05:38:59 No.1482010
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>>1481845
No, it's a symbol.
The guy's symbol fits with someone else's symbol for some sort of prophetic bullshit.
The cover shows both symbols and how they fit together.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 14:37:09 No.1482265
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>>1482010
kinda like that and looking at it deeper into that its just like "really? Key and "hole"/"gate" using on a penis and virgina?"...like srsly...
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 15:38:14 No.1482323
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God I wish Zummeng'd go back to silent comics, they were so much better.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 17:52:15 No.1482448
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>>1482265
>>1482323
Eh, I know it's pretty basic but I think they do it well enough that it adds a bit more flavor.
I'd rather a decent vanilla ice cream than some failed attempt at a homemade sorbet.
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Furrynomous 2018/08/18 19:28:33 No.1482464
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>>1481008
maybe they need him to impregnate the snake girl in order to birth a messiah?
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Furrynomous 2018/08/19 01:12:53 No.1482542
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>>1482265
i think the idea came from here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PIwZVG5wMi8
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the tauren 2018/08/19 16:53:58 No.1482834
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a key and a lock it must open something

a door mmm gozer god from ghostbuster
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Furrynomous 2018/08/19 19:46:17 No.1482907
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>>1482265
Hmmmyeeeesss how dreadfully quaint. *swirls blood red wine in a golden goblet*

Why a talentless plebeian would write such tactless drivel is simply beyond me. *takes sip of wine (which is actually blood) and chuckles
contemptuously*

A furry aficionado such as myself has taste far too refined to entertain this buffoonery. *tips fedora and instantly teleports away leaving black feathers floating where he once stood*
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Furrynomous 2018/08/20 10:07:47 No.1483203
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Furrynomous 2018/08/20 12:42:13 No.1483287
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>>1482907
This didn't give me cancer. It gave it to the entire universe.

Edited at 2018/08/20 15:56:45
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Furrynomous 2018/08/27 09:35:54 No.1486137
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Furrynomous 2018/09/10 11:51:12 No.1492821
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Furrynomous 2018/09/10 11:51:14 No.1492822
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Furrynomous 2018/09/11 02:55:28 No.1493218
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I have the suspicion that it's not M/F.

Edited at 2018/09/11 06:52:35
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Furrynomous 2018/09/11 04:34:42 No.1493235
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>>1493218
Ebat, ti so slovarem chto-li perevodish?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/11 09:07:18 No.1493293
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Furrynomous 2018/09/11 18:02:50 No.1493441
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>>1493293
>Edited at 11/9/2018(Tue)06:52:35
That's better. And keep that picture for yourself.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/12 03:10:02 No.1493620
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>>1493218
Were these character sheets not enough for you to assume that it is?

>>1476456
>>1476460
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Furrynomous 2018/09/12 10:46:28 No.1493688
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>>1493293
>>1493441

What're you on about?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 10:22:20 No.1497813
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looks like the Keymaster has indeed finally found the Gatekeeper ;-)

also

bringing redemption to the whole of oasis, eh?

sure! of course! no pressure at all :-p
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 11:46:21 No.1497849
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>>1497737
>>1497742

Are there higher res versions of these pages?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 16:19:30 No.1498048
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Is it weird I like this snake empress more than the bee bitch from the last comic?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 16:37:05 No.1498055
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I'm waiting for him to reveal he's a eunuch and the kingdom is doomed.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 18:50:40 No.1498097
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>>1498055

I'm waiting for the fact that he's either gay or doesn't like fat chicks.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/24 22:57:01 No.1498155
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He gonna be a virgin
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Furrynomous 2018/09/25 00:13:47 No.1498176
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I wish she had a slimmer looking sister...
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Furrynomous 2018/09/25 07:42:50 No.1498267
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>>1498176

Not down with the thiccness? You philistines don't deserve perfect snek waifu.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/25 08:03:06 No.1498268
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Furrynomous 2018/09/25 14:05:28 No.1498350
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Furrynomous 2018/09/25 14:05:30 No.1498351
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>>1498350
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Furrynomous 2018/09/26 01:36:15 No.1498452
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And then they played checkers for the rest of the comic.
The End.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/26 11:37:26 No.1498574
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>>1498452
I would be happier with that outcome, it would be better than qt3.14 snek getting fucked some hippie looking slave.
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Saviour 2018/10/04 04:13:35 No.1501435
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Look, I'm helping!
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Furrynomous 2018/10/04 12:32:01 No.1501520
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>>1501435
Love the artwork (snake is fuckin' adorable) but man I really wish a lot of these artists who aren't native English speakers would seek a second opinion from someone to help reword their comics to sound more natural.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/04 12:56:47 No.1501532
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IJS I actually really like that Shen wasn't super hard immediately, it makes more sense for the story and adds a nice build-up reveal.
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Prokura 2018/10/04 16:15:27 No.1501602
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ah yes Capter 2 section 12 ...how to suck a Dick
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Furrynomous 2018/10/04 20:31:19 No.1501675
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>>1501602

From the Ye Old Book "How to have sex for beginners 101"
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Furrynomous 2018/10/05 21:09:49 No.1502080
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>>1476456

As much as I'm enjoying this comic for the life of me I don't understand why the snake has legs.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/05 22:01:23 No.1502111
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for the same reason the dog has thumbs
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Furrynomous 2018/10/05 22:38:05 No.1502136
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>>1501435
> Is literally "new in town"
> She explains about a prophecy they -CANT- full understand or read
> She shows him her sign to "tell" shes also the other half of the choosen one/ prophecy

> dont even EXPLAINS one bit of the prohecy or the PART they at least "understood"



> fuck it, lets have sex
okey.

Edited at 2018/10/05 22:40:41
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Furrynomous 2018/10/07 13:33:29 No.1502702
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>>1502136

Dude was a slave just days ago. If a big titty snake lady tells me I was free and wants to bone me, I'd probably roll with it, too.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/07 20:30:42 No.1502883
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>>1502080

Yeah I kinda wish it was a snake lady with no legs, but it's still good
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Furrynomous 2018/10/08 03:21:47 No.1503041
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>>1502702
some people can even paw off to a toaster.

To be honest, yes, i would do the same if this "prophecy" wouldnt BE a thing aka the "main part" or even TITLE of the story which is more or less just teased.

whats the prophecy? why they make out? why they got the signs? whats the "part" they understand and which part not? and the fuck WHY does it have to do with sex?

Maybe some people just wanna enjoy the comic as whole and not the "oh this is sexy" part coz for that, you can pretty much IGNORE all pages till maybe the last one if you only wanna "that stuff". Also we are talking about a comic from Zummeng...the artist who SHOULD explain it...

Edited at 2018/10/08 03:22:54
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Furrynomous 2018/10/08 07:58:47 No.1503075
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>>1501435
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Furrynomous 2018/10/08 08:42:14 No.1503081
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>>1503075
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Furrynomous 2018/10/08 09:16:40 No.1503088
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Snake waifu
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Furrynomous 2018/10/09 11:00:10 No.1503623
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>>1503075

That smile...

Yup, I'd die for that smile. I would dive head next to the cement to get a glimpse of that. This sole panel made me erect so fast my cock broke the sound barrier.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/09 20:59:55 No.1503782
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If Zaphira gets any more adorable, I think that I might die...
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Furrynomous 2018/10/09 22:46:53 No.1503818
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I love snake waifu! One detail I really enjoy is how her hood acts like “ears “ moving positions based on her mood
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Furrynomous 2018/10/10 01:26:32 No.1503861
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I want her~ like oh my god that snake waifu is so damn adorable and sexy *.*
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Furrynomous 2018/10/10 17:48:43 No.1504155
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>>1503075
"I have dreamed about having sex, my whole life!"

...literally everyone on this site, huehuehu-
Just me? Darn...
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Furrynomous 2018/10/10 18:46:31 No.1504174
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>>1504155
Sadly i would say every idiot here is just thinking with his DICK insteed of reading and enjoying the comic in total but only wanting to fap off.

unlike this guy. he as some legit questions i think really needs to be answerd...
>>1503041

Edited at 2018/10/10 18:47:08
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Furrynomous 2018/10/11 04:07:25 No.1504350
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>>1503075
I’m not even into reptiles, but I wouldn’t be able to deny her with a face like that. Holy shit, this artist is so good at drawing Fuckably cute.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/11 09:44:45 No.1504467
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>>1504174

I think that rarely anyone can appreciate good comic as well as ol' wanker does. You see, when you get sorta num for the sexual contect, and just for sex'n stuff, you tend to look for something more than that. Good story, nice facial expressions, well drawn comics, comics with deeper story and so on.

You had to be like... just found out that you can twist your dick until something comes out, to be like you said.

-different dude
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Furrynomous 2018/10/11 23:05:46 No.1504806
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to be honest, its rare that you get a good porn comic with a good story, something to keep you coming back for more other than fap material. Usually the end up as complete dumpster fires (Bunnielove), ego strokers (Jay Naylor), long predictable stories (Pleasurebonbon), or abominations of nature (Amanda on the farm). So its good to get a porn comic with likable characters a fun little premise and appealing sex.
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Guildarts 2018/10/15 03:40:37 No.1505980
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when more pages ?
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Furrynomous 2018/10/15 16:09:58 No.1506188
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Latest page fresh from fa
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Furrynomous 2018/10/16 00:39:22 No.1506443
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N U T

Edited at 2018/10/16 00:40:15
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Furrynomous 2018/10/16 22:49:11 No.1506711
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thicc snek much hotter than i was prepared for
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 08:32:03 No.1508585
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>>1506188
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 12:09:37 No.1508626
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>>1508585

Sweet fuck. I would wife this snek in a heartbeat.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 12:46:50 No.1508634
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>>1508626
agreed, she's adorable
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the tauren 2018/10/22 12:48:24 No.1508635
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people of sands i fucking the key!!!
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 17:16:25 No.1508702
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Okay thicc snake babe is such a sweetiepie, I don't blame the guy to finish this quick. Only downer of this would be if they would say
"Ok, the prophecy is fullfilled, we don't need you anymore! Back to slavery with ya'!" That would kill the mood (and the chances of round 2)
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 18:15:32 No.1508727
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In b4 they summon Zuul, and they have to fuck again to undo it.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 18:38:29 No.1508732
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Inb4 he bends her over the railing and then pounds her again because of that sweet snek ass calling to him.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/22 20:41:05 No.1508761
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>>1508585
Anyone else getting an uneasy feeling? The sex scene was abrupt, and the main conflict of the story hasn't emerged yet. Zaphira doesn't value her life beyond serving the prophecy because she hasn't been taught anything else. What if the prophecy requires something really bad to happen to her or Shen?
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Furrynomous 2018/10/24 08:07:03 No.1509231
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>>1508761
Or more like, "It must not just be sex, there's something deeper involved in it. The sex has to happen because of love" etc.
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>>1508585
New page

>>1509231
*Walter White's voice* You were goddamn right
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Furrynomous 2018/10/29 10:17:19 No.1511138
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3...2..1..
the reason she'll deduce is they used the wrong hole.
...wait for it!
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the tauren 2018/10/29 13:17:44 No.1511165
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yeah continue to try again i m sure the rain will come soon.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/29 18:25:32 No.1511271
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>>1511138
two bucks says the actual missing part is a kiss, but she is going to try several more sex things first.

That or maybe she needs to orgasm too, which would be more porny, but I am a sucker for the saccharine, and the kiss plays that up more
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Furrynomous 2018/10/29 19:07:01 No.1511286
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My guess is she was supposed to "bring the savior" or something, and she doesn't understand that she's about 9 months early to see any results. Birds and bees talk incoming.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/30 00:22:30 No.1511424
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Furrynomous 2018/10/30 02:21:16 No.1511458
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This snake is 100% wife material I swear. *.*
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Kajex Surnahm 2018/10/30 04:22:47 No.1511471
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>>1511458

It's the eyes and the smile. She's so fucking adorable. <3 I want everything to go right for her, and I don't wanna see her cry.
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Furrynomous 2018/10/30 08:48:44 No.1511516
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>>1511471
The Way she looks oh yea hella cute but the way she talks scares the ever living heck out of me.

Edited at 2018/10/30 08:49:40
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Furrynomous 2018/11/05 08:48:45 No.1513869
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new page up now, anyone willing to share?
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 00:47:30 No.1514216
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 01:05:49 No.1514218
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Oh my god I love this beautiful snake so damn much. *.* definitely wife material in every aspect.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 02:17:50 No.1514249
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>>1514216
Hnnngg
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 02:28:31 No.1514254
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>>1514216
improved version
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 04:04:03 No.1514270
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>>1514254

Edited at 2018/11/06 04:05:40
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 04:17:12 No.1514271
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The only thing that pains me with this story is the fact, that according to what Snek Waifu has been telling to Shen, she has been fucking other dudes in great numbers, to "practice". What is worse, that she is only learning now that sex can be enjoyed.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 06:40:01 No.1514303
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>>1514271

The never enjoying it due to being taught to get it over with is janked, but as far as the other men.... So fucking what????
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Kajex Surnahm 2018/11/06 06:42:51 No.1514304
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>>1514249

Why is snek so adorable and cute? She's sweet enough to merit a sign that says "warning: long exposure may cause diabeetus."
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 07:39:40 No.1514316
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likely because she wasn't into them, and did it out of obligation to learn how sex works.

What she needs is a night's worth of cuddles and kisses. She is too adorable
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 08:17:40 No.1514324
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Did I misunderstand? I thought she hasn't had sex before and was practising with toys D:
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 09:17:54 No.1514332
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The real page 17 has been leaked.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 10:01:37 No.1514367
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 10:44:54 No.1514376
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>>1514332
Heh, when you read the comics for the edits
(No harm no fowl)
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the tauren 2018/11/06 12:44:39 No.1514416
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and that why the red button was made.

so dont push it.

Edited at 2018/11/06 12:45:52
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Furrynomous 2018/11/06 17:22:31 No.1514480
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Stuck your dick in crazy, welp pay the price now!!
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JRH1 2018/11/12 16:33:49 No.1516713
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Nope, the one without the apocalypse is the real one.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/12 17:28:25 No.1516735
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>>1516713
Thanks Joshua, very cool.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/14 00:15:46 No.1517220
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the tauren 2018/11/14 18:44:10 No.1517558
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no but man just do it.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/15 11:35:40 No.1517792
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>>1517558
Just DO IT!
Make the prophecy come true!
Yesterday you said today, so just DO IT!!
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Furrynomous 2018/11/15 18:44:21 No.1517905
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JUST SHUT UP AND CUM IN THAT SNAKE PUSSY
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Furrynomous 2018/11/16 11:14:20 No.1518139
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Sooo. Am I to understand that the prophecy fortells the two finish fucking in a proper position, that something happens in the sky. Like, rain, or meteors, aliens coming down from the sky, or something?
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Furrynomous 2018/11/16 19:33:29 No.1518245
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>>1518139
Given the region, i wager this is some kinda rain-dance sorta thing. Since water is kinda a thing, for a place with such scarcity.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/22 02:44:29 No.1520074
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Any updates?
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Furrynomous 2018/11/22 22:50:55 No.1520295
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Furrynomous 2018/11/22 23:31:51 No.1520302
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Kind of agree with Shen in the last part there.. the cutesy airhead things kinda getting old now.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/23 00:42:26 No.1520316
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>>1520302
To be honest, the girl's been indoctrinated all her life into believing some prophecy. Can't really fault her for being so eager to see it become a reality, because then, it validates her existence according to all the bullshit she was spoon-fed by religious nuts.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/23 02:58:43 No.1520352
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>>1520302
>>1520316

Nothing says the prophecy is true or false. It gave no timeframe. "In a time of great need, the key will open the sacred lock and bring redemption" could mean a huge amount of things... it's a pretty vague prophecy...
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Furrynomous 2018/11/23 03:14:00 No.1520354
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Gonna hurt to see her heartbroken... Hopefully she doesn't assume that her life is meaningless, she's too pure ;w;
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Furrynomous 2018/11/24 01:34:17 No.1520643
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She probably has to fall in love or some such instead of just going through the mechanics of fucking. She's so focused on making the magic happen that it wont.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/24 02:49:57 No.1520670
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>>1520354
That would be the least of our worries. You know what these naive indoctrinated zealots usually turn into the moment they find out it's all been a lie, they turn into even more fanatical zealots that start murdering people n' shit.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/24 09:40:36 No.1520771
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That good job pat on the back....such an ego deflater lol
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Furrynomous 2018/11/24 11:09:01 No.1520792
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You gotta wait 9 months for it
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L 2018/11/26 05:28:31 No.1521418
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Betting she just goes, "... we'll just have to keep trying! :D"

Days upon days of poundin' dat thicc snake booty.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/26 08:46:20 No.1521443
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new page out now
anyone got it?
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Furrynomous 2018/11/28 09:51:58 No.1522173
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Yup, new page. Any kind soul mind uploading it?
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Furrynomous 2018/11/29 03:07:37 No.1522542
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>>1520295

I'm gonna laugh when we find out that she's confused and mixed up the words prophecy and pregnancy.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/29 14:04:39 No.1522699
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>>1522542
I have not for a moment thought of this myself, but now i'm thinking you're on to something.
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Furrynomous 2018/11/29 17:25:09 No.1522749
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>>1522542
Zephyra and Shen are the only ones in the entire kingdom that can get pregnant. It's a real Children Of Men situation.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 11:04:20 No.1524321
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>>1520295
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 11:21:01 No.1524323
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>>1524321
Here's page 21.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 11:25:00 No.1524327
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>>1524321
Here's page 21.

No, it is the 16th page, look down the page.

ok ok, my bad

Edited at 2018/12/03 12:17:46
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 11:44:30 No.1524330
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>>1524327
https://www.reddit.com/r/woosh/
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 11:50:52 No.1524332
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Snek wife is still cute but uhhh.... This is getting a bit old, now.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/03 18:41:16 No.1524409
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The joke here is fine... so long as he stops her on the next page to figure things out. If it just goes on repeat again it's gonna get old.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/04 03:41:20 No.1524548
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if you understand what I mean.

Edited at 2018/12/04 03:43:06
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unknown 2018/12/05 01:26:28 No.1524885
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Hmmm. I tink it is not "done" vaginal/anal, as the 'key' is ABOVE the 'lock' on the testament. My guess it has to be done oral with him on top ... OR ... oh no, NOT vore >=()

Edited at 2018/12/05 01:30:09
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Furrynomous 2018/12/05 09:12:01 No.1524967
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It'll be married missionary sex, lights off, under the covers, for the sake of procreation.

The most deviant of all attempts, and the very last one they'll try.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/05 09:15:20 No.1524968
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She's gone from cute to.. just getting annoying now x.x
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>>1524321

REAL page 21
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the tauren 2018/12/10 09:20:54 No.1526761
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test 1 fail test 2 fail test 3 connect your soul

how to connect your soul?

possible she have a wrong book :o.
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Kajex Surnahm 2018/12/10 09:47:38 No.1526764
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>>1526757

I feel bad for her. She's probably spent a part of her life being told that only fulfilling this prophecy will bring happiness to the point that she's become out of touch with normal social interaction.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/10 10:13:08 No.1526766
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>>1526757
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Furrynomous 2018/12/10 16:27:31 No.1526831
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Snek wife is precious and needs all the protection/love possibly given.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/10 21:14:06 No.1526900
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>>1526757
She read the prophecy wrong, it said connect our "Soles". The comic will now take a foot fetish turn!
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Furrynomous 2018/12/11 02:34:24 No.1526991
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>>1524323

lol why is this shitpost on fap mode XD
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Furrynomous 2018/12/11 03:21:45 No.1526998
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Connect your souls? ... Hmmm ... OH, I see!
Snake: "Would you excuse me for a moment?"
I hope she dresses in a ceremonial outfit for a wedding!
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Kajex Surnahm 2018/12/11 10:34:32 No.1527070
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Relevant!
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L 2018/12/11 17:33:20 No.1527162
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God damn best snek waifu ever created.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/11 18:43:08 No.1527176
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Snek waifu is the absolute best ever. *.*
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Furrynomous 2018/12/12 01:53:52 No.1527262
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I was getting the impression the prophecy was talking about their child bringing good fortune or whatever.
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Saviour 2018/12/12 04:48:13 No.1527289
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I can't wait until somebody rushes in and picks up a fuss about how detailed her toes are. ~I don't like toes! Ew! Cut her feet off!~

Her eyes are on point. Zummeng has nailed eyes.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/12 13:44:19 No.1527388
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then they lived happily ever after
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Furrynomous 2018/12/12 19:25:48 No.1527473
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I saw the above edit before the actual page and I laugh so hard, but seeing the actual page, it's even more awkward. Well done.
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Broh...look at this dude. Furrynomous 2018/12/14 11:39:40 No.1527895
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This comic had a real potential ... but this dude...this dude ruins it!. He looks like he's 50 - 60 years old. I feel sorry for cobra. in her place I would sentence him to death by hanging.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/14 17:46:39 No.1527951
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>>1527895

You do realize that he was a slave, right? You know, the type that doesn't get nourishment, and ends up looking older than they really are, you colossal dumbfuck assclown?
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Furrynomous 2018/12/14 18:55:43 No.1527964
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>>1527895

0/8. B8 harder next time m8.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/14 19:11:28 No.1527969
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>>1527951
"Many slaves who worked for temple estates lived under punitive conditions, but on average the Ancient Egyptian slave led a life
similar to a serf. They were capable of negotiating transactions and owning personal property"
> wiki/Slavery_in_ancient_Egypt
u sure , clown?

Edited at 2018/12/14 19:13:29
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Furrynomous 2018/12/14 21:08:55 No.1528012
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>>1527969

His previous 'owner' wasn't from Ancient Egypt tho, he's more like a Jesus-times arab
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Furrynomous 2018/12/15 10:35:11 No.1528141
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i dont know, i lik Shen's design. However i get more of a hippie vibe from him and i cant help but think of Shaggy talking when i see him. No offense to the artist, but thats what i feel.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/15 13:55:27 No.1528168
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>>1527951

I'm not disputing the fact that a lot of forms of ancient slavery were different from each other, nor questioning the authenticity of the Wikipedia page cited in a historical sense.

But the key factor here isn't historical accuracy anyways.

For the purposes of the story, this isn't ancient Egypt, it's what Zummeng knows about it; that's how it will play out in the story or with the character's backstories.

Most people are more familiar with the types seen in the Americas and the United States in the 17th to 19th century, which were often particularly brutal forms of chattel slavery.

And that's probably how it's going to be in this fictional world too, because of that, regardless of if it's anachronistic or not.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/16 10:17:56 No.1528335
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>>1527951

Well just to hone this in, I think this isn't egypt at all its his own fantasy race... but the guy is actually right, and the Pyramids were actually built by volunteers and engineers who worked on it since it ensured a proper burial nearby and it was a point of national pride to work on the project. Slaves didn't actually have much involvement with the pyramids and people weren't whipped like they show in dramatizations, it was a passion project of the people working for their living god in the form of the Pharoh, who would bless them with the reward of an afterlife.

Slaves had differing treatment across egypt, true, but there were some rights afforded to slaves universally. It wasn't a great existence seeing as you weren't free to make of your life what you will, but it wasn't as harsh as say... slavery in Rome, or even the USA. There would be those who slipped through the system of course and were treated like shit, but in general, Egypt was sort of like Byzantine in slavery where they had some rights and were working towards emancipation. Byzantine was different since almost all slaves were indentured servitude and worked off their debts in slavery and almost universally did receive wages that were, very small, but once freed were often very adept at their trade and would go on to be tradesmen. Except for farmers, farmers were just... an ever repeating cycle of debt lol.

Well, there you have it, I don't know if you care or not but I am delivering it! This is very obviously an egyptian inspired setting, but it is not egypt, it seems to be a general famine and hardship that will go on and help all citizens and slaves universally when these two meet. And one harsh reality of slavery that WAS universal, was that, when hardship hit (famine), they were the ones to suffer first. So... maybe the artist person here actually understands how slavery was in Egypt and is showing us a time of strife. Also these could have been prisoners of war, who were, often, lead in rope lead gangs like that. Normal slaves would never be transported like that unless they were violent or unruly... but something makes me think Shen isn't a national here, as they and his compatriots didn't seem to be locals? This guy doesn't even know this thiccass snek booty prophecy yet. I bet you "bonding their souls" means butt sex, or at least I hope so.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/16 23:19:15 No.1528539
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the prophecy will only be fulfilled when she cums.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/17 00:22:17 No.1528548
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>>1527895

>Not young enough

Calm down there Zaush.
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Furrynomous 2018/12/17 04:03:03 No.1528595
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"thud thud BAM"? Is she headbanging herself for reading the scroll wrong or is she going to get raped/killed? (oh no!)
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Furrynomous 2018/12/17 09:13:29 No.1528643
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>>1528595


I have come to the conclusion that when she loses her regal bearing that's been trained into her (as with the previous page) she's a total clumsy dorkwad.

I'm guessing the crashes and yells are Velma from Scooby-Doo-level clumsy staggering around and tripping over stuff
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Furrynomous 2018/12/18 17:28:15 No.1529199
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>>1528595
Pretty sure she's just a giant klutz and fell down the stairs in the dark without a torch, or stubbed her toe on something in said darkness.
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anything new? Furrynomous 2018/12/26 03:32:46 No.1531281
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Merry xmas btw
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Furrynomous 2018/12/26 06:11:41 No.1531316
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New page for y'all
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the tauren 2018/12/26 10:20:00 No.1531358
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omg so much noise ahhhhh!!!
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Furrynomous 2018/12/26 12:33:46 No.1531387
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AAAHHH
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Furrynomous 2018/12/26 18:49:57 No.1531533
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lil poke
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Furrynomous 2018/12/27 19:45:15 No.1531863
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He fucken got us, he FUCKEN got us!!
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Furrynomous 2018/12/28 08:44:42 No.1532030
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>>1531863
What is it?
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Furrynomous 2018/12/28 20:34:02 No.1532245
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>>1532030
the okay hand
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Furrynomous 2018/12/30 18:02:15 No.1532966
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>>1532245
It only counts if it's below the waist...
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 02:56:34 No.1533548
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Just went up.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/01/01 06:54:21 No.1533601
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Happy New Year, bitches! <3 <3 <3

Edited at 2019/01/01 08:52:24
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 08:57:28 No.1533668
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>>1533601
>Gift from The Water God
Hah, nice reference.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 11:09:34 No.1533706
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>>1533601
It's adventure not andventure
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 11:39:09 No.1533711
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ok if this "Prophecy" is just in her "fantasy" coz she read WAY to much romantic novals shes kinda losing her personality there and more reminds me on the side mission from Oblivion with the guy who got paranoid and thinks his neighbors wanna kill him coz this guy was reading way to many crime books...
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 11:44:05 No.1533715
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I think it's more that her whole life has been "You will meet X at some point on your life, and he will be your soul mate. Together, you'll start Y!" for this prophecy.

That may have lead her to loving romance novels and the like, and why she has a library full of them. She's using them as reference, since they match what her life has been; pre-determined. Moment she doesn't have an answer; she turns to a book. When she couldn't figure out how to 'join souls'; she went right for a romance novel about how two beings did that.
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the tauren 2019/01/01 12:29:17 No.1533733
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fiction omg!!

the soldiers take many years to find the key and they cry of hapiness.

ah son their life are ruined.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/01 18:29:25 No.1533843
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Melding souls, self-erotic delusion, over-fantasized romance about conjoining forces; I knew it, the entire story from here on out, is about cock transformation.

She's gonna turn into his cock and live happily ever after.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 02:02:43 No.1534019
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>>1533601
I am surprised that he can read. Was he not born a slave? Why would anyone bother to teach him to read?
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 03:29:00 No.1534071
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>>1534019
Ah! We are playing the Consistancy In A Furry Porn Comic game are we? My turn!
Why are the books writen in english and not in hyeroglyphs?
Why are they even books to begin with and not papyruses?
Why are they talking about prophecies without hearing the words of -Insert Deity-?
Why are they anthropomorphic animals and not Egyptian people?
How did they build secret doors in walls and why is there flying candles in there?
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/01/02 05:04:22 No.1534092
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>>1534019

Not every slave in history was illiterate, not when it's a skill that has value; and being born a slave doesn't necessarily preclude opportunities to become literate, either.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 07:54:58 No.1534116
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>>1534019
>Was he not born a slave?

second sentence on the very first page:

>Men and women from all around the world. Once honorable warriors, artists...

He's either a prisoner of war or a captured civilian. Unpaid debts or crime are also possibilities.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 16:12:50 No.1534255
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>>1534071
why does only females have panty liners? my genitals are also dirty.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 16:27:43 No.1534260
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>>1534019

Slaves in, especially Egypt, were often taught to read so they could properly procure goods for their house or just function the best they can for their house. Egyptians would actually have directions written down for labourers and warning signs etc... so almost everyone knew how to read a little bit actually. Laborers only needed to know certain and specific phrases and couldn't read a book or scrip really, but they'd be taught to read what they needed to read and its not hard to learn to read of course, it was up to the slave or person in general to put in the effort back then. So Shen could have just put in the effort to continue learning.

Now if we go to Byzantine, literacy among slaves was shockingly high. I've read figures as high of almost a third of slaves were literate in Byzantine, but that was largely due to the fact slaves were almost exclusively indentured persons that were working towards redemption and paying off their debts.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 19:30:33 No.1534309
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I like the direction this is taking.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 19:59:25 No.1534319
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>>1534299
>came here to jack off
>actual cute story
Only the yiff community can make me turn from horny and bored to looking forward for the relationship between the characters without ruining the balance between wank material and wholesome enjoyment.

Almost like yiff is ironically more human than vanilla porn 🤔
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Furrynomous 2019/01/02 23:52:37 No.1534417
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>>1534299
So is there an actual prophecy at all, or is it something that her mind concocted out of sheer, desperate loneliness?
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Furrynomous 2019/01/03 05:44:54 No.1534465
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>>1534417
There likely is an actual prophecy, and she was the first one to be discovered, but was never told how it needed to happen, or even what takes place when it does.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/03 09:06:11 No.1534525
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I'm pretty sure it's gonna be revealed that the prophecy was that they needed to fall in love, and the reason the sex didn't work is because they weren't in love yet.
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Furrynomous Furrynomous 2019/01/03 11:43:15 No.1534563
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And this is why we have the unknown blue/yellow voice over all the time! He is telling his story to her and the prophecy is just kissing and hugging! JUST … DO ... IT!
I can't bear her tears!
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Furrynomous 2019/01/04 08:57:45 No.1534909
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>>1534563
I figured they were telling their story to their kids, glossing over the gratuitous sex scenes.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/04 20:26:43 No.1535043
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>>1534525
I'm guessing the same thing, hence all the romance novels.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/10 02:34:00 No.1537256
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Having trouble enjoying this because of the depressing way it started, describing the suffering slaves have to endure.

How am I now supposed to sympathize and feel sorry for a monarch who allows that to happen?
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Furrynomous 2019/01/10 02:43:45 No.1537260
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>>1537256
If the prophecy is that a slave will be the one to fulfill the prophecy, it's going to be tough to do if there's no slaves. Apparently slaves in ancient Egypt were the equivalent of serfs. There's a bunch of information here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slavery_in_ancient_Egypt

Or, ancient societies were based on slavery, and to the people who weren't slaves, it was a perfectly normal thing. It might just not have occurred to them that slavery is bad. Look at modern society. Even when it was shown to be bad, people still fought to keep slavery a thing. Some countries still do it, even against international pressure to stop it.

Slavery isn't right, but there's loads of reasons why the story still has them.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/10 20:52:50 No.1537546
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>>1537260
Yeah, it shows that while the slaves are worked into an early grave the queen locks herself in a closet to read romance novels all day.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/14 10:57:04 No.1539032
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Furrynomous 2019/01/14 21:21:55 No.1539209
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"Stop wasting time on obvious things."
You silly, sexy bimbo snek, he knows nothing of this prophecy. Lord she's cute.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/15 13:35:20 No.1539481
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Up
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Furrynomous 2019/01/15 14:09:22 No.1539502
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you know. I would be fine with them talking and getting into some background for a few pages. For once a artist that doesn't have a poor dialog.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/16 01:42:34 No.1539705
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Snake does not waste time on obvious things already ... they humped twice ...
Shen: 'Who are you besides the Ruler of Oasis?'
Snake: 'A ... mother?'
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Furrynomous 2019/01/18 00:29:18 No.1540550
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the dialogue is a little bit rough at times, but my god, I think this is my new favorite artist. This looks amazing.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/21 08:43:00 No.1541715
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"Oh my god I have no identity of my own. My life is a lie."
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Furrynomous 2019/01/21 09:22:27 No.1541732
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PROTECT THIS PRECIOUS SNEK WIFE TILL THE END OF TIME AND SPACE.
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Bad Love 2019/01/21 14:55:35 No.1541911
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If this comic goes in the direction where they start dating, I'd be totally okay with it.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/21 15:25:46 No.1541953
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Snake wife is precious and must be protected at all costs.
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"What is my purpose?" PreppyFinanceNerd 2019/01/21 16:16:19 No.1541973
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>>1541715

*Zaphira looks at hands*

"Oh my God"

Shen: "Yeah, welcome to the club, pal"
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Furrynomous 2019/01/21 22:46:31 No.1542148
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snek wife is all that is and all that shall be.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/23 02:33:43 No.1542742
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I want to see snek wifue getting fucked in the ass. But that isn't going to happen. And I accept that.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/24 04:46:45 No.1543214
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>>1542742
Well I dont.

So FUCK YOU SNAKE WAIFU WITH THE BIG DICK OF YOUR LOVER!
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Furrynomous 2019/01/28 08:23:48 No.1544894
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Who could say "No" to that look.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/01/28 08:46:19 No.1544909
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My motherfucking feels... ;_; That second-to-last panel is too much sad and cute for one sitting.

I hope Shen helps her smile again.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/28 10:09:25 No.1544930
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Nuuuuuuuu! must give sad snek waifu lots of kisses and cuddles
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Furrynomous 2019/01/29 00:59:02 No.1545146
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>>1544894

Roll the montage where they get to know each other, going to the local baseball match, eating hotdogs.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/29 10:53:04 No.1545228
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Finally a good comic with great dialog and back story.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/29 13:12:41 No.1545283
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Lots amazing how much I care about these characters than others where I could care less!
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Furrynomous 2019/01/30 12:26:45 No.1545638
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>>1545228
Good story yes, but I would actually list the dialogue as one of its weak points, due to the writer not being a native english speaker. It's fairly apparent, but nothing deal breaking.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/30 16:22:51 No.1545686
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>>1545638
Agreed. I like the gist of the story, but there's just so much chatter, and they repeat themselves a lot. Too much filler. Could've been better proofread, if it was at all.
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Furrynomous 2019/01/31 01:15:25 No.1545911
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>Yes Shen! Tell me more about myself, with every breath you drive me to strip away your flesh and connect your brain to you perrrrfect for of metal and circuitry!
>Your highness, you are scaring me.
>FEAR IS SOMETHING YOU HAVE YET TO BEAR WITNESS TO MY PUSSY WARMER! WE MUST FULFILL THE PROPHECY YOUR THOUGHTS WILL BE STRIPPED AWAY ON MY ASSEMBLY LINE AND WE WILL BECOME ONE! STOP RUNNING, THE PROPHECY WILL BE FULFILLED! YOUR DEATH NOW IS ONLY TEMPORARY!

Whenever they say that word I remember those star wars parody videos.

The plot is pretty predictable though. Its obvious that this is all to guide Zaphira to be a better ruler and improve the kingdom. Maybe some twist that Shen is actually some scholar or important person who sold himself into slavery after tatooing the magic symbol on his crotch specifically to meet the queen.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/02/04 04:00:06 No.1547568
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Eee he booped her snoot
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 14:11:20 No.1547712
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>>1547568

>snoot status: Booped
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 16:04:24 No.1547745
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yes
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 16:52:03 No.1547771
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This is what I subscribe to on u18 for. <3
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 17:49:42 No.1547786
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>>1547568

Latest 2 pages
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 17:49:45 No.1547787
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>>1547786
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 20:21:01 No.1547823
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Feed him slab of M E A T

The most romantic action you can do
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Furrynomous 2019/02/04 21:41:24 No.1547842
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>>1547823
If he was Goku, that is.
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Furrynomous Furrynomous 2019/02/05 01:48:50 No.1547880
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#1547745
That made me laugh. I'm having those flashbacks since snake started to about 'connect our souls'. I wouldn't be suprised if they will go like:
Snake: "I'm the Ruler, touch the darkness within me, marked one" Shen: *kneels and levels his character*
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Furrynomous 2019/02/12 11:57:34 No.1551146
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He guys, new page was uploaded?
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Furrynomous 2019/02/17 22:04:35 No.1553147
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moar?
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FF 2019/02/18 03:55:22 No.1553228
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Cute, silly, clumbsy snek waifu is the best waifu
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Furrynomous 2019/02/25 08:12:43 No.1556057
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The comic is updated publicly every Monday
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Furrynomous 2019/02/25 08:37:38 No.1556071
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And besides there are three more pages apart from today's
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Furrynomous 2019/02/25 08:39:35 No.1556073
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Here's the page today
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Furrynomous 2019/03/03 00:32:31 No.1558819
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Any news of the comic?
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Furrynomous 2019/03/04 02:57:48 No.1559359
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>>1558819
Zummeng/Viktria releases one every week or so. She (he?) is working on two different comic projects, and other bits of fanart.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/03/04 09:00:57 No.1559438
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Holy crap it just doesn't stop getting better. <3
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Furrynomous 2019/03/10 21:37:37 No.1562407
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im guessing this is how food porn came to be XD
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/03/11 05:20:08 No.1562544
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God damn, she's too cute. I think it's the eye-to-head ratio. <3
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Furrynomous 2019/03/11 06:14:32 No.1562553
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PROTECT THIS BEAUTIFUL SNEK WAIFU TILL THE END OF DAYS AND BEYOND.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/11 08:12:47 No.1562582
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>>1562544

I swear if he ends with, "... a tragic death!" Before killing over.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/11 15:47:53 No.1562697
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>>1562544
A MUSICAL PIECE, OF COURSE!
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Furrynomous 2019/03/13 02:32:48 No.1563255
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*guessing* ... a kiss?
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Furrynomous 2019/03/14 03:38:09 No.1563814
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>>1562697
"LET MY PEOPLE GO!"
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Furrynomous 2019/03/18 08:06:43 No.1565463
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Танцуют все
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/03/18 09:30:32 No.1565478
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Furrynomous 2019/03/18 12:28:10 No.1565514
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>>1562697
wow, you were pretty close.
>>1565463
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Furrynomous 2019/03/19 03:52:35 No.1565788
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>>1565463
TOLD YA!
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Furrynomous 2019/03/19 22:10:12 No.1566193
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>>1565463

We have gone full disney, I repeat we have gone full disney.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/03/25 12:19:09 No.1568173
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Furrynomous 2019/03/25 15:06:27 No.1568232
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as much as i enjoy"ed" the comic, it went somewhat overboard. i mean, lets go back to the first few pages:
- lets have sex!
- ok didnt work now you hump me!
- Sheat, none of this worked! google for help!

and now?
I mean if the first parts would have been happen "after" the stuff which actually happens "now" the comic might would have been much more enjoyable. as much as i like the style and the characters, if you look at the comic as whole from the beginning to now, it really went overboard.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/03/25 15:25:42 No.1568236
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>>1568232

Given the context of the plot, it makes sense.

1. Snek wants to bring on the rain.
2. Snek is taught that fucking will bring the rain.
3. Snek finds the "key," gets fucked.
4. Snek realizes there's more to the prophecy than just getting fucked by the "key."
5. Doggo realizes Snek is bound and defined by prophecy, so she doesn't get to have fun.
6. Doggo gets her to open up and fall in love.

No, it's not realistic- but why the hell do we want realistic? It wouldn't be a good story if it were mundane.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/25 17:28:18 No.1568265
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>>1568236
this whole thing gives me a beauty and the beast vipe, sorry if i say it that way but yea..."somehow"...
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Furrynomous 2019/03/25 21:15:02 No.1568365
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>>1568236
Really, its just weird because of the way the comic was laid out. Normally you would have character development and build up to the sex but we've ended up taking the exact opposite approach so its less of a build up and more of a build down. I imagine theres going to be more sex down the line, most likely romantic love filled sex, but as it currently is we're just at this stand still where the characters are being developed after we've already essentially hit a climax in the story. It just really fucks with the pace in general.

We're introduced to this lightning fast intro where we have a slave, he has a birthmark, recognized in the prophecy, taken to the city, cleaned up, given to the princess in the first 13 pages followed by 7 pages of sex. And now we're up to 16 pages of this slow paced development phase where the characters are actually being fleshed out. Its like 90 down the highway for a mile and now we're going 5 for the next mile.

Edited at 2019/03/25 21:19:19
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Furrynomous 2019/03/25 23:02:08 No.1568390
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>>1568232

It'S True What you say, the story has that abrupt lapse that with how beautiful we are getting from the story forget the initial sexual act, or at least part of it
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Furrynomous 2019/03/25 23:08:33 No.1568395
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Although It is also true that it is, at least those I think is a subversion of the typical history of meaningless sex that stands out for aesthetics and here I.
In which the initial sex that we saw was unsatisfactory which in history shows it as it is and now the characters evolve each other and little by little we will be coming to another sexual act which with everything seen above is more pleasant to see them do Because we know them.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/27 00:57:06 No.1568789
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>>1568395
>>1568390
>>1568390
>>1568365
>>1568265
>>1568236
>>1568232

I think its a failure in story structure. We don't have a story arc here and its has no climax or conflict now. Normally with a sex comic those things don't matter but now that the sex is done with we are stuck with this non-story. Its just weird now and the narration takes some of the steam out of it already.

They're trying to fall in love with eachother now, that's their goal? This sounds like an independant movie where it ends with the guy divorced, sitting on his bed in his underwear while reading a magazine.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/27 09:49:48 No.1568888
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>>1568789
That if it is a detail to emphasize, very nice everything but you are right with the problem of structure, as I said before, the beginning of the story where the sexual act is easy to erase by the abrupt cut of the situation
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Furrynomous 2019/03/27 18:27:40 No.1569012
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>>1568789
>>1568888

We can only evaluate structure when a comic is complete, because only then can we know what the cartoonist considered important.

After all, many stories might seem odd in structure as we read them, but a good ending can pull things together in ways we would not have anticipated.
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Furrynomous 2019/03/27 23:53:52 No.1569094
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>>1569012
I hadn't contemplated that, thanks for the tip.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/04/01 05:04:17 No.1570623
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Furrynomous 2019/04/01 23:30:12 No.1570907
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Ready the insulin, boys and girls. I have a feeling it's going to be diabetes-inducingly sweet.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/08 08:38:54 No.1573442
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Furrynomous 2019/04/08 10:46:46 No.1573465
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SNEKY HAND
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/04/08 12:23:09 No.1573484
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>>1573442

Y'know how Fabio Lanzoni is the cover model of romantic novels?

Shen is the fucking book. The word that makes every woman wet through wordplay.

Edited at 2019/04/08 12:24:04
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Furrynomous 2019/04/08 17:21:37 No.1573658
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>>1573442

I have the weirdest boner right now.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/08 17:47:37 No.1573663
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>Take notes boys!
>>1573442

Edited at 2019/04/09 10:43:55
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Furrynomous 2019/04/08 17:59:49 No.1573667
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With all the fetishy comics out there, or ones that rely on weird/specific kinks; this comic has got to be one that I truly enjoy. Romance is rarely portrayed, and if it is, there’s an odd kink behind it. My hats off to the artist for doing something that is sweet, endearing, and heart warming!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/09 10:30:16 No.1573928
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>>1573667

she writes the sweetest stories.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/10 10:43:09 No.1574422
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These are the most likeable characters in a furry comic I have seen in a long time. They are really sweet. Jasonfax and Kabier should take some notes.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/10 18:29:26 No.1574635
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>>1574422

Yeah, just putting this here...
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Furrynomous 2019/04/10 19:40:21 No.1574660
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>>1573442

Ah, the true secret of the prophecy is slipping a finger up her bum bum!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/10 20:57:30 No.1574668
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>>1574422
I think a lot of people can: Godai, Chalo, etc. I’ve grown to like these characters in the 20+ pages they’ve been in over the 400+ many of the other “characters “ have been in!
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Star 2019/04/10 21:13:26 No.1574671
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>>1573442

HE TOUCHED THE BUTT!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/11 01:42:24 No.1574739
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>>1574660
The way to her heart is through her ass.
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Furrynomous Furrynomous 2019/04/12 03:51:02 No.1575146
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"Use finger try but hole" ...
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Furrynomous 2019/04/12 09:24:05 No.1575255
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>>1575146
i guess only ds players will understand that...

Edited at 2019/04/12 09:24:32
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 08:12:17 No.1576726
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That unexpected
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 08:23:41 No.1576728
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>>1576723

He drowned in cleavage. She just regular drowned.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 09:23:22 No.1576743
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>>1576723

THESE DORKS
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 11:51:00 No.1576794
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One thing I love about Zumm; they do some of the most fucking wholesome stories and comics I've seen in the fandom. I just adore how they build characters x.x
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 17:35:09 No.1576963
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>>1576723

Why is the water brown?.. Why is the water brown!?
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 17:48:48 No.1576967
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Because water is clear and the stonework is brown.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/15 23:11:58 No.1577019
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>>1576794
I know right?! She doesn’t resort to bullshit fetishes, unlikable/shitty characters, or anything distasteful to tell a story. Plus the writing is good! A lot of (popular) artist should take notes from her!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/16 11:12:17 No.1577361
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>>1576723
Suddenly, it's an anime
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Furrynomous 2019/04/16 22:19:43 No.1577590
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>>1577019
Stop being being this much of a normie
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Furrynomous 2019/04/17 00:13:55 No.1577603
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>>1577590
heck i like this stuff too! How about this: they'll stop being such a normie once you stop being this much of a cunt.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/17 00:19:06 No.1577607
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>>1577590
Dude, im just saying that given all of the fetishy comics with weird premises and unlikeable characters, its refreshing to actually read one that doesnt use that stuff as a crutch and is actually charming. Thats all
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Furrynomous 2019/04/17 00:31:46 No.1577611
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>>1576963
Waters clear, the floor is brown
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Furrynomous 2019/04/18 09:29:25 No.1578256
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>>1577361

To Some extent it makes sense what you say because even in history structure sounds like an anime

THE structure for what you do not know its structure is formulated with two beginnings and then move to development and outcome.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/19 04:36:32 No.1578624
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>>1577607

>Dude, im just saying that given all of the fetishy comics with weird premises and unlikeable characters, its refreshing to actually read one that doesnt use that stuff as a crutch and is actually charming. Thats all

I agree. The characters are loveable and kind, something which is extremely hard to find these days in furry comics. These kinda stories usually revolved around self-centered, unlikeable assholes. It is even worse when it comes to gay comics. Those usually revolve around some meathead raping ultra-emotional, weirdly uptight femboys (who strangely enough also happen to dress like street hookers but have the prudity of a 19th century british upper class lady).

I hope that Viktria continues to do such characters.

Edited at 2019/04/19 04:39:49
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Furrynomous 2019/04/19 04:47:08 No.1578627
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>>1574422
>>1574668
>>1576794
>>1577607
>>1578624

great to see that you guys love the characters as well! there is hope for the fandom! people do like cute and loveable protagonists!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/19 13:44:56 No.1578762
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Most not to say that all Viktria comics are of that caliber in the characters which you are interested in them from greater to lesser extent
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Furrynomous 2019/04/20 00:55:34 No.1579057
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>>1578627

I don't really like the guy. He's a know it all. He comes off as a device for exposition and a sounding board for our snake. The cobra woman is nice in a Disney princess sort of way. One being annoying and the other being a diabetus risk is a league over the usual sex-offender level stuff.

I thonk the reason is that writing characters that aren't psychotic, retarded, or personal fantasies is actually hard. Hard enough that most people don't get close even with years of practice.
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plot twist maybe :O ZazaThedeer 2019/04/20 02:04:44 No.1579084
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Shens tattoo/birth mark washes off and he was faking the entire time to get close to the queen and kill her :O
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Spike 2019/04/20 03:57:20 No.1579116
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>>1579084
>>1492821
He already had a bath.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/20 05:24:18 No.1579131
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>>1578627

>I don't really like the guy. He's a know it all. He comes off as a device for exposition and a sounding board for our snake. The cobra woman is nice in a Disney princess sort of way. One being annoying and the other being a diabetus risk is a league over the usual sex-offender level stuff.

I know what you mean. Consensual sex does not seem to exist in furry comics. I mean the comic "Servants of the Serpents" by Kabier is literally a rape free-for-all. Everybody rapes everybody. Our comic here is consensual, which feels really refreshing.

>I thonk the reason is that writing characters that aren't psychotic, retarded, or personal fantasies is actually hard. Hard enough that most people don't get close even with years of practice.

I know what you mean. Almost all furry comics feature either unlikeable, anti-social assholes or actual psychopaths as main characters. I am bisexual and sometimes try to read some of the gay comics. Let`s just say uncomforting to say the least. They are usually about a muscular guy forcing himself on a girly guy. Basically the girly guy gets raped until he "starts to enjoy it". Just take a look at this comic panel: it literally shows a character who gets raped "starting to enjoy it".

Edited at 2019/04/20 05:30:10
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>>1578627
>>1579131
i think that you two are right. we all like these characters because they are pretty normal for furry standards and very likeable for furry standards. They are not psychotic or gang rapists.

How groundbreaking.

Seriously, what is it with furry comics and shitty writing?
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Furrynomous 2019/04/20 07:13:10 No.1579146
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>>1579132
Not sure , I’m guessing that many think everything will be forgiven as long as the overall comic is fap worthy, but in reality that only goes so far. It’s really telling how many popular/well known artist fail with making a character likeable, genuinely engaging, or...good. Examples include: most of Kadath’s characters, Jay naylors characters, the entire (sunny excluded) Las Lindas cast, Mastergodai’s character roster, and nearly every gay comic character created.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/20 08:23:34 No.1579158
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>>1579146

>Examples include: most of Kadath’s characters, Jay naylors characters, the entire (sunny excluded) Las Lindas cast, Mastergodai’s character roster, and nearly every gay comic character created.

I can only agree. Naylor is a very good example.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/20 17:34:53 No.1579301
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>>1579146
Kadath had some good shit going earlier on, to be fair. Then he discovered cuckolding and it was a nosedive from there.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/21 17:11:40 No.1579824
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>>1579146
I can agree with Kadath, and Mastergodai.

I can even agree that a great deal of Las Lindas cast is alright.

But Naylor? I haven't really read his Better Days stuff, but everything else I've read of his has been a massive turn off in terms of characterization.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/21 17:49:28 No.1579848
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Are you kidding me? Naylor is an example of good character writing? You literally can substitute any Naylor character for another in a story and totally not miss a beat or even notice the switch.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/04/21 17:56:19 No.1579852
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>>1579848

I think they meant that Naylor is a good example of an artist with poor character-building narratives.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/21 19:22:54 No.1579885
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>>1579852
Thanks you hit the nail on the head. The mentioned artist are ones that fail at making good or compelling characters.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/22 08:46:16 No.1580098
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>>1579848

Kajex Surnahm is right. Our point was that Naylor is incapable of writing even remotely sympathetic characters. All of his characters are either passive aggressive dicks or outright psychopaths (some are even flat-out serial killers).

Edited at 2019/04/22 08:46:48
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 02:59:37 No.1582710
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 08:38:26 No.1582760
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;___; I'm getting attached to these two so much at this point
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 12:20:00 No.1582820
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I came here for a quick fap....

ended out being touched right in the feels...

;-;
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 13:52:31 No.1582857
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Aww man, Shen gonna get so high on those venom kisses!
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 14:01:44 No.1582863
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think about how the comic began and how it is looking "now", it shouldnt be a porn comic at all. The story is sure nice and, after all, i can sure understand why they both made it (if even 2 times...) but looking how well designed the story is, looking back to the first few pages makes the sex pages and stuff look a bit cringy - IF you keep the full comic in mind to this point bcoz right now, they are only 2 things i can see it can go forward which is

- it will begin to rain after they fall in love which would sure fit.
- they will fuck, again. which would kinda ruin it after the story buildup.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 15:15:43 No.1582889
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If it was turned into a actual series... It wouldn't be a situation where rain fixes everything. Lots of places had plenty of water, good farm land and productive people... The issue is that everyone else not living in the good places is now looking to attack you to raid your supplies.

The comic would have to become about geopolitical management. Small scale, like spice and wolf, that can be fun and smart. Large scale? It's the goddamn queen and her consort. She basically just orders it done, and it'll be carried out.

Much better to keep the comics about their romance and relationship. The prophesy is best left as window dressing. In fact, it'd be better as a metaphor for Shen teaching her how to be worldly.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/29 15:28:20 No.1582897
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the thousand yard stare

...just kidding, it's awesome
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Furrynomous 2019/04/30 01:58:51 No.1583067
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>>1582710
>>1580065
>it doesn't matter that I lost my anal virginity to a stick then beaten with that same stick, or that I was flogged so hard my wings fell off... I used to have wings, they were nice. On the upside they gave me some of it, the only meat I've had in years up 'till now. Where was I? Oh yeah, then there was the time I was to be sacrificed to an unnamed dark god but they instead decided to sew the sole of my foot to the back of my head with dark magic and had me crawl around protecting the dark temple. I did that for a few years until I got sold again. My soul was switched with my siamese twin who I then was forced to consume. You would have liked him, he was funny. Then I was used for grain harvesting, it got much easier when we got tools. Then some savages kidnapped me to use me as a throwing rock tester. I don't remember much of those days because their aim got better.
>...What was I talking about again? Oh yeah, porking your cold snatch as a life goal while listening to your neurotic bleeting has made it all worth while. Seriously, its been like two hours since my ass was penetrated so this is like easy street for me.
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Furrynomous 2019/04/30 07:07:56 No.1583111
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>>1583067
Yeah, this is getting old. And awkward.
Here's hoping it will get better.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/05 18:28:34 No.1585537
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>>1583067
>>1583111
Fuck me, is there anyone on this hell-site that isn't a buzzkill?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/05 18:39:09 No.1585540
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>>1585537

Man, I'd still cuddle and marry the snek. Poor snek needs a cuddle every night.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 10:15:49 No.1585809
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>>1582863
>- it will begin to rain after they fall in love which would sure fit.
>- they will fuck, again. which would kinda ruin it after the story buildup.
She went with the "im in love now so fuck me" end. ...which, i say, pretty much throws the last view pages she was building up pretty much out of the window.

Edited at 2019/05/06 10:16:41
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 10:32:16 No.1585820
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Here we go again
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 11:35:22 No.1585833
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I appreciate that Shen is drawn with realistic proportions. Average cocks are better suited for marathon fucking anyway.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 11:53:18 No.1585834
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>>1585820

Just realized something... What if she finally fulfill the profecy because it isn't just "the woman with the keyhole must be fucked by the dude with the key" but "they must do it passionately and love eachother"?
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/05/06 12:14:23 No.1585842
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>>1585834

... You -just- came to that conclusion? It was pretty clear a few months ago.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 13:36:36 No.1585860
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>>1585834

Yeah well, I bet everyone already knew that. Art and characters are great, love this comic, but plot is about as subtle as a locomotive
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 17:19:42 No.1585919
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Don't they only know each other like two days? Them falling in love would have been believable after a few weeks, maybe a month, but after two days?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 18:13:13 No.1585935
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As far as I could follow it, they don't even know eachother for a full day yet.
This might be still the night of the day they met.
Noon - Banging, Prophecy failed
Afternoon - Bangin, Prophecy failed
Dusk - Secret Library
Night fall - Talking a lot about the Queens life
Late Night - Dinner, Dancing cute clumsyness at the pool and KISS

I don't think that's a bad thing tho, it's obviously an early civilzation, people were less picky about what they defined as "love". There were wars raised over youngsters running away with someone they met hours ago at a dinner party.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/06 18:54:31 No.1585953
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>>1585919

Agreed. I don't mind a love story, but there could have been a bit more 'time' spent for the characters to make their love feel more genuine. On another note: Shen feels a bit too one-note 'knight in shining armor', kind of character. Which seems to be partly because Zummy seems to want to get this comic done a bit faster (which would explain the slight dip in the visual quality). I wasn't expecting a dive into the moral and ethical issues of slavery, but there could have been more set up rather than a, "It's all in the past" hand wave. Especially glaring since we got a decent amount of information on Zaphira. Same can be said of basically every hardship Shen went through gets thrown out for a 'You're the best thing that's every happened to me', which is just lazy if you ask me.

Not a bad comic overall, I just wish some story beats weren't glossed over in lieu of moving things along so quickly.

>>1585935

>I don't think that's a bad thing tho, it's obviously an early civilzation, people were less picky about what they defined as "love". There were wars raised over youngsters running away with someone they met hours ago at a dinner party.

I understand what you mean; you see it in other works of fiction all the time. Though with that being said, serious infatuation and love are two different things. In this comic in particular, there needed to be a strong connection; hence the failed attempts early on. Love [realistically] takes time and that could have been illustrated better if it was more reasonably paced. I'm not talking about 100+ pages of development, but showing the passage of time and more scenes of bonding would have been nice.

And just to be clear since these days everyone takes things the wrong way: not a personal attack in any way, just a differing opinion :3
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Furrynomous 2019/05/14 11:01:21 No.1589070
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Shouldn't there be a new page out by yesterday or did the artist take a break?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/14 17:48:52 No.1589254
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No but heres something!

From the original post:

In March, instead of the usual Patreon sketch suggestions and vote, I came up with a small project, so to say. I made a little sketch series with Zaphira's sisters, and then this picture. I don't know what brought me to play around with the idea that Zaphira has sisters, but I played around so long that I actually decided that Zaphira should have as many sisters as many zodiac signs there are, so they can have a little mark too, just like Zaphira and Shen. And here they are, all of Zaphira's sisters, each one representing a zodiac sign. So let me introduce them one-by one :)

Top left, sitting on her sister, who's a tiny bit bigger than her both in width and length:
Lavender - Sagittarius
I'm sure you can already see how huge of a bookworm she is :D She's curious, always yearns for new knowledge and discoveries. A real scholar for sure. But unlike hers sister, Ivy, she never looks down on others who are less intelligent than her. Instead she gets very enthusiastic, and tries to teach them new things about the world :)

Top left, the big one, enjoying a few plates of delicious food:
Jade - Taurus
She is full of love and care, and she just adores peace, nature, animals, and food :D Basically she's full of love. And food…

Middle left, the one choking of laughter:
Emery - Aquarius
She's carefree and mischievous, and has no problem making a joke out of absolutely everything :D Why is she like that? Who knows? Maybe she just wants to hide her insecurities. But even though most of the time she has this devil may care attitude, when things get serious, you can definitely count on her support :)

Bottom left, waving with malicious intent:
Violet - Aries
Her personality is kinda lusty and passionate, so everyone should be careful around her :D

Middle left, unimpressed by the offered food:
Ivy - Virgo
She has kind of a cocky personality, she's a bit full of herself, and looks down on everyone less intelligent than her. But when you get to know her, and she let's you closer to her, you'll see she's a drastically different person than she pretends to be :)

Top middle, lifted high in the blue sky:
Everyone's favorite queen, ruler of Oasis, the child of the prophecy, Zaphira herself.

Middle, lifting Zaphira high in the blue sky, planning the perfect trajectory to hit her sister right on the head with her other, much pulpier sister:
Ruby - Leo
I'm sure you can see that bodybuilding is one of her most loved activity. She has a cheerful and playful personality, and she's always up for any competition, or fight :)

Bottom middle, confused by the gloating glares:
Cornelia - Scorpio
She's a battle hardened veteran, a true fighter, who fought countless of deadly creatures and evil doers. Her adventures left quite a few marks on her, but she cares little about her appearance. The only thing that matters to her is to get stronger, and help anyone in need on her journeys.

Bottom right, running for her life:
Topaz - Cancer
She is kinda nervous all the time, has quite a few anxieties, but she's a kind soul, doing everything she can for others :)

Middle right, amazed by the insane amount of fun that could happen in the next few seconds:
Mercur and Mercury - Gemini
This time they are from the same egg :D That's right, Mercur and Mercury are twins, and because of that they have a very similar, playful, joyful and a little mischievous personality :)

Top right, being bored to death:
Amber - Capricorn
I'm sure you can tell only by looking at her face that she's not the woman of action :D She spends most of her time sleeping and doing absolutely nothing, while she looks at the world around her with boredom and contempt. But believe me, if something eventually manages to make her get up and act, she won't rest till it's finished :)

Top right, being a bit insecure and anxious:
Neptun - Pisces
Neptun feels that the world and the people around here are too harsh and cold. That there are too much violence and malice. Sadly, she doesn't have too much hope in her future. But all she needs is a caring touch and a few encouraging word to fill her sad heart with hope :)

Top right, encouraging her sister to be brave, and have some fun with the other:
Venus - Libra
She meditates a lot, and always tries to find balance in life. She's a kind and caring person, who'll be the first to help when someone is in need :)

And that would be all of them, I guess :) Hold on for a second... Is that Shen...?

This picture was a huge milestone for me in many aspect. But I think I was successful :) Although I feel there are things I could have done better. But it always works like this. Placing the characters was a very difficult task. This picture is the very first big group shot I ever made, and It was difficult to solve how I should give a sense of unity to a scattered group of characters. I thought it would be a good starting point if most characters would respond one way or another to a central event. And although some characters are not entirely part of the events (like Jade and Ivy), they're not completely separated because they react to each others reactions.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/14 18:16:29 No.1589257
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>>1576723

Zaphira's expressions continue to slay me XD
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Furrynomous 2019/05/14 18:18:49 No.1589258
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"I'm scaroused!"
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Furrynomous 2019/05/20 04:34:54 No.1591863
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Ah shit, here we go again.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/20 17:52:43 No.1592118
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Having sex 3 times in a single day.
Is this what being in love is like?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/20 18:54:09 No.1592135
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>>1592118

It is at first, yes.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/20 19:34:31 No.1592149
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>>1592135
oof, the familiarity hurts
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Furrynomous 2019/05/20 21:37:51 No.1592194
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>>1591863
The pacing in this comic is just really awkward I'm sorry to say.

I'm not against the idea of them banging right out the gate, failing to connect, taking the time to get to know each other a better, falling in love, THEN trying it again... But all in the space of one day???

Some time progress would have been greatly beneficial here: Maybe over the space of a couple weeks, where they're banging periodically but nothing is clicking or happening. He feels like she doesn't see him for an actual partner and all the while she's stressing about trying to fulfill the 'prophecy.' All the while he's trying to learn little things about her. Then, one night, right before they're about to have their latest love session, she cracks and he learns about the sort of life she lives, allowing them to see eye to eye for the first time. Like how in a way, they're both been slaves to circumstance. It clicks and they finally 'make love' for real, fulfilling the prophecy in some such way or whatever.

It'd be a better lead up, better way to incorporate more sex scenes, and a better resolution that felt justified I feel.

Edited at 2019/05/20 21:44:54
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Sparity 2019/05/20 22:34:20 No.1592204
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>>1592118
Wait, only three times?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/21 02:43:40 No.1592252
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>>1592194
You're right but then the comic would be a boring slog that drags on for too long; unless the artist is hella good at maintain interest over a really long time. Maybe the artist could but what we have here is sufficient enough for what this comic is, a cute and lighthearted porn story.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/21 16:50:40 No.1592459
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>>1592252
You're going to need to provide more reason why it'd be 'a long slog' than just saying it would be, because what we just went through felt like a long slog. Pages with endless paragraphs of dialog that could be reduced to the character simply saying 'you are beautiful' does not a good story make.

A lot of those pages could have been used to represent a more gradual progress of their relationship over a period of time. For example, if it showed the events of one day on one page, we could better visualize how repetitive there attempts are at connecting and how frustrating it is to both of them. Revelations need some build up, if even a little, so that it pays off.

The artist clearly cares about story telling so I will approach it with the same level of passion the artist does.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/22 09:33:42 No.1592718
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>>1592459

It's true, I had noticed it while reading, but in my opinion, if you notice a slight progression, what it says seems more interesting, although, from what I see, there would not be much room for modification.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/23 00:03:05 No.1592929
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>>1591863

Just then an evil monster comes out of her vagina and takes her hostage, and we spend the next 50 panels watching Shen learn the ancient lost art of pussy slaying.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/23 12:54:36 No.1593107
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I think that rather the problem of the comic is its genre. Because in writing if it is very well done. Everything remains constant I do not see plot holes and everything stays well with the well presented characters and everything else I think their sin is the fact that it is of the romance genre and as such the stories that are of the romance genre are not totally very entertaining that we say are some mellow and slow, which makes it boring almost always
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Furrynomous 2019/05/23 17:31:36 No.1593156
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I like how everyone is complaining about the length or the genre of the comic; when there have been comics with abhorrent plots and characters or (and) page lengths that exceed well over 100 pages without addressing certain plot points or plot holes.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/23 20:59:08 No.1593216
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>>1593156
No one is complaining about the length or genre anon, they're talking the pacing. Learn to differentiate please before putting words in others mouths.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/24 13:24:25 No.1593359
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>>1593107
I keep my posture that the slow pace is cause of the genre that is set, which is romance
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Chatin # MOD # 2019/05/27 00:52:32 No.1594234
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Guys. What. The. Fuck.

I deleted that parody because of the shitstorm it created.

Keep it on topic and your 40k crap in discussion.

Also DONT REPORT EVERY SINGLE POST.


Edited at 2019/05/27 00:54:38
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SirNonimous 2019/05/27 02:25:27 No.1594254
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THE SPHINX HAS SPOKEN!
KNEEL!
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 08:22:35 No.1594338
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 10:42:20 No.1594369
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i'm the creator of that parody. It was fun to watch people's reaction. If someone wants to see this again check out e621.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 11:34:01 No.1594381
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>>1594369

It was awesome. I fairly enjoyed the reactions.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 11:50:27 No.1594386
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>>1594369
It was interesting parody, not something I liked but it is ok
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 17:31:48 No.1594570
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What is this parody ya'll talking about? Did i miss something?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 19:42:32 No.1594666
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>>1594570
almost the exact same plot as Terminator 3: Rise of the Machines

You seriously didn't notice?
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Furrynomous 2019/05/27 19:45:00 No.1594669
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You guys can say what you want, for porn, I find these two incredibly adorable.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/28 06:10:25 No.1594784
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>>1594669

I agree. It is quite refreshing to have characters in a furry porn comic who are not complete assholes or psychos. They are maybe a bit too sweet for the tastes of many, but I prefer sugar sweet characters to the usual furry characters.
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Furrynomous 2019/05/28 15:30:42 No.1594885
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And I mean... the snake squishy
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/06/03 04:40:31 No.1597643
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More delicious thicc snekwaifu!

Kinda hoping this ends with impregnation.

Edited at 2019/06/03 04:41:02
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Furrynomous 2019/06/03 09:00:50 No.1597698
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>>1597643
My alarms going off. This sex is going to only last 1 or 2 pages and the build up will have been for nothing
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Furrynomous 2019/06/03 10:49:39 No.1597727
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>>1597698
This is more wholesome porn than actual porn.
Me gusta
>>1597643
and fuck yes, I also hope so
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/06/03 11:49:07 No.1597738
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>>1597698

I'm more a sucker for quality over length. SHUT UP, I ABSOLUTELY HAVE A LARGE PENIS, YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANT

Joking aside, one could get away with a little brevity in their sex scenes as long as the setup and payoff are good. Sometimes there's only so much you can do before you risk drawing it out too long.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/03 14:52:51 No.1597783
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>>1597643
It really feels like they're telling this story to their kids, so impregnation feels like a good conclusion.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/03 17:04:37 No.1597833
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>>1597698
Well, crap, then your alarm must be busted, since it has been officially past foreplay for three pages now.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/06/10 10:21:41 No.1600563
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I feel like it's leaning heavily towards impregnation.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/10 10:25:48 No.1600564
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>>1600563

That was already confirmed to me since I noticed the "narration" looks like them talking to their kid how they met eachother
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Furrynomous 2019/06/10 13:42:46 No.1600611
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>>1600563
> "I feel like it's leaning heavily towards impregnation."
> had 3 times sex aka 2 shots already, 3rd incomming on one day

Well i duno about you but i think a lot people saw it already incomming - not only by the amount of sperm but by the way the narration sounds like...
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Furrynomous 2019/06/10 17:01:12 No.1600664
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Oh god I was right they're just montaging throught it. What the fuck was the point of this entire thing when the part you're here for is just rushed through. What you make sure to capture every nuance of conversation but the sex we're actually here to see needs to just be rushed through? Literally all furry comics do this shite oh my fucking god why its so unbelievably retarded
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Furrynomous 2019/06/10 17:03:41 No.1600665
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>>1600563
the entire prophecy was about the key filling the lock full of baby batter. if anyone expects otherwise then they're probably too dense to realize that this was the set up from the beginning.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/10 19:08:33 No.1600688
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It sounds like he's reading it to her as if they're writing a new fairy tale or fable based on their own life. I'm not so sure it is being narrated to a child.

Note the signature colors of the text bubbles. Shen's primary color. Zaphira's primary color.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/17 05:38:43 No.1603587
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 00:22:57 No.1604312
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Is it possible to really love someone when you've only known them for a day, were effectively forced to meet them and fuck, and the entire relationship is rooted in the sex?
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 01:13:30 No.1604325
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>>1604312

It is also rooted in a prophesy, so yes.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 02:04:14 No.1604334
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>>1604312
and the fact that one is a slave while the other is a monarch
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 09:01:13 No.1604399
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>>1604312
I guess that's how 13 yo furry roleplay experience usually looks like.

And you thought that pornhub casual police \ criminal scenario was forced?
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 10:19:58 No.1604424
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Wait a second. How can snake girl be the queen? thought she had older sisters?
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 10:55:05 No.1604447
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>>1604424
Likely due to the mark she has and being paired with Shen
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Furrynomous 2019/06/19 21:51:54 No.1604567
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>>1604424
I want porn of that red one
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Furrynomous 2019/06/20 03:34:05 No.1604708
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>>1604567

When a girl is that jacked, any sexually related content is called snu snu.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/20 22:38:54 No.1604973
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>>1604424

I suspect that reptiles choose leaders based off of genetic purpose. Bees have a genetic queen designed to pump out babies. Reptiles are not known for complex social structures, so it is possible that the reptile queen is just what she is supposed to be. Genetically, she is a baby making queen and her sisters are punchy punch punchers.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/23 03:00:02 No.1605289
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>>1604424
bruh she has the mark of the prophecy
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Furrynomous 2019/06/24 09:07:27 No.1605689
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bruh she has the mark of the prophecy!!
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Furrynomous 2019/06/24 15:10:58 No.1605805
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marks n shit
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Furrynomous 2019/06/25 04:10:25 No.1606069
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>human feet

Into the absolute trash it goes
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Furrynomous 2019/06/25 05:14:17 No.1606083
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>>1606069
>not concerned about a snake having feet to begin with
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Furrynomous 2019/06/25 06:16:47 No.1606111
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>>1606083
>not concerned about a fake having neets to begin with
ftfy

>>1606069
bruh, she has the mark of the prophecy
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Furrynomous 2019/06/25 06:23:38 No.1606113
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>>1606069
>literally everyone has been plantigrade since the beginning
you're bringing this up now?
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Furrynomous 2019/06/25 07:39:18 No.1606154
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>>1606083
You know... furries.

Snake with dog feet is best thing imaginable but human feet... oh god no!
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Furrynomous 2019/07/02 14:13:09 No.1608905
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>>1605805
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Furrynomous 2019/07/03 05:13:26 No.1609127
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No kissing while they cum :(
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Furrynomous Furrynomous 2019/07/04 05:42:01 No.1609529
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I bet they will run outside again to praise the s... rain >:p
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Cactus Sauce For Your Nachos 2019/07/04 06:49:44 No.1609539
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Damn, that snake character is amazing. Disney should hire her for this snake character she created.

Edited at 2019/07/04 06:51:10
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Furrynomous 2019/07/04 14:43:37 No.1609671
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>>1608905

Someone call Toto, they're about to bless the rains down in Africa
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Furrynomous 2019/07/04 15:48:30 No.1609686
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>>1609539
Disney just need to be brave enough to show some hardcore fuckin' in one of their animated movies.

But they're more likely to show that than they are to actually make another 2D animated movie.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/07/15 04:52:59 No.1615456
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Furrynomous 2019/07/15 22:13:19 No.1616681
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So much for people complaining about not enough pages of sex. That's a nice sutra of positions they just went through.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/22 15:31:10 No.1619813
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>>1615456
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Furrynomous 2019/07/22 16:11:42 No.1619830
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>>1619813
Goddamn she's adorable.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/22 18:13:19 No.1619868
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>>1619813
I came here to fap, not to go "Awww they are so adorable and cute"
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Furrynomous 2019/07/22 19:49:13 No.1619892
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>>1616681
Still doesn't really fix the pacing issues of this comic overall.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/22 21:44:16 No.1619920
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>>1619892

Until the comic is completed, and we find out what it means, we won't know what should have been emphasized. What seems like a pacing issue might turn out to be a focus on something that we had not realized was important.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 11:50:06 No.1622791
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 12:41:07 No.1622809
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>>1622791
I can't take snek waifu to be sad!
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 13:35:56 No.1622834
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I like the characters. Is this a dream? A furry couple that does not behave like thugs on drugs? You guys know what I mean, right? Half of the furry characters in comics and stories I have seen so far were either psychos or utterly retarded. While our snake girl is a bit too sweet for my tastes, I still prefer her over shit characters such as "deadbeat" and "andrew".
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 13:45:47 No.1622837
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Does anyone else think that the end product of this prophesy is a baby that will bring the kingdom to a golden age.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 13:55:32 No.1622840
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>>1622834

>A furry couple that does not behave like thugs on drugs?
>Half of the furry characters in comics and stories I have seen so far were either psychos or utterly retarded.

>While our snake girl is a bit too sweet for my tastes, I still prefer her over shit characters such as "deadbeat" and "andrew".

I like to know what characters you are referring to?
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 14:31:31 No.1622849
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PROPHECY YOU BETTER COME TRUE.



She's too damn precious to be hurt like this damn it D":<
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 15:50:36 No.1622883
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>>1622791

Oh, come on! The bottom-left panel is heartbreaking.
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DrHarrisson 2019/07/29 16:00:17 No.1622887
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>>1622837

I think that with this level of impregnation, it's implied.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 16:17:21 No.1622892
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>>1622837
I was calling that nine months ago, the first time she was disappointed that nothing happened.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/29 20:20:14 No.1622988
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thicc thudd.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/30 09:07:07 No.1623284
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>>1622892
9 months, you say...
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Furrynomous 2019/07/31 08:00:57 No.1623718
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>>1622840

I am sorry, I wasn`t specific enough. I recently read several comics by Jay Naylor some comics by Kabier (I do not remember the titles).
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Furrynomous 2019/07/31 08:31:09 No.1623732
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Is the snake girl`s lover a fennec? I am asking because it is not made clear in the story.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/31 08:31:11 No.1623733
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Is the snake girl`s lover a fennec? I am asking because it is not made clear in the story.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 10:17:29 No.1626689
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YES PLEASE FUCKING EXPLAIN
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 10:17:35 No.1626690
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>>1626666

"A young man shall appear unto us, and he shall guide the Fremen to victory. Muad'Dib!"
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 14:20:49 No.1626785
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>>1626690
The spice must flow.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 15:03:52 No.1626913
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>>1626666

"'The boy with the flashing neck will come, he will be the key to freedom... and stuff,' I read it on the bathroom wall."
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 18:25:47 No.1627285
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>>1626666

"And the sign said, 'The words of the prophets are written on the subway walls and tenement halls.'"
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 18:33:13 No.1627286
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>>1626666

"And then Vinz Clortho, the Keymaster, will meet his ally Zuul, the Gatekeeper. And thus Gozer will rise again, and walk this earth as an immortal God again."
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Furrynomous 2019/08/06 18:35:08 No.1627287
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>>1626666
"In 18 years, precisely, the planets will align ever so nicely

the time to act will be at hand, unleash the titans, your monstrous band

then the once proud zeus will finally fall, and you, Hades, will rule all!"

Edited at 2019/08/06 18:36:00
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Furrynomous 2019/08/08 01:28:37 No.1628411
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*Toto soundtrack intensifie*
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Furrynomous 2019/08/08 09:02:27 No.1628468
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this is by far the most interesting porn comic I have ever seen.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 10:56:23 No.1630436
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 12:18:18 No.1630451
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>>1630436

So the whole time she was just really thirsty.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 13:17:27 No.1630479
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>>1630451
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 13:26:38 No.1630482
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>>1630451
Her, and this Oasis apparently. Killing 2 birds with one "rock-hard" stone thanks to the prophecy!
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 14:25:38 No.1630492
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>>1630436
>not celebrating the death of the empire that enslaved you
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 15:40:16 No.1630513
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>>1630492
not celebrating the death of the empire that enslaved you

His reaction is bizarre, isn't it? A prophecy worth celebrating would tear the empire apart.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 18:32:40 No.1630554
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>>1630513

For what it's stated, her empire have nothing to do with his enslavement, and the representatives only negotiated with the slaver traders because the profecy said the "key" was a slaved person.

Also, he stated before the people who raided his village, killed his family and slaved him were a barbarian tribe

>>1556073
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Furrynomous 2019/08/12 20:43:43 No.1630585
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>>1630554

That helps to clear things up. Thanks!
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Furrynomous 2019/08/13 18:48:15 No.1631001
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the tauren 2019/08/13 21:06:56 No.1631033
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uh oh oh oh we have a barbarian hear us here...
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Furrynomous 2019/08/14 11:30:07 No.1631230
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>>1630436
> "Water problems"
>>1492822
> first intruduction was in a fucking huge pool

can someone see whats wrong here? And dont come with the "shes royal so there is water in the palace duh" thing, IF shes "so worried" about her people...

Edited at 2019/08/14 11:42:01
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Furrynomous 2019/08/14 15:20:16 No.1631299
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If they really want it to rain, they should wash their cars.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/14 16:51:05 No.1631327
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>>1631230
The kingdom earns extra money to buy water by selling Authentic Royal Girl Bath Water to other nations
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Furrynomous 2019/08/15 06:57:42 No.1631534
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>>1631230
>"And dont come with the "shes royal so there is water in the palace duh" thing, IF shes "so worried" about her people..."

Thats...actually...a good point. If she is really "worried so much about her people" there, for that, she has a lot water around her place like the already said huge pool...
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Furrynomous 2019/08/15 14:56:49 No.1631687
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>>1631534
Maybe that's just the point. Primitive societies didn't have indoor pools unless there was running water coming up from the ground, because they built the palaces on top of such places. They didn't have the means to pump the water around - only run it downhill along channels. The palace has water, but elsewhere the wells are dry - and to get the water from the palace to the fields and the people would take a bucket brigade of epic proportions - it would be naive to even consider it as a long term solution.

The story is basically an adaptation of what happened in Turfan. It's an oasis city in China around the Taklamakan desert. It's a historical stop over along the ancient silk road. Their wells started to dry up, so they dug tunnels into the nearby hills to tap into an underground river thousands of years ago. That way they could irrigate without having to constantly winch up millions of gallons of water from deep wells.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turpan_water_system

That's why the "key" is a well digger. He understands how to find water and how to get it out. The snake girl is waiting for a miracle to rain down from the skies, because she basically doesn't know anything about anything.

And frankly, if you're an ignorant peasant, or know-nothing religious royalty back in 1234 B.C the idea of hiking up a hill and digging up a really deep well would seem completely ridiculous - everyone knows that if the water is so deep in the well down the valley, then it must be even deeper up in the hills - but that was the major innovation in Turfan: they found that the water table is higher up the hill and they could dig a horizontal tunnel right into it.

Edited at 2019/08/15 15:35:07
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Furrynomous 2019/08/15 16:56:35 No.1631716
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>>1631687
Just the twist this story needed. A thrilling climax on hydrological engineering.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 00:20:56 No.1631821
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I suspect the fluffy dog knows how to build pumps. Windmills and pumps.
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/08/16 01:11:10 No.1631833
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>>1631534
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 01:43:29 No.1631840
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>>1631833
In a time of severe drought? Oof.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 02:09:53 No.1631843
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>>1631840
Pools don't just sit there. If it doesn't use pumps, it'll either be what's left after the water has been used for crops before it goes into the sea, or it'll be up near the source and the outflow goes into irrigation. All the pool does is hold a quantity of the water and release it steadily.

It could be argued that pools or reservoirs are good for agriculture.They'd balance out things like flood and drought to allow constant flow until the drought gets really bad.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 05:29:38 No.1631871
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>>1631833

Well... it's not exactly unrealistic. Even today people waste a lot of water in severe droughts as long as they have a lot of money.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 05:41:51 No.1631873
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>>1631840
Don't worry about that. She's just swimming in the tears of her subjects, it's not drinking water.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 06:45:55 No.1631882
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Or....since shes the prophetized savior 'lock', the council or tribunal could be convincing the people that sacrifices must be made to keep her happy since the gods will make it worth it in the end? A few ancient civilizations did similar things. The aztecs slaughtered captured warriors to appease God's, and got to the point the cities made a huge almost party come time sacrifice....so who knows the pools and lavish palace might make sense during the drought
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 11:48:49 No.1631973
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I think the Palace was built on an oasis. An Oasis is located at a very low point in the ground, so pumping water up hill in a bronze age civilization is difficult at best.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 16:44:44 No.1632038
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>>1631973
still, it makes no sense if her palace, so she said, has a LOT huge pools WITH water inside but shes "oh so worried about her people dieing of thirst".

If she really has "dozens of pools" inside her place which equals DOZENS OF WATER which also makes her hobby litterally SWIMMING than, honestly, the comic fails somehow in the plot - either that or this "snake" has a greedy bitch side we dont know about.

think about it that way:

> needs a prophecy to get "water" or at least thats what we so far "got"
> is worried about her people becourse they need said water
> has dozens of pools in her palace WITH water
> her hobby is swimming

Edited at 2019/08/16 16:46:51
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 17:51:19 No.1632057
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Could always be saltwater.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 18:17:19 No.1632061
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Looking back, that is some very noticeably brown water. I don't know how it could be good for bathing in but not for drinking, though, apart from the saltwater possibility, but that's doubtful.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/16 21:45:50 No.1632112
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>>1631882
I agree with this.

Their kooky religion could easily explain it away with the Lock needing to be perfectly healthy in both body (hydrated) and mind (her favorite hobby is swimming apparently). Take it away and she might not be able to perform her 'miracle' when the time comes. You could say they are putting all their eggs in one basket.

Or her staff/advisors could be using the above as a more selfish excuse to hoard water, but still telling our innocent queen it is for the "da prophecy" and she would believe it.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/17 01:02:42 No.1632206
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If the story is being told in past tense, then maybe her answer of "swimming" as a hobby is taking place AFTER the prophecy is fulfilled and they have tons of water.

The story is taking place in the past, and the questions are in the present.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/17 01:03:24 No.1632207
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All of these theories are plausible. I kinda like the wrinkle it's introduced to Zaphira's situation, gives us pause for thought and makes her character less saccharine.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/17 03:37:40 No.1632240
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If Zephira is not just the sexiest prettiest snek waifu ever.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/17 13:55:15 No.1632378
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>>1632206

Yeaaaa i doubt. the story is told in the past but even there she had at least ONE huge pool there and here i doubt it was the only pool

>>1492822
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Furrynomous 2019/08/19 18:24:16 No.1633709
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Furrynomous 2019/08/19 20:24:36 No.1633762
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>>1633709

BUT THE GIANT POOL FULL OF WATER
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Furrynomous 2019/08/19 22:53:34 No.1633800
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>>1633762
It's actually brawndo.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/19 23:49:34 No.1633821
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>>1633800
it's got what sneks crave
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 00:33:37 No.1633828
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>>1633762
>don't build a pool if you're in a drought
>you can both fit on the door if you try more than once
>build a house by the waterfall so the creatures don't kill you for making 0.01 decibel sounds
>use the giant eagles to get the ring to the volcano
>tell your subordinates you have a plan to keep the Sith from killing you all so they don't overthrow you
>killing half 50% of the population doesn't prevent it from growing, it just delays it
>if your low-speed boat crashes during a three hour tour, you're definitely within swimming distance of the mainland
>take the time-turner and put a bullet hole in young Tom Riddle or any of his ancestors
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 01:00:47 No.1633833
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>>1633828
Tolkien-verse eagles are top-tier powerful beings but are not incorruptible. Gandalf would not risk using them to carry the ring and potentially create even worse foes. Same reason he and Galadriel wouldn’t take the ring: they could be corrupted and use it for evil.

Besides, eagles are Gandalf’s Ultimate move and require immense stores of XP to use. In addition to a high summoning cost, the further the flight, the more XP needed. He simply didn’t have enough at the start but he did have enough at the end to get from Mordor to Rivendell but not to the Shire.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 01:41:31 No.1633835
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He just need to keep making her baww her eyes out. Water for days.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 03:20:15 No.1633889
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>>1633833

... the corruption would have ended as soon as the ring dropped. Plus its just people who are holding, or offered the ring.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 07:24:55 No.1633993
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>>1633828
Also who said the snap would be a one off thing? There could be future snaps. Delaying undefinitely is still the same as preventing.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 09:24:48 No.1634008
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>>1633993
That makes it worse because he'd have to keep doing it forever, he could pick any arbitrary percentage, and if he doesn't monitor how fast separate populations recover he'll put a few of them into extinction eventually.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 09:25:24 No.1634009
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>>1633889
The problem is that the eagles are animals and barely intelligent, so they'd get hypnotized by the ring.

Or they'd get into an aerial skirmish with the Winged Nazgûl, and the ring would fall somewhere in Mordor and the orcs would take it.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 09:36:35 No.1634011
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>>1634008
In situations where populations grow steadily and reach the limits of their environment, they usually start to self-limit (or they die off). However, if the population growth is too fast, it will shoot past the sustainability limit and destroy itself and the environment in a big bust. Erasing the right percentage of all life in the entire universe at the right moment will prevent the overshoot and force stability.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 10:42:36 No.1634040
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>>1634009

"The Eagles were birds that served as messengers of Manwë. Among those were the Great Eagles, immense birds who were sentient and capable of speech, and often helped Men, Elves and Wizards in the quests to defeat evil. They were "devised" by Manwë Súlimo, King of the Valar, and were often called the Eagles of Manwë."
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 11:45:04 No.1634055
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Guys please end this discussion on Thanos and focus on the comic >.<
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 12:22:34 No.1634077
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I have to laugh at how over-dramatic Shen looks in the latest page.

"Please Zaphira, I neeed to diiiig"
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 16:59:18 No.1634151
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>>1634123
He looks like sonic.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/20 19:45:34 No.1634202
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>>1634151

....Who looks like Bugs Bunny imitating Al Jolson imitating a black jazz singer. This is all very meta-textual.

Edited at 2019/08/20 19:51:40
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 12:22:10 No.1636865
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 12:26:32 No.1636866
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>>1636865
is it just me or is there a HUGE drop of quallity in the art?
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 13:21:35 No.1636886
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The linework does look a little heavier, true. Like it was done with a sharpie.

Eh, not the end of the world.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 13:23:03 No.1636887
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>>1636865
They end up tunneling back to her palace but do discover a huge amount of water.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 14:15:09 No.1636923
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>>1636866

Not only has the linework become heavy, but the framing of the action is clumsy, too. The bottom panels in particular seem like the work of a different and less expressive artist.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/26 23:43:59 No.1637204
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>>1636865
So long as the drop in quality is after the sex rather than before or mid-way, I can live with it.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/27 00:31:06 No.1637221
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Furrynomous 2019/08/27 00:31:33 No.1637222
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Furrynomous 2019/08/27 13:26:14 No.1637501
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Didn't the artist mention they changed to a new program mid-way through the comic? I attribute the drop in quality to growing pains with the new program.
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Bauxite 2019/08/27 14:41:34 No.1637514
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>>1637501

Even with growing pains, the panel layout on the newest page is pretty awful. Having to work with new software to find a happy medium AND working on two comics at the same time, probably doesn't help matters.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/27 19:18:06 No.1637586
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One sub-standard page isn't going to capsize what has been a pretty incredible comic thus far.

Let's just take this one on the chin for now whilst the artist works out the kinks (not those sorta kinks, hah).
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Furrynomous 2019/08/27 22:36:02 No.1637643
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Must You guys always find something to complain about?
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Furrynomous 2019/08/28 01:40:31 No.1637674
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>>1637643

Observations are not complaints.
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Furrynomous 2019/08/28 02:15:46 No.1637687
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>>1637643
I think it comes from a good place (mostly). When people are passionate they take things seriously and some may find it difficult to channel that enthusiasm and express their views with a degree of tact.

A general lesson I've picked up from floating around the board - take the comments with a pinch of salt.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 09:29:17 No.1639931
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Loleksy 2019/09/02 09:35:29 No.1639934
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Wouldn't it be more efficient to give him some slav... I mean, some workers for help? I know they might be unaware of water sources, but he can simply point them towards them, or make them remove the dug up dirt from the hole.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 09:46:20 No.1639938
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>>1639931
>>1639934
Forget about the workers, it says he hasn't drank for five days, while working, under a scorching sun. Pretty sure he died of dehydration day 3.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 10:37:59 No.1639956
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>>1639931

Without food, without water, without help, he dug for water as if the plot had possessed him.

Damn. This comic had been a good one!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 10:38:16 No.1639957
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>>1639934

If he was given some slavs, he would have to work alone anyway, while they squat and drank vodka
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 17:14:26 No.1640096
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>>1639938
If they are telling the story to their kids, it's at this part the precocious know-it-all kid would probably pipe up as well.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 19:57:44 No.1640143
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>>1639938

Stories, especially legendary ones ("how I met your mother" combined with the key prophecy), tend to be exaggerated.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/02 23:52:50 No.1640218
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>>1640143
His dick grew three sizes that day and he fucked all the anthro snakes in Ireland.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/03 16:20:42 No.1640442
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>>1640218

And that's how Nessie was born
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Furrynomous 2019/09/04 05:33:15 No.1640678
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"...and at day 6, he hitted liquid.
sadly, it was oil."
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Furrynomous 2019/09/04 05:40:38 No.1640679
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and the americans came to "free" them
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Furrynomous 2019/09/04 08:02:32 No.1640707
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>>1640679
And Everything Went To Shit When The Fire Nation Attacked
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Furrynomous 2019/09/04 18:11:10 No.1640991
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And my axe!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/04 20:26:53 No.1641037
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and my vuvuzela!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/05 11:28:08 No.1641283
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>>1640678
>>1640679
>>1640707
>>1640991
>>1641037
we need someone to draw this shit. this is better then the original comics story so far.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 06:12:47 No.1642838
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 07:22:27 No.1642848
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I'm starting to get the feeling that this story is treating us like idiots
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 09:58:28 No.1642876
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>>1642838

Why were there no hints of this anger and despair throughout the story, where it might have made this character more consistent and believable?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 11:38:11 No.1642903
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>>1642848
>>1642876
Because Zummeng has fallen into the trap of trying to turn a porn comic into a story when they should have done the opposite: Make a story that just happens to have erotic porn like scenes in it, sort of akin to how Game of Thrones treated its erotic scenes.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 12:09:14 No.1642909
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>>1642848
>>1642876

It's called bad writting. Most webcomic creators suffer from it, but nearly every single furry artist has it.
Porn can only hide it for so long.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 13:45:45 No.1642925
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i think the writing works... also you are wrong.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 14:45:24 No.1642937
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This comic's story is all over the place.

Slave gets snagged for the queen because he has a birthmark from a prophecy. They fuck a lot, nothing happens. Then they suddenly love each other, and they fuck real good. Then he goes out into the desert to fix the sudden revelation of why they've been fucking this whole time, which is to get water? And then he starts freaking out at her while she's apologetic about using a slave to save her kingdom.

And here I thought the narration in the early pages was them talking to their children, since half of Viktria's comics are about a guy fucking a girl to solve her problems and maybe give her a baby.

What the hell?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 14:59:45 No.1642942
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He's going to kill himself and she's going to cry and fill the hole with her tears.

Prophecy fulfilled.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 15:26:56 No.1642946
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>>1642942

Or she will say "If I can't stop you, let me at least help you", both gonna do the final strike, water will come out and the prophecy will be fulfilled

P.S: also, how the hell they're both telling the tale together years after, if he died? Your theory has more holes than Fugo's clothes

Edited at 2019/09/09 15:27:47
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 15:55:49 No.1642961
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>>1642946
> P.S: also, how the hell they're both telling the tale together years after, if he died? Your theory has more holes than Fugo's clothes
They're ghosts.
Dummy.

Edited at 2019/09/09 15:56:12
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 18:57:49 No.1642992
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>>1642937
Whelp, that didn't take long. Knew as soon as the fucking stopped somebody was going to bitch about something and lack of fucking. So predictable.

Went from loving the characters and their interactions to BOO, what's this story crap.

Come on, not everything has to be 100% about stroking your dick.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 21:03:57 No.1643027
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>>1642992
The story slingshots between intense drama and sex. Plot points aren't telegraphed or explained until they suddenly matter. It's not a well-written story, regardless if it were a drama or a smut story.

Viktria's early stuff was just pure smut. Now she's doing drama with the New Dawn stuff. This is somewhere in-between, and it reads like she didn't know which direction to take it.

It's just sloppy writing.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 22:51:35 No.1643053
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>>1642992
>Stop picking apart the thing I like!
God just shut up
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Furrynomous 2019/09/09 23:41:56 No.1643073
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>>1643027
She had a few other stories where it was like 70/30 porn/story (the genie story and goat mom) that were pretty good on both counts.

I think this one in particular is just kinda sloppy.

Not as bad as what others think. I think she made it pretty clear that the prophecy wasn't as simple as the snek waifu thought it would be and that there would be some other catch. I just think the issue right now is how jarring it is to transition from the passionate lovemaking to the intense despair. It feels like it should have been more drawn out.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/10 00:49:24 No.1643101
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>>1643027
Plot points aren't telegraphed or explained until they suddenly matter.

Exactly. If the drought, and Shen's long-held anger at being enslaved, had been foreshadowed by verbal hints, or by images of scarcity in the palace (an empty pool, for example), then all of these later developments would feel a bit less contrived.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/10 02:16:21 No.1643142
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>>1642992
The thing is you can't have 50/50 story and porn, it just doesn't work pacing wise and it satisfies no one when one side butts in the other. Her other comics worked because they focused on the porn with light lore elements sprinkled on top. In this instance it's clear she wanted to have more emphasis on the setting and the characters so she should have done the opposite with a 70/30 story/porn comic.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/10 09:16:51 No.1643280
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>>1643142
It is possible to have equal or more story than porn, it's just that it requires the story to be as compelling as the porn is. It also helps if it's a longer-form story where the two can be compartmentalized more, so that you're not suddenly swerving from one into the other without time for the reader to adjust.

A sprinkle of porn can actually help a story if you don't mind it, since it does wonders for getting the audience invested in your characters. People want to like characters they're horny for.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/10 11:46:41 No.1643329
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>>1643280
the problem is the comic has a odd construction so far and, if you keep it simple and short, this is how you could sum it up:

- Small introduction
- "Senseless sex" with no real reason, only saying something about a "Prophecy" without really saying what said "Prophecy" is
- Small Background story from her side
- Romance build up
- Romantic Sex, still noone knows much about the title said "Prophecy"
- Build up to XY reason, in that case "water problems"
- Build up to his background story (?)
- We still have no real clue about said "Prophecy"

Its a bit messy and should be constructed a bit better. We still dont really know a lot about the prophecy as one sample and as for the "sex parts" it feels more like the artist pretty much just jumped in, by now, this comic and told everyone "here have some sex, now have a long background story noone cares about anymore and maybe some other sex later".

Thats not really how you keep people reading a comic but more "lure" them to look at it in the first place.

Edited at 2019/09/10 13:53:40
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Furrynomous 2019/09/10 15:00:26 No.1643358
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>>1643329

You are right. It feels as if the comic was simply made-up on the get go with no pre-planned storyline.

Edited at 2019/09/10 15:06:42
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Furrynomous 2019/09/14 15:20:55 No.1644849
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I'm just gonna say this: Viktria sucks at drama. Prophecy is one big mess (as allready said by others in this thread) and her Welcome to New Dawn is painfully cliche and generic sad story that feels like she is checkboxing stuff. Maybe she should just stick to smut stuff.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/14 17:27:09 No.1644890
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story is good, i love it, the drama, the sex, the cuteness, to me is all well balanced, looks good.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/14 18:28:58 No.1644905
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while i will agree the story has some shortcomings i will say its fun to see someone trying to do a story thats more than the generic girl turns into cumslut due to rape or reasons. I say she could stand to use a little practice but i feel she has potential!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/15 01:48:04 No.1645042
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At least this isn't as hamfisted as Welcome to New Dawn.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/15 05:47:23 No.1645090
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Writing is really bad but I love how Zummeng draws facial expressions.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/15 16:26:50 No.1645264
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The writing's not really that bad to be honest. It's just gotten a little hammy with this whole "desperate search for water" schtick is all.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 06:59:41 No.1645577
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 10:38:21 No.1645686
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>>1622791
I really like this. I think this is easily a 10/10 comic this far.

And I think this last page is really powerful. Something tells me that she will jump in and start digging with him to share his burden, and that's when they find water
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 10:49:43 No.1645689
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>>1645577

Again, all of this turmoil could have been foreshadowed to make it seem natural instead of melodramatic, inevitable instead of suddenly out-of-the-blue.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 11:26:56 No.1645695
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>>1645686
The character jumps from gentle and level-headed to a tormented angster at the flip of a page.

Sorry - it just don't work. Basic psychology fail. Shen would have to be seriously bipolar, yet completely oblivious to the fact, to behave in this manner.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 12:00:14 No.1645704
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>>1645695
You have to consider that this is him after 5 days of digging a hole and dehydrating himself. We got hints before now he had a super shitty life before this and it could just be he hides the angstyness well enough when he's not working himself to death trying to do the only thing he's able to do to help the absolute best thing to ever happen in his life.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 12:17:59 No.1645713
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>>1645704
That's not a very good excuse, because him working himself to death IS the suicidal drama queen personality that has just now surfaced without any warning.

If there was an extra page in between that develops the motive somehow... but there isn't. Hence why it's complete jekyll & hyde - without the serum to explain the transformation.

Besides, the entire "I tried to kill myself ten times and they just tied me up", is not a plausible story for how the character behaves overall. People who go through that shit usually end up with deep PTSD and either psychotic or timid catatonic wrecks. Think Vietnam veteran tied up in a mud hole for five years.

Edited at 2019/09/16 12:36:57
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 13:50:44 No.1645731
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>>1645577

>WORDSWORDSWORDS

Fuck off with this feudal slave drama and get back to the fucking already
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Loleksy 2019/09/16 14:53:14 No.1645742
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Unfortunately, I don't think there's gonna be more sex after this shit. But jeez, I really hope I'm wrong!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 15:49:38 No.1645756
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They missed a golden opportunity to make an angry sex scene.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 17:28:32 No.1645794
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>porn gets replaced with shitty writing filler
>screaming, angst and edge
Yum, my favorite
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 17:31:19 No.1645797
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What is happening with the massive tonal shifts in this comic? It's all over the place. I already didn't buy them falling in love after fucking in a pool, but now it's turned into a suicidal angst rant.

Plus, wasn't the snake lady looking for slaves in the first place and her guards just happened to find the key guy? Isn't she part of the very system that facilitated the murder of his family that drove him suicidal in the first place?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 17:45:27 No.1645807
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>>1645797

lol wut...? They just explained that plain as fucking day. They were looking at slaves specifically to find the key, who was prophecized to be a slave.

The suicide rant is... a little ridiculous. Them falling in love was fine. Sheltered princess who had her entire life based around banging this one guy finds him, mechanically does the thing, doesn't do the thing, and he turns out to be nice. Makes enough sense. Him falling for her is simple... she's thicc, got huge tits, and let him stick his dick into her. That's all love really is at the end of the fuckin day and if you think anything else then yer just naive as shit. This angst outburst though is laying it on way too thick... Zumm is a decent writer most of the time. But they suck fucking ass at writing negative emoting and they god way overboard and dramatic. The other one with her titular character for instance just harps way too hard on the depressive themes in an attempt to make you relate to them. "oh look! They feel bad! You feel bad too, right? You get that!"

Which... fair, I get that and it can work. But when you just keep laying the shit on or lay it on way too thick without it being EARNED, then it comes off as angsty try-hard writing. Hopefully Zumm gets back to what she's good at writing in this comic soon. Happy and light on depth stuff. I dunno, I get she wants to express deep emotions etc but she is just not well equipped to do that.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 17:51:35 No.1645812
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>>1645807
>Him falling for her is simple... she's thicc, got huge tits, and let him stick his dick into her. That's all love really is at the end of the fuckin day and if you think anything else then yer just naive as shit.

Are you for real? Lmao
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 19:17:21 No.1645850
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The more i read into the comic the more i suddendly think about star wars and the "come to the dark side" meme.

No, srsly, the comic went from nonsense sex to "IM THE EDGY SLAVE NOW WHO SUDDENDLY HAS A BACKGROUND STORY TO SHARE!!!11one"

It just doesnt fit. If this kind of part was told somewhat between all of this, yes, but now it feels somewhat forced to us, the ones who read it, to feel "somewhat" for this person but fails the point that it comes out WAY over the top.

I mean if, i said IF, he would have told this in a talk with her like "and what did you have for a life after me knowing im sitting here in a golden cage?" than it would somewhat ok and nice to read. now it just looks like the writter tries to create somewhat of "pity" for this character.....which the writter also fails in.

Edited at 2019/09/16 19:19:41
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 20:22:44 No.1645888
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>>1645850

>"IM THE EDGY SLAVE NOW WHO SUDDENDLY HAS A BACKGROUND STORY TO SHARE!!!11one"

>it comes out WAY over the top.

The furry fandom in a nutshell.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/16 22:58:56 No.1645923
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>>1645807
That's all love really is at the end of the fuckin day and if you think anything else then yer just naive as shit.

Or an adult.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 00:08:27 No.1645933
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>>1645850
>it feels somewhat forced to us
Hoooo boy you should see their other current daily comic, where one of the main characters father is pure cartoon villain levels of EVIL/ABUSIVE/MOLESTER that is meant to be taken seriously.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 14:15:17 No.1646123
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>>1645923

Or someone who... recognizes, and realizes that all love is, is a chemical reaction based on hormones and pheromones and your physical arousal in the other person. That's it, love is purely chemical and anatomical... your "heart" has nothing to do with it, it's just in your squishy soft wet brain. So here's a slave who's been treated like shit and now there's this thicc and attractive snake chick letting him rail her. No shit he "falls in love" with her, because that's all love fucking is. Instinctually based mechanics that compel you to breed. That's it. I'm sorry if you thought it was some magical force or personality BS. It's based on your ingrained instinct to breed. So that's why it makes sense that he "fell in love" with her, and she was literally groomed since childhood to fall for him. Zaphira has been literally child groomed when you look at this story.

At any rate, this doesn't excuse the tonal shift and undeserves/unwarranted breakdown by Shen. It's awkward and out of place in the pacing and story... while also being over the top.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 15:08:15 No.1646138
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>>1646123
1. You confuse love and lust (desire). They serve different functions both individually and socially. Either you're too inexperienced or isolated to know the difference, or you're a sociopath, because it's pretty damn obvious.

2. Of course everything in your brain is just chemical reactions. What else is it supposed to be? Sunsets are made of dust and air pollution - yet the phenomenon creates the experience of beauty in the observer.

3. Despite being physical beings, people aren't biologically determined robots. This is somewhat difficult to grasp for people who operate on very simplistic notions of biology, thinking it works like lines of computer code. Rather, it's a set of tendencies and probabilities which are differently weighted in each individual, depending on the environment and social conditions/history that have shaped their experiences. People aren't carbon copies of an early 20th century pop psychology book.

You have the textbook case in one hand, and in the other hand you have people who fall in love with the Eiffel tower or want to marry cartoon characters. The theory can't explain that, because the actual people don't work consistently like they're supposed to. The probability of finding someone who is exactly "normal" is exactly zero.

Edited at 2019/09/17 15:20:51
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 15:24:37 No.1646149
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>>1645807
>Him falling for her is simple... she's thicc, got huge tits, and let him stick his dick into her. That's all love really is at the end of the fuckin day and if you think anything else then yer just naive as shit.
>>1646123
>all love is, is a chemical reaction based on hormones and pheromones and your physical arousal in the other person. That's it, love is purely chemical and anatomical... your "heart" has nothing to do with it, it's just in your squishy soft wet brain

Woah, take a load of this guy! I bet he isn't some pretentious pseudo-intelectual wannabe at all!
I better go speak out the apparent love i didn't know i had to all people and friends ive had casual sex/relations with over the years.

Everything in your brain is a fucking chemical reaction, that doesn't disregard actual taste and character, humans aren't robots. No, but the worst thing about your statement is that in all your pretentious autistic glory to pass yourself off as "smart" the cold sad fact is that your whole comment is based on a line from Rick And Morty.

Edited at 2019/09/17 15:34:31
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 16:38:03 No.1646172
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>>1646149

lol... is the only place you ever hear intelligible factoids Rick and Morty? Come on man, go check out discovery channel or jesus even YourMovieSucks. Wubalubadubdub, man.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 17:38:25 No.1646190
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to be honest Shens anger COULD have been handled a bit better, rather than the break neck speed the tone took when he was digging. At first he was introduced as calm rational and somewhat well read despite being a slave.

Option 1: Shen could have first been presented as already depressed, angered due to his position. Hanging with Zaphira could have brought him out from his depression/anger (even if it was only slightly) then his digging could be him trying to please/satisfy someone who made him happy.

Option 2: Things could have started out just as they are, but his digging, instead of being rage filled could have been him desperately trying to make Zaphira happy due to how much she wanted the prophecy to be full-filled and he could just be stubborn in giving up cuz he doesnt want to disappoint her. Afterwards, Zaphira could ask why he is so hellbent on working himself to death, and THEN he could give his backstory in a calm if not somber/defeated temper instead of angsty rage.

There are a few misteps but it feels like we went from point A to point B, without anything in between, like we teleported or something.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 19:22:46 No.1646223
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>>1646123
Love is purely chemical

All of life is based on chemical reactions, but a basis does not predict an outcome. In the same way that principles of organic chemistry cannot predict the results of evolution and random change that form an ecosystem, human biology cannot predict the complicated results of social interaction. In that sense, love is no less real than a rain forest, a coral reef, or any other complicated biological community.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/17 21:54:24 No.1646279
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>>1646223
Free will is a lie, the universe is a hologram buy gold buy buy BUY!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/18 03:41:14 No.1646411
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>>1646279
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Furrynomous 2019/09/18 15:16:46 No.1646624
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>>1646172
When someone posts in the most pretentious manner how "love is just a chemical reaction in the brain", then hell yes he's a pseud who got it from Rick And Morty, don't deny it.
Especially considering he exactly worded within the context Rick does, wich for a matter was rather to point out the nihilistic nature of that character. And wake-up call, being a nihilistic edgelord doesn't make you a intelectual either.
Also, he's flat out wrong. If anything, claiming that having sex with a wealthy thicc girl will make you fall in love and calling people who dissagree naive just rather points out that the person who wrote that simply never has been in a (healthy) relationship and is likely still a virgin.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 08:05:17 No.1648312
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>>1645577

HE DID IT, THE ABSOLUTE MADMAN!!!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 08:11:13 No.1648313
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>>1648312

"Stop this madness."

Oh, please, yes.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 08:18:25 No.1648315
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Perhaps in the future, instead of making him do this all himself put him in-charge of a team of diggers....
I mean, then they would have got their water faster...
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 08:59:40 No.1648324
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Are they gonna fuck again soon? Is this even a p0rn comic anymore?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 10:31:28 No.1648394
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Either you end on the cumshot or you run long enough to see any furry porn comic devolve into the bait and switch plot about these fursonas.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 10:39:49 No.1648399
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it looks like the pickaxe came
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 11:56:55 No.1648433
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>>1648399
Hydrogasm.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 12:04:11 No.1648436
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this writer really should stick to something thats less dramatic.. caaause they are fucking terrible at it rest of the comic before this sudden out of nowhere change has been great
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VullpesMajoris 2019/09/23 14:18:39 No.1648472
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Of course they will, Sheen just found water. That mean sex and prosperity for the kingdom.
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perfect 2019/09/23 15:54:24 No.1648516
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and we still have barely a clue what said prophecy is. perfect story writting.

Edited at 2019/09/23 15:54:56
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 16:04:38 No.1648528
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>>1648324

This is cute and really good, keep your dick in your pants, did you see the last panel?
Things ARE about to get wet.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 20:14:31 No.1648643
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OH SHIT HE DID IT! :D

now we can have a happy ending with hybrid children and shit, so we can finally move on on bitching on the next thing (well not me, im really enjoying it :D)
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 21:00:05 No.1648661
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>>1648324
Did the intense fucking they did earlier somehow evaporate?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/23 21:27:13 No.1648671
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>>1648516
"Someday in the future the empire will be in deep shit due to drought but a chosen hero with this not super distinct shape for a birth mark will show up and find water as long as he nails a princess with extremely well-hydrated skin first."
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Furrynomous 2019/09/24 04:09:52 No.1648795
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Don't know about the tone shift but crazy-eyed Shen is hot
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Furrynomous 2019/09/24 14:45:52 No.1649026
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It would have been so easy to present this exact same plot and not have it be so melodramatic. That's the problem here. It's important, sure, but the action here is mundane and it looks so goofy.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/25 16:33:59 No.1649518
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oh exploitable
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Furrynomous 2019/09/25 20:24:05 No.1649586
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none of you would understand the mentality of the person who lost all hope...then regain it and never want to let it go.
This is a man in love.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/25 20:36:56 No.1649595
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>>1649586

People would understand it easily... if Zummeng had written such a comic.

Instead, we have a story in which any sense of all hope being lost is shoved into view long after other events have taken place. The result is an abrupt change of tone and plot for which no preparation was offered.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/25 22:28:28 No.1649612
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>>1649586
I mean, I get it, it's just that the ramp up to the melodrama was far too jarring.
It would have been better if we understood his dread a bit more before all the sex and lovey dovey stuff. Instead, we get more of a fish out of water kinda deal where a slave is suddenly thrust into relations with royalty because we didn't experience much of his suffering as a slave and her demeanor and comically checking on the prophecy every time they fuck.

Edited at 2019/09/25 22:30:04
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Furrynomous 2019/09/26 05:27:28 No.1649678
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>>1649586
I think the characters and their motivations are great and the story is easy to grasp and follow, + the porn is good.

I really love this comic
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 00:57:06 No.1650017
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do i still have to call out that the comic is called "Prophecy" and where is no word fallen about said Prophecy since the first few pages?

Its like you play a Zelda game and Zelda isnt even in the game (hint hint).
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 04:30:16 No.1650064
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 12:31:03 No.1650161
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>>1650064
the comic. its called "Prophecy". they only talked about it in the very first pages and then never again. nobody knows what said "Prophecy" is about for real nor did they explain it.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 14:02:36 No.1650222
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>>1650161

Reading comprehension is important
>>1630436

Edited at 2019/09/27 14:02:53
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 14:03:00 No.1650223
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>>1650161
No, they've been talking about the prophecy quite a bit. Every time they'd have sex, snek would go check to see if the prophecy was fulfilled because she thought that's what the prophecy was about.

After it not working after a while, they talked and she told him about how the kingdom is running out of water and he eurekas that this must be the prophecy because he used to dig for water.

Now we're here.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 16:37:27 No.1650266
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>>1650223
they sure talked about the prophecy in the beginning but yes, its NEVER really told -WHAT- the prophecy is about. saying its about the waterproblem is by far now just a speculation. we dont know it, its never -really- told. She said a bit about it but even she said she couldnt understand it in total.

Edited at 2019/09/27 16:37:49
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 21:39:38 No.1650336
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>>1650266
No, we're constantly reminded about the prophecy.

Yes, we're never explicitly told what the prophecy actually is but that's kind of the point in them trying to figure it out.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/27 22:04:40 No.1650343
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This boi needs to learn how to read smh
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Furrynomous 2019/09/28 05:10:21 No.1650471
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Something that normally takes two Bedouins a few days in this story is presented as an impossible feat that the only chosen one can do. Really? Has Zaphira ever attempted to overcome the crisis? From what I can see, the citizens tried to find water on their own, of course with no succes(they dug a hole 2 meters deep and are surprised that there is no water). What if another crisis comes? Plague, War, You have prophecies for that too? Zaphira thinks that being a ruler is just a pleasure,
she wants the prophecy to do her duties, so she can live in wealth, bathes in pools, eats exquisite dishes and reads love novels while her people suffer. Ohnestly, is this type of ruler that truly cares about his people?
Governing this way ends very badly for those in power. They usually end up poisoned, stabbed, or torn apart by a furious crowd.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/29 20:47:15 No.1651094
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>>1650343
> "LEARN TO READ ITS IN THERE ALL THE TIME!"

*lets see i do it for the person*

Some words before:
> Yes its a fucking long post, deal with it or dont read it.
> I read the comic -from scratch- . i did NOT read it before but saw comments flying around people complained about the title of the comic and that it has not thing to do with said "Prophecy" that i thought i give it a shot.
> I had much better things to do than this but it took me about an hour or so. call me now autist, screw you.
> i "had" some fun reading it but yea...its not my cup of tea so i wouldnt read it again

So if you wanna read it:

https://gofile.io/?c=nXYBY2

saved the long comment in a file so it doesnt cover the whole yard with it. youre welcome.

Edited at 2019/09/29 21:13:03
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 11:03:23 No.1651299
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Welp... Shen is dead
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Loleksy 2019/09/30 11:39:51 No.1651318
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Yeeeeeeaaaaaaaa... no.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 12:04:59 No.1651327
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>>1651299

"But this is...

"This is CONVENIENT!"

"BY THE PLOT!"
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 12:20:07 No.1651330
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>>1651299
this is water and she is a captain obvious
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 14:13:08 No.1651364
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That's fine and all but can he swim?
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 15:43:39 No.1651389
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>>1651364

I'm wagering he was shot out of the hole like a spit wad and will hit the ground with a resonating thud. After all, its not like a slave can marry royalty. Besides, what would the kids look like.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 15:45:49 No.1651390
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>>1651299
Shortly after:
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 15:49:31 No.1651392
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i am sorry
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 16:03:56 No.1651397
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 17:49:15 No.1651442
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>>1651392
Whip a man and he digs for a day, Give a man some coochie and he digs till he spunks.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 20:57:12 No.1651508
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>>1651392
>>1651442
Well, at least the prophecy came true.
And so did Shen.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 21:25:43 No.1651546
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>>1651508
CARLOS!!!
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 22:04:19 No.1651585
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>>1650471
Finding the water was considered the impossible feat. Not the digging. She said they tried it before but nobody could find any water.
We're never shown the bottoms of the other holes so we don't know how far down they go.
He might have dug deeper, or he may have just found the right spot.
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Furrynomous 2019/09/30 22:20:38 No.1651613
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>>1651585
The physics of this is really questionable though. The water spewing up like that would indicate pressure. Where is the pressure coming from? Is there a geyser? Is the dirt somehow trapping the water? If it's gravity related, the water would have to get there from higher up, but other holes being a similar depth would imply his spot is abnormally close to the water.

The best options are magical bullshit, or hitting the water pipe for her bath.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 00:23:06 No.1651651
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>>1651613
The answer to that is the artist doesn't know 100% how this stuff works and was trying to make it dramatic
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Oh come on Stupid people 2019/10/01 01:08:12 No.1651682
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Alright morons, can't you just enjoy a comic for what it is.

ALSO, Remember this is a story being told possibly to their children... WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU TELL STORIES!!!

YOU OVER EXAGGERATE THINGS!

I swear do you do this in a movie theatre... every time there is an action sequence you are the person that stands up and goes "HEY THAT ISN'T REAL... ITS ALL SPECIAL EFFECTS."

Shut up and draw your own comic, Be sure to do everything to perfection... I will be waiting for you.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 01:57:38 No.1651763
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>>1651682
can't you just enjoy a comic for what it is.

Discussions of craft are sometimes more enjoyable than the comic itself.
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He literally came Melmel 2019/10/01 02:14:08 No.1651771
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>>1651397

great to see old Unicode fun

Edited at 2019/10/01 02:15:20
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 02:30:39 No.1651775
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>>1651763
Seriously. I enjoy the comic (though this last bit was a bit over the top) and I'm enjoying the criticism for the most part.

I like knowing how things could have been done differently to address certain issues.
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Bauxite 2019/10/01 04:42:10 No.1651796
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>>1651682

> can't you just enjoy a comic for what it is

A lot of us do, actually. But even if I/we like something, it doesn't absolve said thing of criticism.

> ALSO, Remember this is a story being told possibly to their children. YOU OVER EXAGGERATE THINGS

..So exaggeration justifies that tonal dissonance and odd pacing at points?

> I swear do you do this in a movie theatre...

Unwarranted assumptions much?

> every time there is an action sequence you are the person that stands up and goes "HEY THAT ISN'T REAL... ITS ALL SPECIAL EFFECTS."

It's called having a willing suspension of disbelief. How realistic things should be perceived largely depends on a multitude of factors. Things like setting, tone, characters and context are all important to assist in making a story feel somewhat real; how real depends on what kind of story you're trying to tell to your audience. You can have a mix of fatasy and realism, just so long as there is a proper balance between the two. But when you do outlandish things in a grounded setting or vice versa, of course people are going to cry foul.


> Shut up and draw your own comic

Ah yes, appeal to accomplishment yet again-- never gets old.

My guy, most of the criticism aimed at this comic are pretty valid. And a good deal of posters just like to poke a bit of fun at it-- It's mostly harmless. However, even if a good deal of the conversation was pure vitriol, that fallacy still doesn't make for a valid argument.
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Prokura 2019/10/01 09:50:55 No.1651903
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>>1648312
>>1649518
>>1651397

Sorry I'm a little late for the Party!
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 10:23:10 No.1651910
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>>1651682
"draw your own comic"
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 13:01:40 No.1651977
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>>1651910
Better love story than Titanic.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 18:20:25 No.1652077
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>>1651910
actually good.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 21:48:49 No.1652184
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WE'RE RICH
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the tauren 2019/10/01 21:58:35 No.1652189
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hum ok it nice but shen
where is he?
flying with the team rocket?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 22:37:41 No.1652241
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>>1652184
DID SOMEONE SAY OIL?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 22:57:31 No.1652245
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... I love this thread now.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/01 23:51:52 No.1652273
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>>1651299

Edited at 2019/10/02 02:13:18
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Furrynomous 2019/10/02 00:08:29 No.1652278
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I appreciate the memery but can y'all tag your macros?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/02 01:07:48 No.1652302
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>>1652278
you can tag them yourself via the Add Tag option on each post.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/02 01:28:11 No.1652308
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>>1652302
You are correct, but it'd be nice to not have to.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/02 02:17:05 No.1652322
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>>1652273
Tag your macros

Like this?
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Prokura 2019/10/02 09:24:38 No.1652397
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>>1652278
>>1652322
>>1651903
sorry I forgot to macro the meme
It was just the first thing in my head as I saw her saying "stop this Madness" ... SPARTA!
I still like the Snake Waifu but there was so many meme potential in it I had to do it
I just whish I would be better at editing.
I know the borders are shit but it took long enough already

Edited at 2019/10/02 09:27:46
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Guildarts 2019/10/04 07:14:49 No.1653176
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hmm i dont think so
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 07:22:51 No.1654266
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 10:01:17 No.1654297
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>>1654266

"I made it.... I made your plot... come true."

How fucking convenient.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 10:19:12 No.1654303
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>>1654266

Now i want to go to a water park
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 10:40:31 No.1654308
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>>1654297
It is sad to see a man wasting so much energy, just to be so butthurt over a comic.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 11:54:20 No.1654322
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>>1654308

A five-second reply is "so much energy"?

Really?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 12:50:48 No.1654352
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>>1654297
Cartoon plot resolves in a way most cartoons do
Local Man outraged
News at 11
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Kiba the Messenger 2019/10/07 13:05:30 No.1654358
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>>1654303
I'm with this guy.
Let's go to Schlitterbahn!
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 13:15:04 No.1654360
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>>1654297
Honestly. I must know. What exactly were you expecting to happen. Let's say you were writing this, what would you have done differently by page 62?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 15:03:06 No.1654400
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>>1654360

I would have suggested this: let the prophecy fail.

Zaphira learns that rule is not based on prophecies, but on policies. She learns that Shen is worth loving, not because he's a part of the plot, but because he's a good man.

As for water? The kingdom will fade, and people will be forced to migrate. But with Zaphira and Shen to lead them, they might find a way not only to survive, but to thrive elsewhere.

The story ends in hope and in the promise of a long, happy love.

Edited at 2019/10/07 15:09:47
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 15:29:58 No.1654405
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>>1654400

Something I forgot to mention: on the night before the great caravan departs for new lands and new possibilities, the comic ends like this --

>>1651910
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 16:23:12 No.1654410
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>>1654308
Oh shut up, I'm so tired of this pissy little attitude of 'thing I like is above criticism stop it.'

The comics story has serious pacing issues and is laden with contrivances, get over it. The artwork is pretty but that can only carry a comic for so long.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 16:33:26 No.1654415
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aaannnndddd why they had sex again? explain?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 16:37:00 No.1654417
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>>1654415

Well, you see, when a man and a woman meet, and they really really really like each other....
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 18:45:24 No.1654492
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Where'd the fish come from?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 19:11:21 No.1654505
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>>1654492

magic or something
but for real there are these special fish called lungfish they can survive for a verry long time in a dry environment underground
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xNx3_g2LjME
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 19:45:49 No.1654512
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>>1654400
And this, my friend, is why YOU don't write stories or if you do nobody cares about them because they'd be bad and downers. Don't nobody wanna read shit like that. GTFOH.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 20:42:49 No.1654522
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And here I thought we were here to jack off to the snake lady
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Bauxite 2019/10/07 20:44:20 No.1654523
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>>1654512

> And this, my friend, is why YOU don't write stories or if you do nobody cares about them because they'd be bad and downers.

You know you can have a bittersweet ending to a story, right? A lot of great stories end that way. A complete downer ending CAN suck, but so can a saccharine one.

> Don't nobody wanna read shit like that. GTFOH.

And no one wants to hear your childish banter.

>>1654505

Seems like either that or fish were imported from somewhere close by (maybe the palace?). Either way it makes me wonder just how far the kingdom is away from another water source. I mean digging around the kingdom is a crapshoot, sure, but are they just smack dab in the middle of nowhere? Or is it just not feasible to divert what I would assume would be this worlds version of the Nile river?

Edited at 2019/10/07 20:44:48
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Furrynomous 2019/10/07 21:00:23 No.1654529
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>>1654523

Funny thing is, I don't consider a story bittersweet if it ends in a world where prophecies are false, but love and hope are true.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/08 22:12:20 No.1655113
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>>1654529

And how grim can a story be, if it ends with lady-snake anal?

"K!"
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Anonymouse 2019/10/08 23:19:18 No.1655144
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>>1654410
Why are you acting like somehow your "criticism" is so special?
I mean, Who are you?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/08 23:59:02 No.1655150
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>>1655144

On a board like this one, does it matter who the person is?

A more pertinent question might be: does the comment make a point worth considering? I believe it does, because I also think the story has pacing issues, and I also find certain turns of the plot too poorly-established to convince.

Edited at 2019/10/09 00:00:31
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Furrynomous 2019/10/09 07:06:48 No.1655247
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The story has some problems, but I definitely wouldn't want to discourage artists from trying to make porn/story comics like this. If we're going to get good ones, we have to allow less than good ones through without smacking them down, or no-one's going to try or get better.

Like, I don't wish this comic didn't exist or anything. There's a lot about it I enjoyed. Net gain overall for the genre, I think.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/09 20:49:18 No.1655432
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Points only matter when someone is willing to put their names on it. That's why they don't make these comments on the original source of the comic pages and instead do it here. If they don't have the conviction to say it directly to the artist why bother taking the statements seriously when said here under cover. Most people reply some snarky smart ass reply here just to be edgy and to see how many people they can get to either agree with it or at minimum reply to it. Few comments made here are really worth anything of value.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/09 22:13:23 No.1655458
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>>1655432
Points only matter when someone is willing to put their names on it.

Points matter to me if they make me think about something I'd call important (or something that becomes important for me when the point refers to it). Names are useful to keep track of a discussion, but names in themselves are not necessary for a discussion.

If they don't have the conviction to say it directly to the artist why bother taking the statements seriously

Because discussions of craft don't have to involve the craftsperson. The person might be long dead, but the discussion can help us understand our own reactions to a comic, a film, or a TV show. "This doesn't work for me. Okay, why doesn't it work?"

Edited at 2019/10/10 00:27:40
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Furrynomous 2019/10/14 08:38:59 No.1657503
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>>1654266
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Furrynomous 2019/10/14 11:33:20 No.1657543
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>>1657503

She watches the city form a balcony... naked? Weird.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/14 15:12:47 No.1657600
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It's her fetish
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Furrynomous 2019/10/14 15:49:56 No.1657618
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So, what will be in the next comic?
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/10/14 16:18:40 No.1657637
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Kinda hoping this ends with a preggo snek. Would be a fine ending to all this.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/14 21:46:18 No.1657714
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>>1657637
Well, that page is a few months after their first meeting so maybe that's why her stomach is obscured in those panels. A reveal on the next page possibly.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/16 07:36:10 No.1658295
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>>1657503

At this junction we can probably assume the comic is wrapping up. I doubt we'll get anymore cute romantic gooey-kablooeys between the bosomy snek and her fennec fellow.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/20 13:01:11 No.1659897
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Looks like he was actually writing a romance novel, not telling their kids a story.

>>1658295

And looks like we gonna finish it with a (literal) bang(ing)
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Furrynomous 2019/10/20 13:01:13 No.1659898
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>>1659897
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Furrynomous 2019/10/20 16:46:10 No.1659966
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>>1659898
i can imagine her trying her best just to say "fuck" and giving up right after cause she's simply not like that.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/20 21:57:06 No.1660039
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>>1657543
Ancient royalty in North Africa used to be considered divine. Assuming this is similar to the Egyptians; publicly viewable female nudity among the nobility was very common. So was male nudity.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/21 03:09:57 No.1660124
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>it was a dream all along!
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Furrynomous 2019/10/21 03:36:31 No.1660128
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>>1660124
Or he's just writing about what happened?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/21 14:01:15 No.1660370
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Okay, so how much of what he wrote was bollocks? Or is the story meant to be true?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/21 14:50:45 No.1660378
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The man's drowning in snake pussy, he could have written whatever he wanted and she wouldn't have time to check between hip-shattering royal fuck sessions
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Furrynomous 2019/10/21 22:50:20 No.1660603
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>>1660370

I mean, the Prophecy and all that must be true, he just made it more "mystical"
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Furrynomous 2019/10/22 01:04:53 No.1660646
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>>1660370
Okay, so how much of what he wrote was bollocks? Or is the story meant to be true?

The story is too ridiculous, too preposterous to be true, and so I wouldn't be surprised if everything here is fabrication, perhaps to be used as propaganda to support a corrupt or incompetent regime.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/22 23:54:38 No.1661174
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key found, key fucked, key found water, key is now king.

why this all happend?

"prophecy", duno.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/23 22:10:48 No.1661687
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Everyone is assuming the story he's written is at least partially true.

What if the big reveal is that it's just some dude and his girlfriend in their apartment writing erotic short stories for kicks?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/24 23:30:09 No.1662294
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>>1661687
or maybe it all turns out to be a drawn porn comic posted on some fetish website
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 00:24:35 No.1662309
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>>1662294

That would explain the clumsy plot.

Edited at 2019/10/25 00:33:51
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 05:42:55 No.1662370
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>>1662309
You come here for plot? Heheheeeh
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 06:43:54 No.1662399
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>>1662370

Sure, why not? Comics are a story-telling medium, even if these furry cartoonists remain unaware of its possibilities.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 11:26:52 No.1662463
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>>1662370

Viktria is...not a very good writer. I tried reading that "Welcome to New Dawn" thing and it's just a hideous pile of half-assed cliches and awkward textwall exposition. At least this comic has decent porn in it.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 18:47:47 No.1662640
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The depths you guys go into at analyzing a clearly fairytale/fantasy story, with obviously fantastical elements to begin with (you know, the Talking animals, snakes with arms/legs/tits) is so damn humorous I come here to read the comments more than I do the comics.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 19:56:46 No.1662655
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>>1662640
Comics have story, it's an important part of them, so of course it'll be discussed.
Make an image set if you just want porn.
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 21:20:41 No.1662694
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>>1662655
Shit, can we go with the "it's free so you can't complain about the story" defense instead?
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Furrynomous 2019/10/25 21:48:31 No.1662700
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>>1662694

Nope! :D
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Furrynomous 2019/10/26 10:42:51 No.1662874
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Furrynomous 2019/10/26 17:18:28 No.1662952
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I go with this guy
>>1651094

He pretty much summed it up a wile ago very well

> "So yea that pretty much "ALL" about the prophecy in a nutshell - Which pretty much is nothing tbh."
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Furrynomous 2019/10/28 08:28:21 No.1663521
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Furrynomous 2019/10/28 08:28:58 No.1663522
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Torinoaki 2019/10/28 12:12:34 No.1663673
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The last page is out
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Furrynomous 2019/10/28 16:23:30 No.1663718
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So close, yet so far... He couldn't even make it to 69 XD
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Furrynomous 2019/10/29 13:59:36 No.1664017
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Furrynomous 2019/10/29 15:57:32 No.1664038
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>>1663522
I like that their reaction is purely
>he f l u f f
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Furrynomous 2019/10/31 01:39:34 No.1664627
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>>1664038

It's kinda like us to a fluffy cat/dog to be honest. XD The first thing we do? Rub the floof!
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Furrynomous 2019/11/04 16:30:20 No.1666725
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the tauren 2019/11/04 17:20:53 No.1666738
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locked in a library is never a good sign.

** burn the book**
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Furrynomous 2019/11/04 19:18:45 No.1666757
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>>1666725
Something is going into his butt, I can tell already.
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Torinoaki 2019/11/04 20:09:20 No.1666767
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The last page PLEASE
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Furrynomous 2019/11/04 23:12:50 No.1666806
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>>1666725
"Turns out you both die of sexually transmitted boneitis 5 minutes from now, who would've guessed? Anyway good luck with that, I'm going back to the library."
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Furrynomous 2019/11/05 00:35:43 No.1666838
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Here to confuse you all
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Furrynomous 2019/11/05 08:15:33 No.1666953
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>>1666725
they are gonna have a baby <3
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Furrynomous 2019/11/05 09:27:27 No.1666979
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>>1666806
>>1666953

Last page here and... you're both wrong
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Furrynomous 2019/11/05 11:28:36 No.1667006
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Ok the last frame of the lemur guy makes me feel sad for him. He looks so dejected. D:
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the tauren 2019/11/05 13:51:24 No.1667058
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at least there will not be a whole people who imprisons their destiny by a stupid writing.

and it scares the queen again.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/08 08:24:10 No.1668114
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I dare you , the choosone one who'll make the best meme with: https://anonfile.com/F9E3j2A6ne/space_meme_psd gets a sketch from me, whatever you want. Next Friday (15.11) i'll choose a winnder.

Edited at 2019/11/08 08:26:02
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Husky92!a/kQ9NPn9U 2019/11/08 10:31:56 No.1668143
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"Pack your kingdom, we're leaving" is an amazing line AHAH!!
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Anonymouse 2019/11/08 16:07:49 No.1668221
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>>1668114

my, arent' we edgy?
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Furrynomous 2019/11/10 10:38:12 No.1669084
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>>1668221
No it's funny because Black Templars are fucking crazy.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/10 17:13:28 No.1669225
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>>1668114

> ahgowno

Poland detected
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Furrynomous 2019/11/11 08:37:31 No.1669635
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Furrynomous 2019/11/11 22:13:38 No.1670274
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Honestly I don't see what their beef is with the prophecies. The first one got him freed from slavery, got them a loving relationship, and saved her kingdom from horrible death. They seem to have turned out pretty okay!
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Furrynomous 2019/11/11 23:13:23 No.1670298
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>>1670274
Might be because of the frustration with the first one.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/12 08:13:30 No.1670444
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>>1670274
It also gave her years of anxiety and involved him working himself to the brink of death.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 05:03:09 No.1670779
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>>1670274

It's because what they did had frickin' nothing to do with what they told the prophecy was about.

Basically that priest dude translated it from a old as fuck paper written in a long-lost language, and did all wrong. Imagine following another prophecy of how they should live, also translated all wrong?
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 09:11:23 No.1670850
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 09:18:50 No.1670859
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>>1631833
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 15:22:58 No.1670929
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>>1670859
>luckily, the palace has dozens of pools in various shapes and sizes
>dozens of pools
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 15:46:03 No.1670931
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>>1670859

And luckily, the plot has inconsistencies as big as palaces.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 17:21:04 No.1670950
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How is having rich people owning something and wasting it, even if it's in high demand and scarce, impossible?
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 17:51:17 No.1670961
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>>1670950
It's not that wasteful rich people is impossible. It's that royalty getting rich on taxes and blowing it on something all the taxpayers are dying without, and not getting faced with riots or a military coup, that's nearly impossible. The same royalty being genuine bleeding hearts who want to see the needs of the commoners being met, while still being extremely wasteful, is completely impossible.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 19:17:54 No.1670981
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Are you guys really not considering this Ask can be AFTER the end of the comic (when water is now a abundant thing)?
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Furrynomous 2019/11/13 22:38:23 No.1671029
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There's also plenty of water you can swim in that you can't drink. Alkaline, brackish...
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Furrynomous 2019/11/14 01:02:03 No.1671083
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Furrynomous 2019/11/14 01:57:52 No.1671096
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>>1670981
Are you saying they had dozens of empty pools and just one giant one that was filled? Or did they construct dozens of pools to up their water usage even more?
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Furrynomous 2019/11/18 08:34:05 No.1672851
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Furrynomous 2019/11/18 08:59:21 No.1672856
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>>1672851
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Furrynomous 2019/11/18 11:41:16 No.1672943
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>>1671096

What I'm saying is they had dozens of pools build before the drought, and now water is back they managed to fill them again
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Furrynomous 2019/11/18 16:57:05 No.1673072
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idk if someone said this like a long time ago, but if they were looking for a guy to have sex with the queen they really didnt need to inspect all those naked female slaves.

Edited at 2019/11/18 16:57:32
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Furrynomous 2019/11/18 21:35:02 No.1673184
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>>1673072
Women can have sex with women too, you know
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Kiba the Messenger 2019/11/19 07:43:04 No.1673410
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Furrynomous 2019/11/19 07:58:42 No.1673417
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>>1673072
Another consideration is anyone who isn't the chosen one gets sold off.
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Furrynomous 2019/11/19 23:04:23 No.1673696
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the dialogue is a little bit rough at times, but my god, I think this is my new favorite artist. This looks amazing.
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Torinoaki 2019/11/20 08:39:32 No.1673889
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>>1672851
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Furrynomous 2019/11/20 18:48:55 No.1674079
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Where is the page were shen wears he's kings Clothing?

>>1476460
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Furrynomous 2019/12/05 05:01:21 No.1680359
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>>1672851

because a mostly fennec monstrosity baby is gonna scream. a lot
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Furrynomous 2019/12/17 02:43:18 No.1685750
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>>1672851
I WILL SURVIVE
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Furrynomous 2019/12/17 17:08:15 No.1686124
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>>1672851
LA CREATURA
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Kajex Surnahm 2019/12/18 18:59:32 No.1686574
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Maybe it'll be like a Nightstalker. :3 Nothin' wrong with these adorable snekpuppers.
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Furrynomous 2020/05/13 06:21:03 No.1753504
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Is there going to be a prophecy 2
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Furrynomous 2020/10/24 01:18:54 No.1836655
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>>1753504

Maybe it will be...

Probably

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