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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:17:54 No.1607390   
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:19:07 No.1607391
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The day had finally come. The poor mare barely slept that night. She was kept up tossing and turning with thoughts of her biggest fantasies soon to come true. Her kind and dominant Coywolf partner had made enticing arrangements for her. She was to be whisked away to an unfamiliar place to meet a group of unfamiliar men. He had spent months teasing her about the subject. He only sprang on her the night before that her day off from work would be spent much different than the rest.

The gorgeous woman slept nude the night before, knowing she would soak through any panties she wore. She was so sensitive to the touch that even her sheets brushing over her slit sent shivers down her spine. Of course, this only prompted her to sleep face down, hips slowly rolling against the sheets. This delivered several orgasms over the span of a long sleepless night.

Her partner arrived early that morning to pick her up, letting himself in to her room as they were accustomed to. She was prepared, standing before him nude with a big smile on her face. They greeted with a warm embrace and a good firm squeeze of her ass before he set to work. He grabbed her black robe, wrapping it around her before tying it. Next, came a blindfold. She was all pleased nickers and whinnies at this point, already squeezing her thighs together. Finally, dressed her with a beautiful dark leather halter he got just for this occasion. He took the reins, leading her towards his car without another word.

Sage spent the entire ride with her lower half trembling in anticipation. They pulled up after quite some time, and her partner led her inside, once again, by her reins. Sage was on lust overdrive. Her nostrils flared, her long tail swishing excitedly behind her. Her hooves clacked on concrete. She was in a barn. The air was filled with an intense musk. Stallions. Her heart was pounding so hard that she thought it would make her breasts jiggle. He lead her into a room, dropping her reins to her front. Her nipples poked eagerly through the thin fabric of the nightgown. Her slit was soaked to the point that she thought she might drip to the floor if she spread her legs. He spanked her ass once, hard, and told her to have fun before the door shut behind her.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:20:31 No.1607392
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Immediately, the sound of hooves began approaching her from all angles. Sage let out a heavy whinny that ended in a genuine moan. Her reins were grabbed, her head pulled slightly to the side. A massive booming voice spoke from a considerable distance above her.

"This is going to be a good one, boys." He stated, his free hand roughly tearing her robe open. "Perky breasts.. firm nipples... Flat tummy... Thick hips... Fat ass... Soaking wet pussy... It's all here." He said, sounding pleased.

All at once, multiple pairs of hands began feeling her up. Some went for her neck, some groped at her breasts, the biggest stallion went straight for her slit. He pressed two immense fingers against her, grinding against her with a pleased nicker.

"She's ready." He commanded, reaching up to pull her blindfold off. He was a jet black Clydesdale, standing nearly three feet taller than her. He was rippling with muscles... And then Sage's eyes met the monstrous cock that was rock hard and mere inches from her. She let out a loud gasp, her head turning to realize there were half a dozen stallions around her, and more in waiting.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:21:50 No.1607394
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The Clydesdale grabbed her reins, pulling her until her tiny body pressed against the skyscraper that was his. His immense cock nearly reached her breasts. An absurd amount of precum already coated it with slick, which transferred over to her silky pale tan fur. Sage couldn't even speak; any time she opened her mouth, gasps escaped. A Friesian grabbed her shoulders from behind, guiding her backwards until she fell back on to a pile of hay bales. A pair of Arabians grabbed her thighs, spreading her legs and pinning them there. Of course, she would have kept them spread of her own free will. The Clydesdale approached, grabbing her reins to keep a tight grip on her.

"You're ours all day. Maybe longer, if Chewy 'forgets' to come back for you." He said with a throaty laugh, other stallions nickering in response.

Sage looked around once more, noticing nearly a dozen powerful men. They were all nude and rock hard just for her. The Clydesdale stood at her side on the hay pile, looking down at her. He lifted his heavy cock, dropping it and his musky balls across her face.

"Breathe deep. Get used to being our toy." He demanded. Sage inhaled as if it was her first breath of fresh air in months. The scent of these powerful men was intoxicating. All this treatment was working her up even more than she thought possible.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:23:04 No.1607395
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She watched on as hands wandered her body, the men taking turns groping her breasts, fingering her slit, trailing down to her ass, and so on. They each hung their thick cocks over her face in turn. They all loved grinding against her to give the poor mare a face full of what she was about to be feeling. Her tongue desperately licked at anything she could taste, which left her a writhing mess.

Unable to resist any longer, the Clydesdale demanded she got pinned in place. The two Arabians pulled her legs apart, holding them wide. Their free hands teased their cocks in anticipation. An appaloosa and a Morgan each took an arm, pinning them above her head while they teased their cocks over her face. The ringleader stepped between her thighs, showing her just how far up her torso his immense length would reach.

"You belong to the boys now." He growled, positioning himself against her once-used slit.

The massive cock pressed against her, stretching her out so wide she thought she'd split in two. Sage gasped and whinnied loudly, feeling an incredible amount of pleasure through being stretched so wide. His broad cock slid into her with ease, her soaking wet slit welcoming every inch of the beast eagerly. Her limbs remained pinned down, the other men stroking their cocks over her torso. Precum dripped from each of them, matting her fur until she was a slick mess from neck to knees. Her poor tummy bulged as the thick cock thrusted inside her. The stallion braced himself on either side of her hips for stability. He leaned down closer, his massive head inches from her lips. His nostrils flared, powerful gusts of wind hitting her face with each of his labored breaths.

A few moments of his thrusting went by like this until finally, he began to pick up his pace. A cock as large as his didn't even entirely fit, but he was pounding her so hard that his thick balls slapped against her cute ass with every thrust. The greedy stallions were all over her, her limbs pinned, cocks grinding against her face. The first orgasm came from an eager voyeur who shot an ample load over her breasts, coating her for the first time. Meanwhile the Clydesdale got closer to his own release.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 21:24:25 No.1607396
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Panting breaths and nickers finally gave way to loud grunts. His hips pummeled her in to the hay before he buried every last inch of cock inside her. His orgasm was so powerful that it could be viewed through the bulge of her tummy. His massive cock throbbed, his heavy balls pounding her full of hot cum to beyond her capacity... And this was just number one. He pulled out, rounding her to once again place his heavy cock across her face, this time coating her in a mix of his cum and hers. He opened her mouth, demanding she lick him clean, which she eagerly did.

Her pussy only had a few seconds to leak the hot cum out of it before another stallion was in the Clydesdale's place. A lengthy cock pounded into her by a rapid fire Arabian, immediately pounding her with race-horse stamina. By now, the crowd around her left no open space. A dozen cocks poised over her, being stroked and teased, her eyes unable to fixate on just one point of view. The herd of men had plenty saved up for her, as was evidenced by the occasional orgasm that distributed across her face, breasts, or abdomen.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 23:35:22 No.1607438
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The gang had her completely pinned, arms and legs pinned wide. They took turns pounding cum deep in to her slit, rounding the bales of hay to shove their soaked lengths down her throat. They let her gag with little regard, making sure she sucked the cum-coating off their shafts one after another. Sage quickly lost all concept of time, and furthermore, concept of self. She was mindlessly consumed by her pleasure. Her entire body trembled in excitement as cocks took turns stretching her out, sometimes two at once. Nothing was off limits. She couldn't object even if she wanted to. More often than not, her throat was clenching around the flared head of a stallion climaxing deep inside her.

Sage's entire day was spent in this fashion. With such a large group of stallions eager to use her, there was never a shortage of aroused men waiting while the rest recovered. Her orgasm count was so high that it felt more like a continuous climax as opposed to several. Her body was coated in cum, her belly bulging from being pumped full dozens of times. Her throat was sore and so was the rest of her body, but she was in absolute bliss.

Finally, the crowd started to die down. The cute little Mare was so coated in cum that she looked like she was entirely white instead of a dark buckskin. Her slit squeezed repeatedly, never able to empty herself of all the hot cum still keeping her filled. She was left on the hay pile, the Clydesdale being the last to use her. He fucked her so hard that she nearly passed out during her next orgasm. He pulled out and shot cum from her drenched slit up to her face, leaving her panting and gasping. He praised her in for being a good mare, spending several moments rewarding her. He made her lick his cock clean once again before patting her head, then leaving, shutting off the lights behind him.
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Sage and the Stallion Furrynomous 2019/06/28 23:37:07 No.1607441
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A few moments passed before Chewy returned, a cocky grin on his face. "You should see yourself." He teased, helping her up. He lead her by her reins to the attached bathroom, depositing her in the shower. That in itself took a solid hour of shampoo, conditioner, and repeating. The Mare was still so pleased that she hummed happily through the whole process. Once done, Chewy wrapped his pet in her black robe once more, leading her outside in to the darkness of late evening. He brought her home, where a light dinner was waiting. Despite her fulfilling day, the obedient Mare still stayed nude for her master, wearing her halter and nothing else while they ate, just because he loved the view.

Sage settled in to her bed that night a changed woman. She would never forget how it felt to have dozens of Stallions using her at once. In fact, if she was a good girl, she'd get to experience it again. This thought excited her greatly, prompting her to lay face down on her bed, absentmindedly grinding on her sheets as she drifted off. Dreams of strong men pinning her down filled her mind, leaving her beyond content with the life she had built herself. It left her even more glad that her partner could help make her dreams come true.
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Furrynomous 2019/06/30 16:36:43 No.1608126
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>>1607391
I like, but you make the mistake of telling, rather than showing, in the narrative. You really need to trim the narrative so that you don't end up with a wall of text in each panel:

For example, the first paragraph:

The day had finally come. The poor mare barely slept that night. She was kept up tossing and turning with thoughts of her biggest fantasies soon to come true. Her kind and dominant Coywolf partner had made enticing arrangements for her. She was to be whisked away to an unfamiliar place to meet a group of unfamiliar men. He had spent months teasing her about the subject. He only sprang on her the night before that her day off from work would be spent much different than the rest.

...needs what I call a "slash and burn" edit:

She had barely slept that night, tossing and turning with visions of the enticing fantasy. Arrangements had been made. Her coywolf partner had spent months teasing her about it. He had surprised her the previous night, telling her that she would spend her day off much differently than she ever had before.
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Furrynomous 2019/07/02 21:47:01 No.1609006
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>>1608126

If the author was intending to make a comic, I agree. Although, this comes off as an illustrated short story to me. it is a thing, but I think we need to keep in mind the initial intent of the author.

With every work, improvements can and should be made. However, we must be vigilant in not providing critique that abolishes the purpose of the work.

Still, show don't tell is a valid point that both comic and short story writers can use to improve regardless of format.

Wolfpsalm, if you are reading this, keep up the good work!

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