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Honestly I'm liking this story direction. One, as far as porn goes I'm into the taboo of it, if the dad approves it's kinda less hot. I don't want scenes of them cuddling sweetly in bed, I want scenes of them sneaking into a janitors closet and doing oral because "dad can't keep us separated at school unless he wants to tell the principal we'll fuck at any given opportunity"
Two, as far as character building goes, the twins are doing a lot out of convenience here. We need a conflict to show what the twins are willing and unwilling to do. That builds character. If by some miracle they do stop fucking, will they stay romantically involved? Will they run away so they can persue their desires? I want to know.
Three, they're in high-school, thats their dad. Even if he is OK with the weird incest situation, they're kids. Idc if yall aren't putting this in cub or whatever, they're idiot high-school students who are barely legal if they are even legal. Risk of pregnancy is a problem. More so, the destroyed reputation from banging your sibling would completly alienate you from your peers. The twins would get separated from eachother and their father by social services. So, EVEN IF THE DAD IS OK WITH IT, they need to stop because they're TERRIBLE at hiding it.
And finally, the comic has good characters, but a change of scenery sounds nice. Maybe we fast forward to them at college. Maybe they run away and live somewhere new. Maybe they each get their own bedroom now. I dunno but the comic needs a shake up somewhere. Characters? Good. The scenery? Kinda played out at this point. Not much else to explore.
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