>Great art. Great story. >Great story. Please, this reads as if it was written by teenager who still holds their v-card and thinks this is how people talk. Is English even their native tongue? I know some people will overlook poor writing and dialogue in a porn comic if the images are good and the bodies are drawn well, but as I have gotten older I need my porn stories to read a little bit better for me to enjoy them. It is actually quite hard to find content that is both drawn well and reads naturally.
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