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This is really cute! Wholesome cub ftw :)
I'm sorry the cancel culture is a thing and is stupid. We've all been enjoying TLK cub art for 20+ years lmao!
Anyways, general suggestions:
(1) Frame 18 when Nala pauses, she's never had her muzzle -this close- between Simba's legs before. She notices Simba's "thingy" has probably retreated into his sheath a little.
Instead of straight to oral sex, it could go something like this:
Nala: Your, uhm, y'know, is almost back inside. Do you still want...?
Simba: Oh, only if you want
Nala moves in closer, nuzzling at his sheath and balls out of curiosity. Simba gets bigger.
Nala: Oh! There it is.
Nala blushes and hesitates, uncertain of what to do next. She's seen Sarabi's large tongue between Simba's hind legs many times, but where exactly, and how exactly did she...?
Nala closes her eyes and licks, her tongue curling around Simba's sac as she starts to lick. He doesn't taste too different than herself 'down there.' Simba's leg twitches as his penis grows a bit. Nala opens her eyes when she hears Simba moan.
Nala: That didn't work at all, it got bigger...
Simba: T-try the tip.
Nala readjusts her muzzle. Now -that- looks very different than what she's used to. She sticks her tongue out and licks tentatively... and finds out it tastes... interesting? She licks more, unable to describe it, until her muzzle is wrapped around his penis.
Simba: O-oh, you're soo a-amazing...
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(2) Frame 23, it seems you could reference Frame 5 here a bit. Simba knows Nala looks a little different and smells a little different. He doesn't know -what- or -why- but he just likes it! Something like:
Simba pounced playfully on Nala's lifted hindquarters like he had done a hundred times, but he knew immediately this time was different. Just like in the race, she looked.. different. He pushed his muzzle under her tail and sniffed. She smelled different too. She smelled... good.
Nala: S-simba! You're never going to win by just /sniffing.
Simba, blinking: Yeah? Well how's -this-!
Simba gives her a big lick between her legs. He doesn't really know what he's doing or where to lick, just kinda from groin-to-tailhole, but he does go over a spot that makes Nala's knees wobble. Nala whimpers. Simba notices.
Simba: Hah! What was that?
Simba leans in to lick more intently at that spot- the tiny folds between her legs. She tastes different here. Not just fur, but... something else. He likes it. His tongue goes -inside- of her a little, even!
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