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Finally got around to reading the book. Well more of heavily skimming through most of it. And it's not bad, and there are things I want closer on as it leaves on a cliff hanger. But it's not enough for me to buy the book itself.
It's not out right Bad. But having access to Sofurry, inkbunny, and other sites with furry stories that's free. There is much better stories, and much better erotic that's better written. It's not bad... But it isn't "Good". It's just... a thing that exists?
Doesn't help that there is only ONE actual "Sex Scene", that is more vague and shorter than anything you'd find on any other furry story. Only like, 3-4 paragraphs only. That's it. And once it's done, there is NOTHING else afterwards. It just rushes right to the ending of the story. Just event, after event, after event, no stopping, no relaxing, no taking time.
And the "Scene" before that sex scene that is 'Erotic' is just 2 scenes of hand jobs, and one scene of a different female dominating the main character, giving him a tail job while forcing him to eat her out. But that last doesn't go anywhere else and never talked about or brought up again. It just... Exists, it happened. Then never mentioned again. Could have been removed and never effect the story.
And.... That's it. The first half of the story doesn't have anything Erotic, only the ending, and as I pointed out, only 4 total erotic scenes. And that's it. And there are all kinda... Meh. Except the Different dominate female one. That one was nice, but it never goes anywhere.
If this is just part 1 of more, I'll be interested in reading more. But it doesn't seem like there is any more continuation, and it leaves on a cliff hanger with no answers or pay off.
Like literally, the entire story is basically the Prologue of a massive story it feels like. Like in Lord of the Rings, picture if the first Lord of the Rings Book ended just as Frodo and the hobbits made it out of the Shire, got onto the boat away from the Wraith Rider... And then ended. Right there. A build up to a much bigger story, but it doesn't deliver. It's literally just the prologue to a bigger story.
I hope there are more books, I'm curious and interested. But not enough to buy it.
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