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Allright people lets do this one last time, kay?
I lost the track of this "arc" whats was all this about exactly? lets see, lizerd girl comes to the farm, economic crisis on the field, crazy cats got mate, dog and bunny got laid like brazzirs films, Mary sue got big money problem and comes with deux ex beer machina and problem solve, plus time jump skip and spirits are adults now.
Okay lets see, i'm not an expert, but i sure think that there are things that are bad writing.
Too many things happening, i dont even know whats the title of this chapter, seriously you can at leats give me some ideas about whats to expect about, was the money problem? the wedding? the cats? the geeku?
Once again, somehow Mary sue got her problem solve out of camera and everyone is happy by random beer idea, its a very bland to see it done just like that, i wish in real life i could got my problems solve by random ideas just like that, but when you see a character almost magicly solving her problems that makes me an issue about the story. i dont see her struggle like Ajs story. i can do this all day, if you are telling me that Hey its a furry comic, dont take it seriously, well then why everyone is looking it as is a good comic, i mean, good writing at least? if i was five and i droll over gigant tits thats other thing but the fact that people is paying for this, dude try to make a good writing not just big tits and marie sue.
the others, well not much to say, bunny virgin gal is now pro woman, not much to say it, but back when there was that story with the other cat and there was all this moral things between, it was just like: well let then fuck already and done, and was that it at the end.
cats mating, well maybe some of us was specting that, and it came out of nowhere, maybe a few talk before, some build up to the moment, and a better place, almost like the other couple, but that happen, also make rachel like she cant think in a missionary pose thing.
last thing, the time skip jump makes it miss so much in between, not everyproblem is solve in a time skip when you are in a character with those problem at the door? it like Harry potter jumping from discovering how to beat the bad final boss and we jump to the brige scene where he say the wand was mine so i win.
Chalo, I envy you man, you draw a good pair of boobs and a Mary Sue and people pay you good money for it.
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