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Hard to reply to all the posts/questions here at once. I don't check here often.
Bailey is not really supposed to be 'fat', no, I'm still very much practicing her body type. I'm not god-tier, and will certainly make mistakes with stuff like this, but I'm gonna keep trying. I'm aiming for a "thick" body type with a bit of pudge, but if it's straying too far off of that idea, I'll try toning it back some as I go.
People seem split on whether they like my comic/porn dialogue or not. Yes, I would HOPE that it doesn't sound cringey, unless intended, but I won't know til I try, right? Everything's an experiment. If my dialogue isn't improving, I have no problems with reaching out to some more writers for feedback. I want my comics to be as good as they can be. (ie. fappable, enjoyable)
I like reading U18 since the thicker veil of anonymity provides more "honest" feedback at times. Some of you really don't hold your punches when it comes to critique or stuff you don't like. That's good for identifying problems with my work...but I'm also thrilled when people say they enjoy my art, characters, dialogue, etc, because you aren't required to suck up or flatter me. If the anonymity of places like U18 means more honesty, it works both ways. The compliments and critique mean a lot.
Obviously I don't endorse 'leaking' all my stuff here, but as I've said before: it's the internet, it'll happen, and all the art will be posted publicly later anyway. All I can hope is that if folks find my work worth supporting, they know where to support it. And if some folks don't like it? That's fine too. I cannot please everyone, I get that, I'm not the best, I just want to bring more good art and characters to the fandom.
Thank you anons for the critiques and compliments that I hope help me improve on the work I make!
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