Maybe this is a hot take, but have you ever had a friend you have a fucked up dynamic with? Now imagine you and that friend start fucking and find yourself romantically involved.
I’ve also had a guy I was with tell me he could take me if he wanted, while he was holding me down. I wasn’t friends with that guy but it turned me on. I think he knew I would be into it because of how submissive I can be.
Some people have fucked up dynamics. You have two characters who are both questionable quality people. So writing them this way works and makes sense.
With that said… I still think the writing isn’t great
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