God almighty the writing is a turn-off. Brown fox guy is the essence of bitchiness. You fucking agree to have sex on your bed and you complain about your precious satin bedsheets getting stained? Fuck off. It sounds like I'm reading "Memoirs of a Typical West-Coast Size-Queen."
Not to mention that the art doesn't really fit the words. In the first page why is the collie pissed when asked if e wants to hear the story? No backstory is included, and it just makes him as well seem nauseatingly bitchy.
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