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The most problem here for both characters (not the plot, the characters) is they both are slanted and liars, Elder is like "Due your father died by dragons then ALL the dragons are evil", also he never told him how he knew him and what happened with his father; and Farin with his Frozen argument "but elder, it's real love" ignoring the possibility Sekk'Ral is lying someway too, also he never told he's dating with a dragon. That's why I cannot feel some empathy with both characters, I feel more empathy with his friends, who trusted in Farin but they saw the shocking true.
Sekk'ral is THE Gary stu one, because he doesn't have faults or imperfections, he's the perfect handsome and kindly proyection and he doesn't have human errors or things he could count like awkward or shameful, he's living a full and quite life free of preoccupations, he's the top model of "sexy men"... and this is OK, because the story isn't for Sekk'ral, it's for Farin, and that's why I complain of this.
Farin isn't anything, he's nothing, he's nobody, he doesn't have something interesting, he's this: "omg a dragon! He saved me, he's sexy, I love him, but he could hate me for that, oh no he woke up when I was touching him! but he forgave me and we had sex although I acted like egoistic bitch, and due my lie I have problems with elder and I'm so sad.. but I think I'm good and I'm correct loving a dragon, because he's good and it's real love". We need a correct protagonist, we need someone we could feel identified, but this comic has the anime idiot useless crying protagonists, doing nothing and having all the attention for stupid things, in this time and this part of the comic I feel nothing for Farin.
I'm not saying the comic is bad, I'm saying Farin is a joke [FOR NOW], we don't know what will happen, ~maybe~ a plot twist or a good develop character, but if we didn't have a Farin's develop character in the first chapter, what he could do now? I'll criticize this comic when the comic finishes, and this chapter when the chapter finishes, but I'm critizing Farin [FOR NOW] because I HATE HIM NOW.
Edited at 2018/06/05 08:24:41
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