>>1165924
The short answer is kind of.
I think that one of the biggest appeals to the furrydom is the ability to have porn with a story. It is for me; hence my long background of reading and writing erotic fanfiction that, hopefully, is lost forever for I am a trash writer.
However, I am slightly skeptical that this deserves a bigger story because the main appeal of it is a mixture of semi-rare fetishes that, despite being incredibly hot, is significantly underplayed.
Note that you see the potential for a story, but that is merely the assumption of a surrounding narrative based on what is, surprisingly, decent dialogue. Yes, there is a trope to these characters, but they have clearly defined goals and positions from the outset with a somewhat believable (for a porn comic anyway) outset.
1. The thief and his mount are gay. They like to do more than rob, they are a hedgeknight that get a kick out of dominating and fucking lords.
2. The prince is reacting out of duty and speaking learned lines. Notice the choice of words when he's going into battle (even giving the minor peptalk of lord-in-training to his mount) vs afterwards. He is broken, yes, but there is no preparation. He was raped. He came. And by that process, did he like it? How does he handle this?
3. The midnight drake loses himself to carnal pleasures because its new and he's hopeless, but this is tied to the fact he is legitimately concerned, yet the duality of our empathy is that we can see something we detest and yet the instincts rise up with arousal. His prince is getting ruined in front of him, yet he's unable to block out the arousal of the sight and the submission.
4. The ending keeps the characters in this world, solidifying the surrounding narrative. The prince has to find an excuse for his father. He has to deal with being dominated not just by a dishonest joust but having given up his manhood to someone else. (Note: this isn't to say bottoms lack a manhood, but one simply loses their identity after being raped regardless of sex and being forcibly penetrated is one of the worst psychological horrors any of us civilized folk are likely to face.)
Now on to your question, should this be a full story? I contend no. While a sequel or related story could be good, these characters are not ACTUALLY fleshed out. The writer had a decent sense of how to create the illusion of depth without actually saying anything, and they are essentially really good for their job; they are pawns to be used to make people aroused and to feed into certain fetishes.
Yet, not all of the actions and choices make sense, and it's difficult to imagine the prince's personal sentient mount could actually be too distracted to fight back because he liked a tongue against his ass. Further, the sequel would have to deal with something of a heavy burden that, while interesting, wouldn't make much money and could actually reduce the fun and brevity of this comic. The illusion of the art is here enough without it burdening the comic.
Consider it, if there were an immediate sequel, would this one seem better if the prince became an instant slut? No. The prince of this comic suddenly looks worse and less interesting. Let's say he goes the rape-victim route, in which case, the plot of this one takes a dark undertone and should make this comic worse. (Although, some guys are into that. I'm not.)
Ultimately, this is my opinion. BUT you asked for an opinion, so there ya go.
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