This is a halfway decent comic, but I have a few problems with it.
1) These people are all supposed to be... what? At least 18, I'd assume, given the artist and that it's on FA (and they have a strict no-cub policy as long as the artist isn't sucking 'Neer's balls on a regular basis), as well as their discussion about sex toys and pregrnancy. But between his style and the middle-school drama, they all come off as being 12-14 at the oldest.
2) The writing. Jeebus, that writing. On top of unnecessary preteen tension (How dare you lose your half of the necklace? Don't you love me? And you! How dare you help him look for it?), everyone in this comic is a compulsive talker, saying things with three times as many words as what's required in order to get their intended point across to whomever they're speaking to (see what I did there?). And the artist doesn't seem to understand the concept of "show, don't tell," narrating scenes that could, and probably should, have been illustrated.
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