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Extra Duty by Brokowski Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:14:25 No.1157044

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:14:50 No.1157045

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:14:51 No.1157046

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>>1157045

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:14:53 No.1157047

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>>1157045

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:14:54 No.1157048

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>>1157045

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:20 No.1157049

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:22 No.1157050

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>>1157049

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:23 No.1157051

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>>1157049

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:24 No.1157052

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>>1157049

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:48 No.1157053

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:49 No.1157054

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>>1157053

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:50 No.1157055

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>>1157053

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:15:52 No.1157056

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>>1157053

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:19 No.1157057

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:21 No.1157058

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>>1157057

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:22 No.1157059

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>>1157057

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:23 No.1157060

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>>1157057

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:40 No.1157061

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Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:42 No.1157062

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>>1157061

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:16:43 No.1157063

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>>1157061

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 10:57:14 No.1157068

Holy shit, this is, like, a whole new level of gay furry porn quality.

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 11:32:14 No.1157074

>>1157068
Up or down?

Wulfy 2016/10/01 12:18:58 No.1157087

>>1157068
Saw this on e621 the other day, and my initial reaction was to complain about the art style... but unlike the shitty artists we have elsewhere on this site, this comic is actually...kinda fucking hot. So I gave it a pass. XD

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 13:01:25 No.1157095

the crude art style has a charm to it, it's not fucking horrible like the cyber claw comics,

Furrynomous 2016/10/01 18:38:37 No.1157150

Ya also kinda look like Rean and stripy art style

J'Kierro 2016/10/01 21:16:42 No.1157221

Ren and Stimpy art style

Furrynomous 2016/10/02 04:32:23 No.1157335

The art style is... Definitely unique. And not in a bad way either. It's very well written, with a delicious abundance of double entendres. And the premise is hot too. The art style... It's grotesque, but in a deliberate way. The off-putting character designs have intent behind them, which, for me at least, translates to the porn actually being enjoyable in spite of the ugly ways that the characters are depicted. Though I understand why some would hate it. Compare this to something like cyberklaw, whose artwork is unintentionally disgusting. He has no grasp of anatomy or shading or flow. His colors are all over the place and his lines are indifferent. He is deeply untalented and his art suffers for it. Cyberklaw's work is inept, this comic is stylized. I know I just wasted several hundred words overanalyzing furry porn comics, but in any case I quite like it and am looking forward to more.

Furrynomous 2016/10/02 10:37:55 No.1157405

Is there more ?

Furrynomous 2016/10/02 12:53:27 No.1157441

I am..... quite conflicted as to what to think about this art...
And, come on, I understand the urge to bring up Cyberklaw as a negative example but there's no need to be scornful about it. He's human too, ya know. Heavens forbid someone without talent to do what he enjoys.

Furrynomous 2016/10/02 16:46:00 No.1157552

>>1157335
please, I would LOVE to see your exquisite art style

Furrynomous 2016/10/02 19:27:27 No.1157615

>>1157552
But...the guy you're responding to ISN'T talking shit about this comic, in fact he's liking it. Do you not have reading comprehension? He was saying how, in comparison to Cyberclaw, that the art in this here comic is actually more stylized then with the usual cancerous looking drawings Cyber does.

>The art style is... Definitely unique. And not in a bad way either

Fuck the first few words even show he is not talking shit you dumbass

Edited at 2016/10/02 19:29:32

Furrynomous 2016/10/03 02:51:55 No.1158067

I'm in the same boat as some of the other comments here. I almost skipped passed this one thinking the art style was just asking for trouble, and it ended up being pretty damn hot.

Furrynomous 2016/10/03 03:26:11 No.1158070

>>1157552
Guys, I found Cyberkantdraw. :O

Furrynomous 2016/10/03 21:07:31 No.1158375

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Guys, this comic is fucking disgusting. Someone is really enjoying it?

Furrynomous 2016/10/03 23:24:41 No.1158519

>>1158375
Yes

Your point?

Furrynomous 2016/10/04 01:36:55 No.1158746

>>1158375
I can't fap to it, but I can enjoy it from an artistic perspective. It's gross but done intentionally to show the imperfect characters, I think.

Furrynomous 2016/10/04 05:08:11 No.1158786

It starts off looking pretty disgusting. But as the comic progresses it's getting distinctly more and more adorable. At first I thought it was just me getting used to the style. But no the first page is still more disgusting than the last page.
By the time it reaches page 6 it has officially hit ugly cute. And I love every second of it.

Furrynomous 2016/10/05 12:17:03 No.1159197

>>1157044
Eewww

Furrynomous 2016/10/06 14:42:16 No.1159584

One of the most unappealing comics ever, this is like if John K did porn, fucking gross.

Furrynomous 2016/10/07 10:02:39 No.1159900

If you've ever seen someone draw while on LSD the art is usually very stylistic and comes out looking something like this comic... just saying.

Furrynomous 2016/10/08 02:44:33 No.1160404

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My phone did a thing and I thought it was funny

Quark 2016/10/08 02:50:41 No.1160405

>>1160404
Okay that's pretty great, but you should still tag it as a macro

As for the comic, in the words of Anais: "Ugly cute." I couldn't agree more with the consensus. It's really weird.

>>1158786
I didn't even read your comment and those were the exact words that popped up in my mind!

Edited at 2016/10/08 02:55:38

Furrynomous 2016/10/08 09:39:27 No.1160522

Holy fuck, finally some goddamn original style that is hot and not-japanese. I have nothing against kemono (I love it), but, man, what a breath of fresh air in a world where everyone tries to draw in the same style. Pretty good inspiration there.

Furrynomous 2016/10/08 09:41:47 No.1160525

>>1159584
You never watched the adult version of Ren and Stimpy, did you?

Furrynomous 2016/10/09 06:19:43 No.1160962

This style at first was a little rough but it seems to get better as the comic progresses. The flawed characters are a plus because I was kinda getting tired of perfect furry characters in just about everything. The roughness seems to translate into hotter scenes. I wanna see where this artist is going with future comics.

Furrynomous 2016/10/09 12:41:18 No.1161026

>>1158375
I fapped like... three times

Furrynomous 2016/10/11 08:40:51 No.1161986

This is literally the best shit ever. It's like ren and stimpy porn. I fapped to this for like and hour.

Furrynomous 2016/10/11 11:23:50 No.1162011

>>1161026
>>1161986
>I fapped this for a thousand hours
so this is how a shill works

Furrynomous 2016/10/12 19:38:59 No.1162401

Are furries really such a bunch of prisses that this is too ugly and crude somehow?

At least it seems some have been won over by the writing.

Furrynomous 2016/10/12 19:46:44 No.1162403

>>1162401

Sure it's disgusting and does absolutely nothing for me in that way, but it's refreshingly different and was interesting enough to be worth 10 minutes of my time.

Furrynomous 2016/10/14 18:14:55 No.1163283

>>1162401
Lots of furries are. They have trouble if characters aren't depicted a certain way. It's either a nightmare for artists because of how nitpicky they can be or the artist was lazy and just copies the same basic shit and characters all look the goddamn same.

Ender22 2016/10/14 23:50:47 No.1163390

This is like smutty Ren & Stimpy, the fetish dialog is not my bag, but people need to STFU about art they did not pay for or support.

Furrynomous 2016/10/17 08:28:34 No.1164224

The fuck

Leme 2016/10/25 17:08:09 No.1167790

I seriously love this lol

Furrynomous 2016/10/25 17:32:53 No.1167797

>>1163390
Which art exactly?
The kind that all looks the same?

Furrynomous 2016/10/26 03:04:42 No.1167930

>>1163390
people have the right to comment on artwork. It's part of what makes this a message board. Expressing our appreciation and disdain.

But I will have you know that I fucking love this comic and fapped furiously to it multiple times.

Furrynomous 2016/10/27 04:15:19 No.1168629

It's like if Adult Swim made a gay furry porn comic

Furrynomous 2016/11/02 15:45:17 No.1171374

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Furrynomous 2016/11/02 15:45:19 No.1171375

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>>1171374

Freaky Lynx 2016/11/02 20:19:57 No.1171516

>>1171375

Ah goody, we get to see Aubry open up a little ;)

Furrynomous 2016/11/03 16:11:43 No.1171954

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Furrynomous 2016/11/03 16:39:47 No.1171964

The art looks cute now! :D

Extra Duty RBN 2016/11/04 13:40:21 No.1172282

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Furrynomous 2016/11/04 19:18:04 No.1172357

Nice, second bottom for the inevitable upcoming gay sex orgy

SexyFox90 2016/11/07 15:59:23 No.1173728

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Enjoy. Just found this one!!

Furrynomous 2016/11/07 18:27:23 No.1173773

Yeah... not sure if art style changed or I have become accustomed to it .... this is surprising bearable now

... Freaky Lynx 2016/11/07 19:36:43 No.1173786

>>1173773

Looks like it's softened slightly, plus they've just been talking for a few panels so we haven't seen any drawings with excess fluids in them.

Furrynomous 2016/11/09 12:29:07 No.1175030

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Furrynomous 2016/11/11 08:59:35 No.1175715

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Furrynomous 2016/11/11 12:05:09 No.1175747

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>>1175715

Furrynomous 2016/11/11 13:32:49 No.1175799

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... Freaky Lynx 2016/11/11 18:57:16 No.1175885

>>1175799

Sometimes all it takes to go from bi-curious to full on flame is a few drinks.

Edited at 2016/11/11 18:57:59

Furrynomous 2016/11/11 21:25:30 No.1175925

>>1175799
okay.. yeah... I'm really sorry but the art is gross again

Furrynomous 2016/11/11 22:06:23 No.1175939

>>1175799
idk if the artist is trying too hard to define the style because it makes the first page look better than now

... Freaky Lynx 2016/11/12 09:06:13 No.1176062

>>1175925

It's the sex, the artist seems inspired by the word 'Squelch'

Furrynomous 2016/11/12 10:40:11 No.1176115

>>1176062
rule 34 of the word "moist"

Furrynomous 2016/11/14 14:16:36 No.1177546

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Furrynomous 2016/11/14 15:43:33 No.1177598

>>1177546
And we're back to ugly-cute.

Furrynomous 2016/11/14 18:02:49 No.1177667

>>1177546
I've got fucked by everyone in the bar but hey, I still love him.

... Freaky Lynx 2016/11/14 19:45:09 No.1177692

>>1177546

Quite a leap from distaste at handjobs to letting everyone in the bar play a round with him. Wonder if he'll think differently when he sobers up.

Furrynomous 2016/11/14 21:36:10 No.1177718

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>>1160404
oh shit hes actually using it as his id

guess hes got a good sense of humor about it

Furrynomous 2016/11/15 14:34:30 No.1178033

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Furrynomous 2016/11/15 15:57:15 No.1178048

I wonder if Denton or the Doberman are sober enough to keep track of everyone and make sure they get payment from all the guys making use of Hardy and Aubry. Probably getting a fairly good payout; I can't imagine a nice dude like Dentonwould rent Hardy out cheap after knowing that he's a top-class pegboy.

Furrynomous 2016/11/16 21:18:48 No.1178499

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Furrynomous 2016/11/17 10:12:31 No.1178633

>>1178499
Okay, better page again.

Furrynomous 2016/11/17 15:25:53 No.1178709

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Furrynomous 2016/11/17 15:44:03 No.1178711

The artist must be US Navy irl. The first pages are literally word for word how my day went on deployment. He even has the same rate as me. TOO CLOSE TO HOME MAN.

Furrynomous 2016/11/17 15:58:52 No.1178713

>>1178711
i hear you bro, it's a little different when your green side but roughly the same.

Furrynomous 2016/11/17 21:02:56 No.1178801

>>1178711
Don't ask don't tell.

Furrynomous 2016/11/18 16:39:04 No.1179212

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Royal 2016/11/20 21:58:25 No.1180021

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>>1178711
confirmed. He even made an autobiographical comic about his experiences there. Real talk that shit hit me in places i didnt know existed. He's much better at emotional resonance than most give him credit for.

meanwhile this is all blatant wish fulfillment. But we're all entitled to a little indulgence, right?

Furrynomous 2016/11/20 22:14:53 No.1180028

>>1180021
Dude... I hope the artist of this comic comes here, because I just want to say I love these slice of life comics that actually gives us an insight of how you actually feel instead of neandering after literal dicks. Keep up the good shit man.

Royal 2016/11/20 23:36:18 No.1180056

>>1180028
he's certainly aware of this place. if i had to guess hes probably this guy: >>1178801

Furrynomous 2016/11/21 08:16:19 No.1180159

We need more of his comics in here.

Furrynomous 2016/11/21 13:01:40 No.1180309

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Furrynomous 2016/11/21 16:12:50 No.1180353

now this certainly looks weird and not because hurr hurr is this style. this is more like looking weird for the sake of looking weird

Furrynomous 2016/11/21 17:47:28 No.1180418

What the hell is the frame of reference that makes this stuff uncomfortably weird?
I just don't think it looks so damn "weird" and "ugly". It's cute and at most just sorta scruffy.

Michael Saunders 2016/11/21 18:12:27 No.1180424

>>1180418

I'm sort of on the opposite end. While I recognize that it may be cute and a good story, but in my opinion, the ugly visuals keep me away from it. Along with a good story, I like what I consider visuals to match the beauty of the story if that makes sense.

Furrynomous 2016/11/21 20:46:16 No.1180463

>>1180424

It is a little ugly, but in an endearing sort of way.
I think it has exactly what you mentioned, "visuals to match the beauty of the story."
The story is about something kinda ugly and the art matched, which is why I like it.

Michael Saunders 2016/11/21 22:24:18 No.1180509

>>1180463

And that's totally cool. But I personally don't find the visuals endearing. I don't want Ren & Stimpy visuals matched with the story of Circles is what I'm saying as an example.

Furrynomous 2016/11/22 09:43:08 No.1180670

>>1180509
not who you're replying to but i agree with you. the style doesn't go well with what's becoming of the story, if it was becoming pure smut as how it was at first then i wouldn't mind but the story tries to make us feel something for the characters and adding some romance which is not becoming the best choice of style now.

Furrynomous 2016/11/22 17:43:28 No.1180798

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Furrynomous 2016/11/24 02:00:03 No.1181363

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Furrynomous 2016/11/24 03:43:52 No.1181379

>>1181363
Yeah. That's a lot of semen.

Furrynomous 2016/11/24 05:16:53 No.1181598

Oh great, they fucked the koala. Now they both have chlamydia...

Edited at 2016/11/24 05:17:12

Furrynomous 2016/11/24 10:16:40 No.1181749

>>1181598
is not like they'll have anything else to do with their life except for fucking

Furrynomous 2016/11/25 16:01:20 No.1182185

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Furrynomous 2016/11/25 22:40:56 No.1182302

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and they didn't even screw in the brig, what gives

Flash 2016/11/27 07:29:01 No.1182789

Call the art style what der you want. I love it.

Okay... for all this sex in it I lack quiet some boner and so it might not be the sexiest one out there but the story is appealing. I hope it will go one a while and I want to thank the artist for sharing this with the world. Keep going.
Even though I personally think your talent is more with humorous and relationship/story driven comics than sheer banging :D

Furrynomous 2016/11/27 15:56:56 No.1182950

Come for stocky marsupial ass.
Stay for clever storytelling.

Furrynomous 2016/11/27 17:23:03 No.1182972

So this sub sect of the navy is strict enough to discharge a member for being late but lax enough to have a ship member who is, for all intents and purposes, a prostitute..?

(still like the comic tho lmao)

Furrynomous 2016/11/28 15:27:52 No.1183308

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Furrynomous 2016/11/29 19:11:42 No.1184099

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Furrynomous 2016/11/29 20:05:46 No.1184118

He's an official navy prostitute, though. Being such a slut outside is just like spreading military secrets.

Loose ass sink ships in this case.

Furrynomous 2016/11/30 23:48:28 No.1184631

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Good work ethic

Royal 2016/12/01 00:06:43 No.1184636

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>>1184631
a brief moment of insight into the consequences of poor decision making in a repressed world the character (and by extention the author) inhabits, and its resolved with more gay sex. Way to throw away any intrigue you had going into this.

Why even bother throwing in this moment of drama?

Furrynomous 2016/12/01 00:20:38 No.1184641

>>1184636
I for one just can't get it up if my porn doesn't have deep, complex character arcs, nuanced plots and intellectually stimulatiahahahahaahah faggot

Furrynomous 2016/12/01 01:23:09 No.1184653

>>1184641
>>1184636

I've said it before and I'll undoubtedly say it again.

If you're going to have plot in your porn, you gotta make sure it's at least decent plot. Bad plot just detracts from porn.

That having been said, though, this is actually a pretty good plot as far as porn is concerned. Like, the porn itself is awful, I honestly can't fathom that anyone finds this actually sexy, but some people obviously must. But it's funny when it needs to be, has characters with personalities, and establishes a setting and is pretty spot on in its depiction.

You know, aside the obvious "military-sanctioned cumdump" thing.

Edited at 2016/12/01 01:27:11

Extra Duty RBN 2016/12/01 17:32:25 No.1184871

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Michael Saunders 2016/12/02 04:23:37 No.1185027

>>1184871

That Lynx's face is one only a mother could love.

Edited at 2016/12/02 05:18:44

Furrynomous 2016/12/02 04:25:23 No.1185028

>>1185027
considering the ears, i believe he's a lynx.

Michael Saunders 2016/12/02 05:19:24 No.1185036

>>1185028

Edited, but other than my mistake, what I said still stands.

Furrynomous 2016/12/02 09:03:04 No.1185092

>>1185027

The lynx...and every other character in this comic?

Furrynomous 2016/12/02 19:59:10 No.1185310

>>1185027

Considering context, shouldn't it be "only a daddy could love"?

Furrynomous 2016/12/04 16:00:59 No.1185948

File: brogulls_u18chan.png - (249.57kb, 913x483, brogulls.png)

CROSSOVERRRRR

Furrynomous 2016/12/12 16:01:41 No.1189909

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New page yay!

Furrynomous 2016/12/13 16:23:25 No.1190230

bunch of fucking dead-eyed mooks

Furrynomous 2016/12/13 16:32:40 No.1190233

>>1190230

the posters, or the characters?

Because we're not dead-eyed, we're just waiting in suspense.
and the characters all have pretty damn expressive eyes.

So what the hell you on about? lol

Furrynomous 2016/12/14 02:32:16 No.1190400

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all fun and games when it's just his unit. shit gets serious when the captain is involved.

Furrynomous 2016/12/14 02:32:17 No.1190401

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>>1190400

Furrynomous 2016/12/14 02:32:19 No.1190402

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>>1190400

Furrynomous 2016/12/14 13:45:04 No.1190656

>>1190400

Looking a little scruffy there, Cap'n. Taking advantasge of position of power to not groom too well?

Furrynomous 2016/12/15 01:28:00 No.1191002

File: seamanhardyssemen_u18chan.jpg - (199.96kb, 620x809, seamanhardy'ssemen.jpg)

Sketchy fanart of Seaman Hardy!

Coppertop 2016/12/15 09:55:54 No.1191153

>>1190656
To be the captain of the scruffiest looking crew in recent furry history, he must exemplify the very essence of scruff.

Furrynomous 2016/12/15 14:47:03 No.1191228

>>1191153

Gotta be the toughest buffest scruff to come up to snuff with these roughs.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 05:22:15 No.1191452

I love the inconspicuous velvet curtain in his office used exclusively for dramatic reveals. Also the most generic crate design ever.

That being said, I actually do really like this lion guy. He's the only top-heavy character in the comic so far, and he has this control/consequence that was lacking from the comic before.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 13:23:04 No.1191651

>>1191452

I know, right? That curtain going unacknowledged but just right there for a whole page and a half made me laugh.

And yeah-- that lion sure knows how to calmly assert authority. Just the difference of stature sets him apart.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 19:49:52 No.1191716

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>>1190402

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 19:50:21 No.1191717

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>>1191716

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 19:50:40 No.1191718

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>>1191717

Edited at 2016/12/16 19:51:18

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 19:52:55 No.1191719

Bad ending :(

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:07:02 No.1191722

Wow. I think we've been told. I'm actually let down.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:07:27 No.1191723

About sums up the u18chan commentary.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:34:29 No.1191727

so an artist decides to shut down a free comic, not because the artist got tired or has an artist block but because of what some anonymous people from somewhere said about his comic?

damn

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:35:04 No.1191728

Good job, all. :1

Really wiped the ugliness out, what a service you've rendered.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:38:57 No.1191730

>>1191727

He got tired of doing it exactly because of what anonymous douches have said and repeated like so many picky prissy babies. So if that was what most of the response was, why bother continuing?

It just sucks that it got to him.

>>1191723

In-fuckin-deed

Wulfy 2016/12/16 20:39:24 No.1191731

>>1191723
While I could be wrong, I think the average anon was curious if not a bit impressed by what has been going on in this comic. People commented how accurate various aspects of the navy were, and I found the entire situation appealing more so than the art. The art itself has never been particularly garbage, and I found the appeal to a rin and stimpy style to actually be a fun and nice change. But, I suppose it's whatever the artist wants to do for whatever reason he had.

I don't know if he meant people here or elsewhere, but yeah, bad end is a sadness. I was getting really excited for where he was taking this. Oh well, but looking forward to what else he does.

-Wulfy

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:47:44 No.1191735

>>1191731

Negativity speaks a lot louder and overshadows everything else. There's plenty of praise around, but honestly, there's more than enough shit-talking about the plot and (intentionally) puggish style. Can't really blame someone for deciding to pull the plug in general.

But to be honest, letting internet commentary get to you is poor form. Moreso is to show that you've let it get to you. It'd be downright pathetic if U18chan commentary in particular squeezed this response out of Brokowski given what a tiny minority the commentors around here actually are in comparison to the furry, more particularly gay furry, community. The spaz-tastic shit-talking is to be expected, regardless of whether or not its deserved.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:52:23 No.1191737

>>1191731

It was in response to people on here. He even made a more oblique response to recurrent comments on here earlier in the comic.
It seemed to me like the most vocal readers here were the ones who gave it at best backhanded compliments.

Yeah, though, I really wish he took to heart the people who were impressed with the down-to-earth detail of the comic (epsecially the folks actually from the navy who noticed a bunch of real details) and the few who were actually really enthusiastic about it, rather than the millionth "this is sooooo ugly, but still kinda hot lol" comment or the people acting like there's a pacing problem when there's one page without a dick.
In a silly cartoony porn comic, it's pretty cool to have that kind of realism.

It really is super well made and obviously had a lot of thought and work put into it, whatever anatomical issues aside.

Hope he keeps soldierin' on, fuckers on here aside.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 20:57:14 No.1191738

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>>1191719

You chose this yourselves.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:10:11 No.1191746

I hope Brokowski starts another comic soon. I really like his style of writing.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:16:16 No.1191750

This is the best ending I've seen all year: I'll actually have to read this comic now, since I only just saw the ending without looking at the rest first.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:25:01 No.1191756

One has to be pretty upset to write a series of strips in succession specifically to give readers a big "fuck you." It's well deserved, mind. Just hope the guy learns not to shove his nose in the gutter and expect to find diamonds as he apparently did when he came here.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:27:40 No.1191758

>>1191756
I thought it was more humorous than malicious.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:36:49 No.1191763

>>1191758

It can be both.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 21:43:11 No.1191764

>>1191758

If it wasn't malicious, then why abruptly end the comic? Oh sure, there are alternate explanations like maybe he was going to do that anyway and decided to take the chance to deliver a big ol' middle finger, but that's quite a bit of work for some random dudes on the internet.

Could have just ignored it like most artists/youtubers/etc. and kept on trucking and continuing the comic--or he could have just cut the chord without a word or image of explanation. But he didn't. One doesn't have to stomp his foot, slam a series of doors and scream at the top of his lungs to be malicious--it can be perfectly tongue-in-cheek, like this ending.

Bottom line is this though: Why bother with this? If it's true that he's addressing U18chan specifically, it's really kinda sad that he let it get to him and even more sad that he let himself get baited.

demonskye 2016/12/16 21:55:29 No.1191766

I'm disappointed. i was enjoying the comic.. thanks for pissing the artist off you tools.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 22:19:39 No.1191775

>>1157052
That ethernet cable feel. A pain to put together if not practiced.
>>1180021
>wish fulfillment
If it's that, that's some hardcore stuff. I haven't seen a comic written by someone that much of a sub, if so. But I don't see it as wish fulfillment.

Overall, I just read the entirety of this comic and found it completely amusing. It was definitely satirical, and I enjoyed it. I didn't find it sexual at all, so the grotesqueness of the characters only adds to the beauty of the satire.
I loved this. Good end too.

TNM !!h4tCrV4qc6 2016/12/16 22:21:59 No.1191777

>>1191766
I think the artist pissed themselves off alone.

The real world does not guarantee that you'll get "nice" comments only, so you have to release your work in a leap of faith kind of way.

Also, is anyone going to mention how the artist is punishing his fans for other people's comments?

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 22:24:53 No.1191778

>>1191766

I guess anons like you and I should have been more vocal with praise.

And it still baffles me how anyone finds this "grotesque". I just don't get it at all.

Furrynomous 2016/12/16 23:58:27 No.1191799

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well shit. I had some comments on the staging of page 46, but if i post it now, brok is gonna fucking kill himself.

didnt think the trolls would get to him

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 00:58:46 No.1191805

Oh no people on the internet were mean to me and now I have to cancel the project I enjoyed doing for people that enjoyed it because I can't take mean words. Does the artist even hear themselves?

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 01:28:37 No.1191807

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In the end everybody loses! Except the actual trolls who probably got everything they wanted and maybe more with the small amount of drama this might produce.

I don't think I really mind this ending, the story wasn't that compelling and if it wasn't that big of a deal to the artist, not mattering enough for him to end it like this, I don't see why it should be a big of a deal to me. I'm certainly not going to go kiss his ass so he'll finish this.
Hopefully this wont make things worse for him in the future, hopefully he wont cave in the future. Best case scenario, the obnoxious people who hate him, his work, and can't get over themselves will get bored and move on to something else, and he continues doing whatever he enjoys doing.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 02:11:47 No.1191818

Personally, I'm really enjoying u18chan's turmoil over this ending. What a bonus to these last few pages~

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 02:18:56 No.1191819

if this was his way to give the middle finger to us, he failed completely because now we know the artist can't take any mean words made by random people on the internet. This ending is his loss, not ours, he could've continue as a way to piss us off but he didn't, he gave in an now we know what to do next time we wants to make a new comic. He tied the noose himself

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 02:31:56 No.1191828

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Oh my god, this ending was perfection.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 02:52:31 No.1191849

As far as petty "fuck off"s go, it was at least pretty humorous. I wish something came of it as actually having something really genuinely build with Hardy and Aubry actually made it pretty interesting.

Honestly I don't really think anybody on here who is just flippantly going "lol way to feed the trolls" at this would exactly fare much better, self-esteem wise, if a random bitchy image-board was your main readership (and even they mostly gave back-handed compliments and Ren and Stimpy references ad nauseum). Easy enough to say yourself, but it's hard to not take it to heart if you're getting so much flack while boring crap like BroGulls is fawned over like it's deep or well-told.

Gotta love the navy-folks vouching for this story's verisimilitude in the details, though. (if only the main-plot was actually accurate though! Haha)

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 04:19:10 No.1191907

I read every single thing posted on his FA. It all fits together.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 04:44:35 No.1191910

>>1191718
Well it was decent until this happened. Of course he could always continue it whenever. His art might be odd but it's good unlike the huge amount of art that looks like garbage.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 05:59:46 No.1191917

Dude... What happened!?

People are just shit, giving him only bad comments about this comic. I really really enjoyed his style. It was like Ren and stimpy: bizarre but yet artistic. It wasn't a fap material everybody knows that!!!! It was a pretty interesting comic with the great dialogue (not so deep though) and the peculiarity of the characters and the way this comic was drwan.

Oooooh but watch out you troll a girly character from a femboy comic, like almost all the furry yaoi comic out there. These people who trolled this comic I bet they protect with their cyber lives these kind of shit. They state "LEVAE THEM ALONE!!!! THEY'RE HOT AND PRETTY!!!"

Im gonna say this once: these guys ever watxhed Ren and stimpy? If they do, such hypocrites they are. If they don't, well... They're just retarded kiddos with no sense of humor or at least a bit knowledge about comic art

Flash 2016/12/17 06:45:00 No.1191920

Wasn't the reaction overall pretty positive on this comic? I thought so. Ugly isn't some generally negative word. At least not in art. Unaesthetic is negative but not ugly. This was never unaesthetic since the ugliness was the aesthetics of it. Or parts of it.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 06:52:16 No.1191922

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Thanks to you assholes the only decent comic we have left is Brogulls.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 08:42:29 No.1191930

Billionth'ing the Ren & Stimpy comments. Not sure what the guy was thinking in adapting an intentionally hideous gag cartoon style to genuine porn. If you use a joke style then you shouldn't be surprised when people laugh at it. But still, pumping out that many pages that quickly is impressive no matter the quality. I daresay he could even rival palcomix with that sort of speed.

I keep trying to remember episodes of Ren & Stimpy and I just come up with episodes of 2 Stupid Dogs. The only memories I seem to have retained from Ren & Stimpy are the catchy commercial breaks. And now I can't get the 'log song' out of my head.

Garnet Furrynomous 2016/12/17 08:48:42 No.1191933

Good, now we don't have to look at these abominations ever again

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 09:03:56 No.1191934

>>1191849
>while boring crap like BroGulls is fawned over like it's deep or well-told.

Uh...no, the general reaction to that comic is not that it's deep or well-told.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 09:16:57 No.1191937

>>1191933

Wow and people wonder why everyone on u18chan are complete assholes...

Edited at 2016/12/17 12:25:05

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 09:56:13 No.1191941

>>1191937

Eh. That user is particularly queeny and should be ignored wherever it shows up.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 10:19:14 No.1191945

File: lol_0_u18chan.png - (698.28kb, 1090x376, lol.png)

this whole development, fucking lmao

>>1191717
Is that a piece of fur on a his fucking eyeball

Garnet Furrynomous 2016/12/17 11:07:41 No.1191956

>>1191937

Author asked for it.

>>1191945

No, it's a collagen fiber

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 12:13:04 No.1191965

>>1191930

I always got more of a Rocko's Modern Life vibe from this than Ren and Stimpy, stylistically.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 12:21:12 No.1191966

don't blame u18chan for making the artist quit his comic, i don't get why people take u18chan this seriously for a few who kept complaining. This is u18chan, this is not a hivemind where people agreed to each other's comment. Go to any comic thread and you'll see how divided it is, not everyone likes or hate the comic. Brokowski made a bad decision giving priority to u18chan and let take control on wherever the comic should continue or stop. Any artist that takes u18chan comments this serious shouldn't even post anything online.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 12:41:15 No.1191972

There isn't reason to blame U18chan for being a cesspit. But that doesn't change the fact that it is a cesspit. Artist shouldn't really have expected anything else.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 13:15:34 No.1191978

There is a complete mix of cartoon influences here, someone added rockos modern life and hes eight. Also you can include real monsters. Those were funny and bizarre and everyone liked it. Why the hell shit headed peeps appeared to troll this comic. I wonder is they just want to sit and watch the world burn

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 14:10:18 No.1191995

>>1191972
im not saying u18chan is a nice place but it shouldn't be the best source of feedback for any artist unless it can handle any (constructive) criticism.

Garnet Furrynomous 2016/12/17 14:10:31 No.1191996

>>1191978

I would prefer if the world was blown up by tornadoes, actually

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 15:18:34 No.1192024

>>1191995

I don't think any criticism in here has been constructive. A lot more "this is so grotesque, who the hell thinks this is sexy?" than "maybe working on anatomy would help make it sexier" .

It's still super petty, in the end, and a chan-board is certainly no place to get gentle guidance/feedback or thoughtful close reading, but it's not like he put this up here himself. It's too bad that shitposting got to him; he needs to roll with the punches with less vindictiveness, and trolls could use a little empathy and not act like a stoic asshole when someone reacts badly to their prodding like "only you are responsible for your feelings" . Fuck right off.

Royal 2016/12/17 16:36:44 No.1192035

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>>1191718
Aw c'mon buddy, has Nick Wilde taught you nothing?

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 16:53:35 No.1192042

File: owthedge_u18chan.jpg - (28.55kb, 400x366, owthedge.jpg)

>>1191996
>>1192035

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 17:48:34 No.1192069

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Furrynomous 2016/12/17 18:07:28 No.1192073

>>1192069
oh brokowki, you think you are being so witty having a knee slap of us but i can sense the butthurt from here

Garnet Furrynomous 2016/12/17 18:30:57 No.1192081

>>1192069

What is this mocking again? I honestly can't tell

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 18:52:18 No.1192089

>>1192081

Looks like he's mocking the Brogulls comic (they're in the same exact position) but I don't see how that would be a jab towards us.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 19:05:03 No.1192106

>>1192089

Possibly...

>>1191922
>>1191849
>Easy enough to say yourself, but it's hard to not take it to heart if you're getting so much flack while boring crap like BroGulls is fawned over like it's deep or well-told.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 19:05:34 No.1192107

>>1192089

No I'm pretty sure it's making fun of Golden Week.

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 19:08:37 No.1192108

>people whiteknighting for an artist who isn't even upset and is enjoying this
Stop whiteknighting. It doesn't do anything good for anyone, including yourself and the artist.

Garnet Furrynomous 2016/12/17 19:12:23 No.1192109

>>1192089
>>1192107

There was that webcomic by Wagnermutt with an "extra" whatever, but I don't think it's being updated

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 19:37:15 No.1192137

>>1192108

Liking something enough to say nice shit about it! What an awful unnecessary thing to put on the internet!

Licks 2016/12/17 20:06:40 No.1192175

>>1192137
let the angsty flow!

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 20:08:29 No.1192177

>>1192175

Publicity!!!

Royal 2016/12/17 20:24:15 No.1192185

File: yousureshowedus_u18chan.png - (378.89kb, 1274x825, you sure showed us.PNG)

>>1192175
and flow the angst shall~

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 21:08:23 No.1192197

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Furrynomous 2016/12/17 21:14:29 No.1192199

imagine if all artists sabotaged their own masterpieces whenever someone said something mean

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 23:25:13 No.1192235

is brokowski the next baraking?
man, furry artist really need to understand not everyone will like their work but feeding the trolls is not a good comeback, it makes you a lolcow

Furrynomous 2016/12/17 23:47:54 No.1192242

>>1192235

Probably just a straw that broke the camel's back thing. If the response here was given to some earlier thing maybe he'd have just went "lol, whatever" , but right here and now it hit a nerve enough to directly reply in the work. Which is lame. Too bad he had a moment of weakness right when a big dumb thread was started for his work.

Edited at 2016/12/17 23:52:09

Furrynomous 2016/12/18 02:59:28 No.1192371

>>1192242
he should learn from seasalt and aaron, as much shit is thrown at them, they continue because is their works that help them grow (monetary, popularity, artistically etc) and not by throwing a tantrum over an anonymous board

Furrynomous 2016/12/18 08:57:59 No.1192430

>>1192235
>feeding the trolls is not a good comeback, it makes you a lolcow

1/4 of this thread is nothing but people getting upset over a joke ending while the author is clearly having fun with it. Ask yourself who's the real lolcow in this situation.

Furrynomous 2016/12/18 17:14:29 No.1192643

>>1192430
>>1192430
>1/4 of this thread is nothing but people getting upset over a joke ending while the author is clearly having fun with it

>his last pages were about pointing out people criticizing his comic and slaps the end
>author having fun with it
>posting stuff posted in u18chan

You are delusional

Furrynomous 2016/12/18 18:50:55 No.1192684

>>1192643
If you looked at the artist's FA, you can see the artist is clearly having fun and milking lolcows of multiple types on U18chan.

Furrynomous 2016/12/18 22:50:15 No.1192787

hey guys, Carly Simon wrote this song for you.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j13oJajXx0M

>salty, bitter, queens

Furrynomous 2016/12/19 00:12:02 No.1192813

File: maxresdefault_6_u18chan.jpg - (34.23kb, 1282x723, maxresdefault.jpg)

The trolls wanted to get to him and they did. They got to him so much, that he ruined the ending if his best comic to say fuck you. But that didn't piss off the trolls, its what they wanted, to get under his skin.

Now the fans, like myself, who were looking forward to new pages, get the big fuck you as well.

Luckily he still has fans that are going to continue liking him because/in spite of his decision, but I'm out.

Best of luck.

In B4 "bye felicia"

Furrynomous 2016/12/19 00:19:43 No.1192817

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Furrynomous 2016/12/19 17:30:40 No.1193099

I think the problem with this comic is that it literally has no redeeming factor behind the hideous art style.
Borowski tries to sort of hide behind snarky writing but it's all just a cheap trick to hide the fact that it's nothing more than a shallow smut comic. That you can't even fap to, no less.
He deserved the hate. Good riddance.

TNM !!h4tCrV4qc6 2016/12/19 19:41:56 No.1193149

>>1192813
I can see some people that do understand who's the real victim here. Nice

Furrynomous 2016/12/19 22:29:02 No.1193284

>>1192817

underrated post

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 00:52:58 No.1193316

>>1193099
>I can't fap to it, therefore he's not allowed to create it or host it on a public site I happen to browse

You realize that's insane, right?

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 01:05:06 No.1193319

Whether or not Brok is "messing around with the trolls" is irrelevant to the fact that he let negative criticism hijack his project, and that ruined the experience for his fans.

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 01:51:24 No.1193330

>>1192817
that made me laugh

>>1192684
If you think Brokowski got a good laugh at u18chan, then i don't know if we are in the same thread because what I'm seeing here, he ended his comic abruptly over some criticism leaving his fans with desire to know more which they might never get over his "fun with lolcows at u18chan" like you said.
He gave in to the trolls, he ruined his comic and people who were genuinely interested in the comic will have to comfort to what they had for an ending. If this is Brokowski way to have fun with u18chan then in the end it was all his lost because for u18chan they will move on to another comic.

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 04:42:29 No.1193358

>>1193149
When you tell a story, you take the listener through it as well. They become at least a little bit invested in the story.

Extra duty was also a comic that was release page by page over a few months.

Imagine someone building a nice sand castle over the course of 3 months and then smashing it out of anger right before its done. Why should anyone sit through another?

Fans have a right to be disappointed, not that they need your permission.

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 04:45:26 No.1193359

Imagine you were getting slowly jerked off for three hours, and right before you cum, they stuff your dick back into your pants and then throw a handful of sawdust in there as well.

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 08:37:51 No.1193384

>>1192813
>be faggot
>get easily offended
>shit everything you've done because someone called you a poopoohead

wew lad

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 09:14:00 No.1193394

>>1193330
>u18chan they will move on to another comic

Clearly, as evidenced by this thread.

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 15:37:25 No.1193502

>>1193394

i didn't say now, it might take time, but right now this thread is still active not because of the comic but what came after the comic which is the artist quitting his project

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 17:02:29 No.1193535

>>1193502

By putting that ending in, isn't this drama sorta part of the comic as well?

>>1192817

and lol, good tl;dr of this thread

Furrynomous 2016/12/20 23:50:35 No.1193675

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So, in an attempt to make positive criticism for this comic because I do actually enjoy reading, I think the comic's main problem is its staging, the worst of which is on page 46:
>>1190402

Both the panel of Aubry's ass and the final panel seem to be from a perspective behind the wall. The last panel may actually be from a small space in between the crates and the wall; but if it is, it's very distorted, making it hard to tell. Either way I think a better camera angle for Aubry's ass shot would be one perpendicular the right side of the crate and slightly above the crate; a better shot for the final panel would be better at the height of the Keefer (the lion) and to the left of Hardy. That way we could get a good spectives of their heights and the depth of the ''closet'' space they're in.

Speaking of the ''closet,'' I don't think Brok really knows how deep it is. Aubry's foot clearly extends past where the curtain would end, and his foot is not seen in any of the previous pages. And Aubry's leg seems to be as long as Keefer's which would imply they are roughly the same height.; but this can't be because Aubry and Hardy are shown to be approximately the same height, and Hardy is shown to be noticeably smaller than Keefer.

Another thing is the crates. The first time they're shown they appear to be about flush with the wall. But in the final panel, it appears there's a noticeable amount of space between the back of the crate and the wall, enough for Hardy's tail to go behind the crate. And Aubry appears to be leaning against the wall, but the final shot makes it seem as though either 1) he is leaning through where the wall should be or 2), the less likely option, he isn't leaning against the wall and is just leaning back and supporting himself with his core body strength ...?

Anyway, it's not like any of this it ruins the comic for me; it's just kind of distracting and confusing for this page.

tl;dr I'm a faggot who spent too much time on this please kill me

Edited at 2016/12/21 22:58:32

Furrynomous 2016/12/21 12:12:56 No.1193781

>>1193675

I'm just impressed how much detail you put into this! Definitely something I've noticed too-- the inconsistant sizes of people especially. Never broke the comic for me, but worth noting. And wow-- constructive criticism for the first time in this entire thread. Good!

Furrynomous 2016/12/30 21:17:41 No.1197588

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>>1191718

if we shadows... well done, sir.
keep doing what you do.

Edited at 2016/12/30 21:37:58

Furrynomous 2016/12/30 22:05:26 No.1197609

>>1193781
I sort of assumed that all of those 'mistakes' were intentional given that they're all so pervasive and obvious... You don't need an artists eye to catch that shit...

Furrynomous 2016/12/30 23:32:20 No.1197640

>>1197588

He's an honest puck

Furrynomous 2016/12/31 00:02:13 No.1197653

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>>1197640

Oh!
Someone who can appreciate? I'll be damned.

Know my favorite?

"Now get you to my lady's chamber, and tell her, let her paint an inch thick, to this favor she must come. Make her laugh at that."

Ha.

Furrynomous 2016/12/31 01:38:23 No.1197706

>>1197653

My favorite is:
"Come on; tune: if you can penetrate her with your
fingering, so; we'll try with tongue too"

Furrynomous 2021/01/06 00:24:44 No.1876087

>>1180021
I like this guy's stuff in this art style. Mood.

Furrynomous 2021/01/06 07:51:11 No.1876230

When people complain about the art in FIFO, I hope they can at least acknowledge how far Brokowski has come since Extra Duty.

Furrynomous 2021/01/06 11:02:09 No.1876301

Well I only found out about brokowski and FIFO like last week, and thanks to these new comments at least I could read his older stuff. It's a shame that the negative comments got to him so much by the end. I'll try to remember that before commenting on anything of his newer stuff...

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