Glad I wasn't the only one with something to say about that last sex scene lol. Honestly the cute finn boy got me interested from page 1. The character designs are pretty nice, and the art is nice enough as well. And I definitely agree with >>1207186. I'm glad he pointed it out cause I missed it the first time. It's a nice little detail, storytelling and art-wise, and it's those little things that are really cool and make a goody story... when everything else isn't so lacking.
When I saw they were getting to lewds already in the 2nd page, I actually started just reading through the comic to see if there was anything more to it then porn, because I do like cutesy and romantic stuff, and "porn with plot." And yeah, pacing and transitions, and the storytelling in general, is pretty lacking... and to that end it's somewhat disappointing.
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