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Not only are his plots bizarre nonsense to the nth degree, but the guy just cannot do a proper transition to save his life. There are sudden cutaways to different things, or scenes just end abruptly to go to another scene that has already seemingly begun out of the reader's sight without any real cohesion, no follow-through, it makes it feel as though there are pages missing in his comics when there really aren't. That also has the added effect of making sex scenes (the one thing he knows how to draw real well) seem so short. I mean, his comics are all essentially tons of sex scenes one after another, but each one feels so short; one or two panels of foreplay, one or two panels of sucking and/or rimming, one or two panels of fucking, one panel of cumming, all done, often in just one or two pages only. That makes it a lot less fun to just ignore the bad writing and enjoy only the porn itself, makes me wish he'd make each individual sex scene last longer.
Edited at 2020/08/22 01:16:37
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