Yeah, this one is a little weird. In concept, it's great, but its execution is sloppy. Why is his crotch featureless when he's flaccid? That's not how sheaths work and this is PORN. The junk should be visible when exposed. We are shown an attractive muscular form for the demon, yet he decides to remain the size of a damn toddler. The demon brutalizes the wolf in a way that, despite the healing, is downright mean-spirited and needlessly harsh. It leaves him a karma Houdini despite deserving a serious beat-down. The masturbation was a poor choice for the sole focus of the milking. It is one of the less- interesting ways to milk, individual tastes aside, and he barely does anything else. The magically-enhanced pleasure is a lazy way to get the wolf to be overcome with pleasure. Yes, in-story the wolf feels amazing from those touches, but the readers see just a simple jerking and minor groping. The situation is hot as hell, with the implicit backstory of the demon constantly assaulting them for their cum, the bondage, and the idea of milking, and I still mostly enjoy it, but it could have been much better.
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