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World Is Made By Bears - Chapter 2: Conflict Furrynomous 2017/09/10 21:47:02 No.1320054   
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Furrynomous 2017/09/10 21:47:27 No.1320055
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Furrynomous 2017/09/10 21:47:48 No.1320056
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Furrynomous 2017/09/10 21:48:06 No.1320057
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Furrynomous 2017/09/10 21:48:29 No.1320058
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whssd sadgaaga 2017/09/11 03:28:55 No.1320161
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Furrynomous 2017/09/19 21:09:20 No.1323035
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Furrynomous 2017/09/19 22:35:10 No.1323080
This is the worst drawn We bare bears fanfic ever. He needs to work on his anatomy...
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Furrynomous 2017/09/20 01:30:18 No.1323153
>>1323080
The dialogue is what kills it for me. Nobody talks like that. Either the artist has never actually had sex, or has very specific ideas about what the characters are thinking that they can't bear to leave it ambiguous.

People don't think while they're having sex. They act. If you can't express it in a short, verbal sentence or in the art itself, leave it out. It's not necessary.

Sex scenes are action scenes. You don't read a comic book with an extended conversation happening during the big superhero brawl, or a verbose inner monologue while punching the bad guy in the face. Any dialogue should enhance the scene, not explain it. Don't have the characters say what they're about to do next, show it with additional panels.

In every art piece, the drawings should be the centerpiece, not the words. The gist of the story should be apparent even if the speech bubbles were removed.
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Furrynomous 2017/09/20 01:36:20 No.1323157
>>1323153
if ur not talking during sex i feel that'd be very awkward

the dialogue in this comic is stilted and not lifelike unless you think sex is exactly like how it is in porn movies

but if you're not talking during sex you're doing something wrong. communicating w/ partner is very important
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Furrynomous 2017/09/20 02:10:51 No.1323160
>>1323157
Of course people talk during sex, but it's not the same as normal conversation, and certainly not "Umm, your pinky hole looks so yummy".

Sex talk is short and to the point. People don't describe what is happening to them out loud. They experience it. There's a difference between communicating with your partner and needless exposition.

It's painfully obvious that the artist is using the dialogue to shoehorn in more information about the scene. We don't need the character to tell us that his tongue is warm. We don't need him say that his ass is soft. If the artist wanted to make sure the audience understood that the character's asshole looks tasty, then they should let the image communicate that, not the character.
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Furrynomous 2017/10/01 19:14:00 No.1327974
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Furrynomous 2017/10/03 10:03:46 No.1328804
>>1323160

You've never... watched porn before, have you?

It's just like this.
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Alex 2017/10/03 21:44:50 No.1329111
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World Is Made By Bears - Chapter 2 Comic Support Superstar Supporter 2017/10/05 10:27:34 No.1329865
I actually like it unlike all you hypocritical people. Doesn't matter if it describes whatever happened because some of us like details. Character alongside story and plot can be awesome with this artist on that fandom. Don't ruin a great comic among our useless ones because this one is the only one I liked reading so far right now around here.
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Alex 2017/10/12 21:25:51 No.1332999
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Alex 2017/10/12 21:25:53 No.1333000
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Furrynomous 2017/12/02 17:36:12 No.1355883
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Furrynomous 2018/09/22 19:23:27 No.1497104
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Furrynomous 2018/09/22 19:23:30 No.1497106
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