The basic premise is retarded.
The most embarrassing moment of this guy's life was when someone noticed he had a boner as a kid? Do you know how many people would kill to have that be the "most embarrassing thing" to ever happen to them? And it somehow ruined his life? He never got over it, even into adulthood?
This seems to come up every time this guy's work shows up here, but he CAN NOT write a halfway decent story to save his life. Stick to simple porn plots, Rookie. Collaborate with a writer if you absolutely have to do something more complex, but please stop trying to write your own plots.
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