Ok... the comic looks nice. Ruadri has his drawing style, his story... it's all ok for me.
What personally I don't like is the ammount of text around each page. It's nice that the author wants to share with us what he thinks but... what I mean... it's just a comic and... I have the feeling as if the author is writing the new Divine Commedy or painting the new Sistina Chapel and he has a lot of problems... I don't know exactly how to explain my feelings. It's just a comic... get relaxed and just focus on doing it in the way you can... your style isn't a problem, how you build your pages isn't a problem, how you tell your story isn't a problem... :)
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