Ok, when I read the first story way before the website crash, I didn't think much other then "Eh, it's cute and sorta interesting, but kinda bland." the second chapter had an updated style that was a bit better but again nothing too amazing. The third was in my opinion the best style and the story was actually interesting, though sadly from four onwards, it didn't really do much for me. Sure, it keeps updating the style here and there, the whole muscle-growth fetish is rather, I don't know, cringy? I'm not judging anybody who does like it and all, all I'm saying is that too much of something can be a bad thing.
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