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There is so much I want to gripe about. 1. Legosi is not Jack's Senpai, they are the same age. 2. there should be a better reason for Legosi to go in the room other than, "I just got here." Say something else like, "I came to get the remaining moving boxes." 3. Jack in the manga doesn't threaten to eat the onions, he uses them to force himself to cry, so the onions were used incorrectly. The manga ended on a chapter with Jack staring at a bag full of onions with a label saying Canine breeds should avoid them since they are lethal, but that was only for suspense and not attempt suicide.
I don't know how the story will go on, but if this is how it will keep progressing like, then count me out. I like Legosi x Jack art or stories, but not done poorly.
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