Yes, I re-edited the text from pages 5 through 13 Yes, I heavily edited the last two pages (I redrew the cum lol) Yes, I took some "artistic liberties" with the dialogue (mostly in the last two pages, I think they were just grunting or something idk) Yes, this was done with google translate (I don't know japanese) Yes, english isn't my native language (please comment how good or bad the translation was, also my editing!) Finally I did this just for fun, but I wnat to keep translating this series (if there is already a translation I wont touch it) Enjoy! --- https://e-hentai.org/g/1668409/3a97bdd6d6/
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