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This comic is a classic example why often who writes stories and who draws them are two different people: a scriptwriter and an artist.
Anhes is a skilled artist (even if, personally, after a while his drawings seem a bit repetitive to me), but he's totally a disaster in story telling.
This story is confused. I undestand that probably all this events happen in an alternative society of escorts and so on, an that there are characters envolved with feelings and personal stories, but... all this is told really badly.
These are the things that, in my opinion, are totally useless in this comic:
- the argue between Lug and the other guy. If Lug was so fond of Phan, it had to be told better;
- the marriage of Phan: WTF! What are we talking about? Why? Is this really that important to the story? I do not think so...
- The woman who watches her husband have sex with Phan: here too, WTF! This part is totally useless and could not be drawn.
How could this story be? Simple: Phan now works as an escor and briefly tells how he ended up doing it. It's his first time and he does sex with a guy who often goes to that club. After that, Phan thinks about whether all of this is what he wants to do. End. No weddings, no issues, no alternative societies, no weird things.
It's porn, not the Divine Comedy. It works as porn comic, it totally fails as something else.
Edited at 2021/03/05 03:30:08
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