Very bad use of oversaturated colors (especially the inside shots and the blush, my god these guys have a bleeding face), terrible proportions (still better than Aaron tho), cringy facial expressions he definitely took from reading too much manga,... He definitely progressed compared to some of his earlier works that were circulating around and being made fun of (reasonably so), but he really needs to upgrade his style at this point: it's just not good.
The subject matter's pretty awful too, but that's a personal taste thing only.
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