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I want to say the art is enjoyable upfront. Let me be clear, your colors are fun, and some of your faces esp with the shep are good.
If the artist ever reads this, my genuine critique would be that you will benefit from learning how to control the audience's eyes by controlling the flow of their eyes using composition techniques.
The first picture I frankly gave up trying to read or understand. I say that to be honest, not to be mean. The speech bubbles are all over the place and make absolutely no sense and it made me frustrated as a viewer. Focus on communication in your sequences.
I think you are painting these images first, and then doing dialog/speech as an after-thought and unfortunately that doesn't jive well with sequential arts.
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