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Our City Visual Novel Project Furrynomous 2018/09/08 07:06:54 No.1491776   
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Demo: http://www.mediafire.com/file/hy923oa2bcvsbe4/Our_City_Demo_%28ENGLISH%29.rar/file

Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/ourcityvs
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AlexNightmurr 2018/09/08 07:28:58 No.1491780
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So... what's it about?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/08 17:46:01 No.1492068
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move to the discussion board?
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Furrynomous 2018/09/08 18:31:47 No.1492092
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>>1491780
You're a country bum moving into the city with the help of your best and closest friend. He's the annoying jokester type of friend, but he's always there to help when needed.

some things to note:
-influenced by Vietnamese culture
-influenced by other furry VNs, namely the gay VNs as stated on their patreon
-game file is .exe, so for mac users, use a windows pc or wineskin
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Demos and how they work Ban-bang 2018/09/12 01:34:35 No.1493607
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A demo needs to be at least able to introduce the overall main story and some decent chunk of content before one calls it a "demo" when it comes to VNs. So far I have nothing in the demo to say but the animation's a bit too liquid.

And that's coming from an animation major. Don't make it a pain to view the characters. Animations placed on them is good but don't make it disorienting. Making them move a bit is already plenty.

And the demo needs WAY more content. Take a page from how After Years did it and make sure that you're able to give everyone enough info to expect from the VN.

That's all!

-Ban-bang (The 13th)
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Furrynomous 2018/09/12 02:14:56 No.1493613
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Oh shit I thought this said Owl City and was extremely confused...

Edit: And to my credit, it even looks like the album cover

Edited at 2018/09/12 02:20:08
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Furrynomous 2018/09/14 20:10:51 No.1494456
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>>1493607
Lol you do know this project just recently started. The origian Taiwanese version was just made recently, then the creator has to translate it to English. So before you say what this game needs. Give it a fair decent time before hand.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/14 21:25:05 No.1494483
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This game needs dick.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/15 05:48:16 No.1494586
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I won't even be surprised if there's some references of Owl City here and there.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/15 13:27:06 No.1494659
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>>1494456
>Taiwanese
lol its Vietnamese
At least other VN demos have the decency to introduce all of their main characters lol
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Furrynomous 2018/09/16 03:32:25 No.1494825
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>>1494659
My bad that was my mistake and I'd admit it but I still stand to be right. Other visual novel projects ask for money and had time to get all main characters together or just introduced all at once in the beginning lol. This projectjust started and never asked for money as it gives the demo away free to the public. It's a person choice to donate towards the project. If your not even donating then keep quite, and wait for the next free update your gonna download lol. We don't want a rushed project because we all know how that turns out (black gate).
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Furrynomous 2018/09/17 05:53:14 No.1495228
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>>1494825
Tennis Ace, Repeat, Extracurricular Activities, Echo introduced their cast of main characters, overall story direction and had a decent chunk of content in their very first demos that kept people interested in them.
This demo has introduced 1 character, half an hour of generic content, terrible animations, a clunky engine, zero hint of where the story is going and no hook to keep people interested.

Edited at 2018/09/17 09:09:03
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Thank you sir and here's more stuff. Ban-bang 2018/09/20 08:51:53 No.1496153
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>>1495228
Thank you good sir for actually picking up on my points unlike a certain someone. It's not that I am berating them but that it's more of a bad move that they didn't actually give incentive to the audience to be interested in it.

TBH I am doubtful about this project because of the start, the demo isn't really promising. That's the main issue I wanted to get across. If you want to get the audience for your VN and get those donations. You gotta make sure that your demo is good from the start.

This is why a lot of VNs tend to fail because of that same issue. Make at least a fair decent chunk for the audience to grasp the overall concept for the story, its characters, setting and overall appeal and to invest in your creation.

It's simple as this. A demo is short for demonstration. Substance goes a LONG way when it comes to it.
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Furrynomous 2018/09/21 12:51:29 No.1496509
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>>1496153
I'm pretty sure this thing is either gonna a) die because of the lack of interest and funding or b) the dev team push through and release the game, only for it to fall into obscurity.
The chances of this project succeeding is very low.
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1111 2018/10/13 03:38:58 No.1505248
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Oh, I don't even know what to think about it... Art looks good, but... That is all?..
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Furrynomous 2019/01/07 18:44:35 No.1536156
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There's an update for this
http://www.mediafire.com/file/w6re7g2arwdsz5h/Our+City+%28+English+%29.rar for the english ver
and https://twitter.com/ourcityfurryvs/status/1082127020111257601 for any other
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Furrynomous 2019/01/07 18:51:03 No.1536158
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I didn't notice someone posted the update here already.
Whoops
Link: http://www.mediafire.com/file/w6re7g2arwdsz5h/Our_City_(_English_).rar

Edited at 2019/01/07 18:55:26
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Furrynomous 2019/01/18 08:02:30 No.1540615
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This VN wasn't half bad, sure the english is a mess but that's to be expected, but it wasn't completely misunderstanding. I was able to get the important parts but too bad it ended so soon it was just getting good with Mr. Long...already I've picked my favorite, that's how I know its a good game LoL
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Furrynomous 2019/02/11 02:14:40 No.1550581
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Why does this feel like it was translated by a bunch of people? The translation's quality is all over the place. At first it was terrible, before becoming decent, then it became worse but still legible, and after a while, it just fucking crash and burn.
Did the translator just quit halfway through or something? The terrible translation is clearly done by the creator, as it's pretty similar to the engrish from the twitter account.
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Game needs to be focused Furrynomous 2019/05/08 10:37:27 No.1586563
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Honestly I don't expect much of this game since the game is still clunky and the team still needs to finish the translations more before adding more stuff and make it clearer like many other VNs. This team hasnt even finished this project halfway yet and they already working on a new VN called Our Secrets at the same time ... geez too ambitious yet they really should just focus on one damn game since its already going slow enough. It said the game is at Chapter 6 and we barely got to date any characters ... yikes . I feel like it should be a Prolough instead.
Im not hating the game or anything and I do hope the game would succed because this means a lot to the Vietnamesse Furry Community. These are just my opnions

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