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To be honest, the whole comic has a shitload of flaws to the point that their glaring! The (in the broadest interpretation ever) characters arent likable; the main character's trait boils down to "dumb bimbo" so anything learned will more than likely be forgoten, so development more than likely wont be a thing. The other characters have no personality traits other than "generic cumdumpster #". The one character that has something of a personality is the rabbit and he's just an asshole. Also, i feel as if i need to ask: if these characters are supposed to be trans or identify as female, why arent tits apart of the formula? in these futuristic setting, are fake breasts/breast growth not a thing? Also, the slutty clothing is...fine i guess, but during certain scenes its distracting such as during the hospital visit and the funeral. Also how is the virus ONLY affecting males and not the females or fembois? Does it have to do with mentality or gender? If its the former, that might explain it, but if its the latter then the fembois should also be infected.
i know im trying to insert logic into a furry porn story, but the thing is: if its just going to be porn, a plot or logic shouldnt be inserted. If you take the time to build up a setting, premise, etc then it should be given a bit more focus.
Also in regards to spelling and grammar, that kinda gets a pass as english is not the artist' first language.
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