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[ignore this post if you don't want to read an unsolicited critical analysis. Yes, I understand this is just a furry imageboard]
The artist clearly has an idea about illustration, but the comic is very, very poorly done:
>title in second panel, not first (assuming "Show Time" is the title)
>jarring """plot""" that appears for a couple of panels, disappears completely and reappears without transition in the last panel. Honestly would have been better without one
>odd facial expressions at times, mostly page1
>page2panel3: writing facial expression as an emoticon when their face is visible, which does not actually match their facial expression shown in that panel anyway
>page2panels 2 and 6: text seems to read in the wrong order
>page3 lower panels read on an odd order (bottom left before middle right), with no instructions.
>irrelevant, half-done doge meme, not even quoted by the canine character
>page4 punchline panel reads in wrong order
>onomatopoeia is not enclosed in asterisks, like they were in page2 (minor inconsistancy, I know)
>substantially-sized watermark on every page, which are all very easy to remove (I believe pages 2 and 3 are even placed on solid colour), defeating the purpose of having anything bigger than a signature on one page.
I won't bitch about anatomy, although I did notice some apparent oddities, but I will mention my biggest dislike about the comic:
Spoilerwhy the fuck do people still draw the eyebrows and eyes when they are covered by hair? The artist obviously understands perspective, so why do they don't they just put the eye layer under the fucking hair layer?
Still saving it though.
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