Also, your critique has been noted.
I don't disagree that the writing is a little stiff and awkward at times, it's a symptom of neither me nor my cowriter being experienced writers. Where we are right now is uncharted territory for me, and I'm learning as I go.
You don't need to worry about my reader trends, though, they're quite stable according to my analytics. And putting down ToT for Space Vixen would just lead to the exact same issue with Space Vixen, where I also have to work through what I'm doing.
TLDR; I'm working on it, have patience.
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